**RANJAN SS TERE LIYE part 10(nri exposed) - Page 6

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Just Loved Ur work Namrataji ,U r TTTOOO Good.God bless U.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Loved Ur writings vry vry much Namrataji,U r just Mind-Blasting.Keep it Up Sis.U r Mashallah God gifted talented lady.A big Thanx for Ur writings.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Anraysha

Loved Ur writings vry vry much Namrataji,U r just Mind-Blasting.Keep it Up Sis.U r Mashallah God gifted talented lady.A big Thanx for Ur writings.


thaks yar.. i will write more surely
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome
continue soon
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
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As they reach gunjans house.. they see many people waiting outside.. both ranvi and gunjan are bit tensed and look at each other not understanding what is the matter..

As they approach.. balwant sees both of them and suddenly everyone keep looking at them.. even ratan, veera and chaiji are also present..

Gunjan decides to speak up to her father.. but balwant comes ahead and holds her shoulders in happiness..

"gunjan puttar kahan chale gayi thi tum.. hum sab kitne pareshaan the puri raat"..

"who papaji" she tries to explain..

But suddenly .." gunjan.. kithe chali gayi thi tu.. hum sab pareshaan ho gaye the.. kina dhoonda tujhe humne sab jageh" dharam starts acting in front of the whole crowd..

Gunjan and ranvi both are shocked to see dharam..

" yeh yahan kya har rahein hain papaji" gunjan asks in a shock

" haan puttar.. yeh to kal hi yahan aa gaya tha.. aur hume bataya ki kuch gundon ne tumhe aagwah kar liya hai.. aur in sab ko bahut mara.."balwant says

Gunjan is shell shocked..

" woh to bhala ho ki ranvi puttar bhi utthe aa gaya aur unki gaddi ke peeche tumhe dhoondne nikal pada.." "hum to poori raat yahan pareshaan baithe the ki pata nahi tum dono ka ki haal hoga.. subah to police chowki mein bhi report darj kara diya humne" balwant says in full worry..

Sadly gunjan faintly remembers everything.. as she was drugged.. but surely she feels something is wrong with this entire part that dharam has told her father..

Ranvi is very angry.. he decides to tell everything to balwant right away.. but then he also fears that gunjan's reputation might get into question as so many other people are also present there..

Balwant goes to ranvi and hugs him for getting his daughter back safely..

Ratan holds ranvi's shoulders as he is bit infuriated.. " hume ghar chalna chahiye ranvi" she says and they disperse..

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Ranvi goes home and is sitting in his room disturbed.. just then veera enters..

" kya hua veerji.. aap inne pareshaan kyu hain?" she asks.. and sits next to him..

" veera.. who ladka.. dharam ek bahut bada jhoota aur dhokebaaz hai.." he says

Veera - kya?

Ranvi - haan veera.. kal gunjan ko koi gunde utha ke nahi le gaye the..

Ranvi narrates the entire incident to veera..

Veera is shocked to hear..

" to phir veerji aapne wahan yeh sab tayaji ko kyu nahi bataya? Gunjan didi ki zindagi ka sawaal hai" veera question

" who sahi samay nahi tha.. itne saare pind de log maujood the.. gunjan ki badnaami ho jaati.. par ab mein gunjan se bath karunga aur balwant tayaji se bhi"

He says and leaves to speak to balwant..

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Gunjan is in her room and trying to talk to bansuri about dharam ..

" beeji meri baat to suniye.. aapko pata nahi kal kya hua.. who to ranvi aa gaya.." gunjan tries to explain..

" bas gunjan menu sab kuch pata hai.. ek din to tumhare papaji se jhagad kar tumhe us dharam ke saath bahar bheja tha.. aur tu apna khayal nahi rakh payi" bansuri scolds..

" beeji menu sach mein sab kuch yaad nahi hai.. par who mera haath pakad raha tha.. aur kuch.. aur uthe ranvi aa gaya.. baad mein hum dono kisi jungle ke beech the.. jahan se wapas aane ka raasta nahi mila.. aur phir wahin uthe kisi jagah par puri raat hum tehere aur savere ghar aana ka raasta dhoondne lage" gunjan tries to explain to bansuri..

Bansuri's eyes widen in anger..

