My heartbeat - epilogue pg68 - 01/03 - Page 4

Originally posted by: sunyy

🤣 bricka I thought same thing when did house fly pakhi get doe shaped eyes from what I remember she had a really wide manly mouth and tiny eyes. But then Angel mentioned kalpi and it was like ooohhh 😆

wahi to.. She all most gave ,e heart attack... Wish raghav ko makhi se zal se zal chutkara mill jaye..

Raghav is married to Paakhi, but is in love Kalpi, this is going to be interesting, looking forward to it

Originally posted by: sunyy

Ok Angel I will trust u and wait for twist. And if u don't mind don't stretch too long so this one gets completed. 😉 but I m so glad ur back I missed ur writing 🤗 big hug. And I like this story to just complete chap 1. And good night all though it is day here. 😆

Originally posted by: sunyy

Well Angel I hope as part of the twist pakhi gets a big boot to her non existent bum bum Never to be heard of again if she's in it for to long I will 🤢 I can't stand her even when she is good in an ff and as a vamp 🤢 😡 but awww my sweet kalpi and rags 😛 but like I said finish this in 10 chappies so we can say u finished one story besides shattered dreams. By the way I know u were watching Itna karo na mujhe pyar even I watch that. I love that serial 😛

I stopped watching it ages ago... Have they improved on their script... Should I give it another go?

Originally posted by: bricka.tiwari

nice start.. Suprb chappy dear.. U kno what when i read her doe shape eye.. I was 😕 aaeee... Ye kab hua...??? Makhi ki eyes Doe shape kabse.. Aur kese... Kahan se... Kahan milli isko doe shape eyes...mujhe bhi chahiye.. Kissi shop pe milli... 😆 ok enough of my bakwas... But nxt what i read was aahhaa...its kalpi... Not makhi..

Originally posted by: DiVirgo

Awww this is so sweet! Somehow they saying 'I love you' to eachother and feelin it too, feels like they have no choice but to say it in their minds!! Both know the love is there, but can't saay it aloud!!
Somehow it makes me feel that this first chapter was like the last! Don't know why i feel so!! Just letting you know how I feel!!
Waiting for next chapter!!
And it's difficult to get back in groove when you've been away for so long!! Don't blame you for not updating others! Understand completely! Welcome back though Pureness!! I'm happy you're back :)

Yes Angel Itna karo ma mujhe pyar has just got better I love Neil . But I didn't watch it for awhile and the last few episodes it has been awesome. But just waiting for Neil to find out ragini and aman aren't married. But u will like it.

Angel pls finish chap 1 update 😛

chapter 1: added a paragraph or two.

Oh so emotional rag lately realized kalpi t be his love n life