My heartbeat - epilogue pg68 - 01/03

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MagicalMadness

@MagicalMadness

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Posted: 10 years ago

#21

Ok Angel I will trust u and wait for twist. And if u don't mind don't stretch too long so this one gets completed. 😉 but I m so glad ur back I missed ur writing 🤗 big hug. And I like this story to just complete chap 1. And good night all though it is day here. 😆

Edited by sunyy - 10 years ago

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angelpureness

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Posted: 10 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: GUYCAN

ok Angel ...I luv twist ...go with your flow ...but is Kalpi going to be Raghav's mistress or the person whom he is in love with ?😕😲

he loves her... N she won't be his mistress.

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Skyfalls

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Posted: 10 years ago

#23

where are you from Angel ?😉

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Skyfalls

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Posted: 10 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: angelpureness
he loves her... N she won't be his mistress.

Phew !!

Thx goodness she wouldn't ...Lemme guess Love Interest ...oOo hidden feeling ...ummm Twist eh? Must be that Kamala's fault 😡😡

😆😆😆😆😆

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MagicalMadness

@MagicalMadness

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Posted: 10 years ago

#25

Well Angel I hope as part of the twist pakhi gets a big boot to her non existent bum bum Never to be heard of again if she's in it for to long I will 🤢 I can't stand her even when she is good in an ff and as a vamp 🤢 😡 but awww my sweet kalpi and rags 😛 but like I said finish this in 10 chappies so we can say u finished one story besides shattered dreams. By the way I know u were watching Itna karo na mujhe pyar even I watch that. I love that serial 😛

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sweet1308

@sweet1308

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Posted: 10 years ago

#26

Waiting for next but that pakhi RaG wife yuck

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Saumya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#27

New story wow... Pakhi ... Singhania 😡 raghav's wife 😡 yaar usko singhania banana tha to raghav ki sister bana deti... Ya raghav ka koi bara bhai ya chota bhai ho wo khi uski wife... But raghav's nahi!!! 😭

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Saumya

@SamBricka

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#28

nice start.. Suprb chappy dear.. U kno what when i read her doe shape eye.. I was 😕 aaeee... Ye kab hua...??? Makhi ki eyes Doe shape kabse.. Aur kese... Kahan se... Kahan milli isko doe shape eyes...mujhe bhi chahiye.. Kissi shop pe milli... 😆 ok enough of my bakwas... But nxt what i read was aahhaa...its kalpi... Not makhi..

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DiVirgo

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Posted: 10 years ago

#29

Awww this is so sweet! Somehow they saying 'I love you' to eachother and feelin it too, feels like they have no choice but to say it in their minds!! Both know the love is there, but can't saay it aloud!!
Somehow it makes me feel that this first chapter was like the last! Don't know why i feel so!! Just letting you know how I feel!!
Waiting for next chapter!!
And it's difficult to get back in groove when you've been away for so long!! Don't blame you for not updating others! Understand completely! Welcome back though Pureness!! I'm happy you're back :)

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MagicalMadness

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Posted: 10 years ago

#30

🤣 bricka I thought same thing when did house fly pakhi get doe shaped eyes from what I remember she had a really wide manly mouth and tiny eyes. But then Angel mentioned kalpi and it was like ooohhh 😆

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