" bas gunjan.. jo hua so hua.. aur wiase bhi who tera hone wala pati hai.. thoda bahut agar tumhara haath pakadta hai to issme kaunsi museebat hai.. yeh mat bhool ki who videsh mein rehta hai aur wahan ke rehan sehan mein haath pakadna, jappi pana bahut aam baat hai.. aur tujhe bhi ussi rang mein dhalna hoga"

" aur jahan tak uss ranvi ki baat hai.. usse to tu door hi reh"

" par beeji ranvi mera dost hai.. bachpan se hum ek doosre ko jaante hain.." gunjan tries to explain..

" bachpana beet gaya gunjan.. ab tujhe sirf apne aur apne hone wali pati de bare mein sochna chahiye.. aur dyaan rakh le.. who dharam hi hai jo baldev ke sarpanch banne ke waaste bhi bahut sara paisa laga raha hai.. uski zindagi bhi savar jayegi.. tu nahi chahti kit tere veerji ki tarraki ho?" bansuri questions...

Gunjan is unable to say anything further.. she nods her head and leaves.. bansuri is worried but she doesn't want to let go of this alliance for anything..

As she comes out to the hall she sees ranvi..

" ranvi.. tu itthe?"

" gunjan menu balwant tayaji se baat karni hai.." ranvi says " kal jo kuch bhi hua who sab unhe sahi se batana hai.. uss dharam ne..."

" bas ranvi.." basuri interrupts " meri beti di zindagi barbaad karne ki thaan li hai kya tune?.. dekh yeh humare parivaar ka maama hai aur meri gunjan aur baldev ki zindagi ka sawaal hai.. to joh bhi hua use aage badhane ki zaroorat nahi hai.." she sternly tells him..

" par taiji.. menu bhi gunjan di zindagi ke bare mein chinta hai issi waaste..." ranvi tries to explain..

" bas ranvi.. menu kucch nahi sunna.. aur sarpanch ji se bhi kuch kehne ki jaroorat nahi hai.. job hi hai hum sambhaal lenge" bansuri says angrily

Ranvi looks at gunjan .. and she looks down .. ranvi hence is unable to help her further...

He is annoyed and leaves from there..

Bansuri walks away to her room..

Gunjan is teary eyed.. not understanding what to do.

Veera was standing at the door and hears everything and feels bad for what is happening..

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The next day ...

Balwant receives a parcel...he opens it to find some papers in English... he thinks what they are..

Just then he gets a call from dharams house..

" balwant ji.. humne kuch kaagzaad bheje hai aapke waaste.. yeh gunjan ke visa ke papers hai.. usme gunjan ke signature chahiye.. aap karwa dijiye aur kal hum kisi ko bhej denge papers lene ke liye.. ab aapki beti ko jaldi hi videsh vida karne ke liye tayaar ho jaiye" dharams mother on the phone explains balwant..

" jee changa jee.. sab ho jayega" balwant explains

Bansuri is smiling and waiting to know what it is...

" who bansuri jee .. inn papers par gunjan ke sign le lijiye.. visa ke papers hai" he says and hands over to bansuri who is smiling away..

Gunjan is also right there and she signs the papers.. but neither of them were able to read the papers as it was in English..

Bansuri puts it into the table drawer in the hall and leaves.

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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow wow wow 👏
the story is really very nice, sorry i was unable to repl for the first two parts, all three parts are really very good.
waiting for next update😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Namrataji it was more than Awesome.I wish if u were the script nd screenplay nd story writer of "Veera".Mashallah U r just tttooo brilliant.eagerly waiting for next updates.love U nd God bless U.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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NJ 😃 damn good yaar... loving the story and OMG gunjan signed the papers...😭 abb plzz jaldi jaldi next part update karo...😃
and why don't u change the name to Ranjan SS ?
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Anraysha

Namrataji it was more than Awesome.I wish if u were the script nd screenplay nd story writer of "Veera".Mashallah U r just tttooo brilliant.eagerly waiting for next updates.love U nd God bless U.


thanks dear.. i will update next part soon... some romance 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: RiMjHiM19

NJ 😃 damn good yaar... loving the story and OMG gunjan signed the papers...😭 abb plzz jaldi jaldi next part update karo...😃

and why don't u change the name to Ranjan SS ?


haan rim.. ek romantic part likh rahi hoon.. tomorrow saturday na full time to write.. week days are so busy with kid

and yeah ranjan ss.. i dont know why i am not changing it.. i would rather call it ranvijay gunjan ss.. i like the full names so much more than the shorter version
Edited by namratavyas - 12 years ago

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