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Posted: 11 years ago
#61
Nice chapter
but very short
hope they meet soon
thanks 4 pm
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#62
Nice update
Guess ragna will meet soon for d Hosp project
Continue soon n if possible pm m next updates

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Posted: 11 years ago
#63
Very nice!! Hoping RAGNA will meet soon. Keep writing.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#64
wow wonderful update😊
Ragna are going to meet soon..
if possible plz pm me ur updates..
continue soon..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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sharanya0011, eishe10, ...neha, shikha-aggarwalthank you for reading hope you like it. thank you for share your comments. enjouy next part also.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#66

chapter-6

(Kalpi go down after seeing darsh.)

Kalpi- darsh chalo ghar..

Darsh- no mom bas 5 min's aur..

Kalpi- no...

(kalpi take his in her arm and come to her house)

Ashu- kalpu kaha chali gayi thi tum aur isse kya ho gaya?

Kalpi-kuch nahi ye barish main bhig raha tha...(sseing on darsh) go and change your cloths now..and then we want to talk.

Darsh- ok mom.

Tiya- mom what happend? why are you shouting on darsh...

Kalpi- because wo bina bataye barish main chala gaya bhigne ke liye...

Tiya- wow barish...mujhe bhi jana hai bhigne ke liye.

(saying this tiya run but kalpi stop her)

Kalpi- no sweetheart tum bimar pad jaaogi

Tiya- no mom mujhe kuch nahi hoga plz i want to go...plz let me go naa..aur apne darsh ko bhi jaane diya...then why stoping me?

Kalpi- main usko nahi jaane diya...wo toh khud hi (kalpi stop and go to romm where darsh is changing)

Tiya- oh..no..darsh toh gaya kaam se...

(ashu and tiya also come to the room)

Kalpi (to darsh)- tum barish main kya kar rahe the? and jaane se pehle tumne mujhe poocha bhi nahi..its not right darsh.

Darsh- sorry mom but main cheak karne gaya tha ki mumbai ki barish main aur dubai ki barish main koi farak hai ya nahi.

Kalpi- what? tum ye cheak karne ke liye baarish main bhig rahe the?

(tiya and ashu laughing on that)

Darsh- haan mom..i try to find it on encylpdia and web also...but i unable to find so i thought ki practically hi dekh lete hai.

Kalpi- toh pata chala kya differeance hai mumbai aur dubai ki baarish main?

Darsh- no mom bahi nahi abhi toh sirf dubai ki baarish dekhi hai mumbai ki kaisi hoti hai kya pata uske liye toh mumbai jana padega naa...chalo hum mumbai chalte hai.

Kalpi- mumbai???no darsh hum mumbai nahi jaa sakte?

Darsh- kyun mom... kyun nahi jaa sakte? agar hum mumbai nahi gaye toh mujhe dubai aur mumbai ki bich ki baarish ka difference kaise pata chalega?

Kalpi- darsh sirf difference jaane ke liye mumbai nahi jaa sakte darsh.if i said that i loved to travel in mumbai bus and not loved dubai's bus toh kya tum uska pata lagne ke liye mumbai jaayoge bus main travel karne ke liye?

Tiya- mom aap mumbai main bus se travel karti thi.aap ke paas car nahi thi?

Kalpi- no...mere pass car nahi thi

Tiya- aur aapke dad ke pass???

Kalpi- no...mere baba ke pass bhi nahi thi...hum sab ek chawl main rehte the toh humare pass car kaha se aayegi?

Darsh- chawl??? mom chawl kya hoti hai?

Kalpi (in mind)-hee deva..ye kya kar diya main ab isko kaise batao ki chawl kya hoti hai but agar nahi bataya toh phir se mumbai jaane ka bhoot sawaar ho jaayega.ab kya karu???idea..

Tiya- mom bolo naa chawl kya hoti hai?

kalpi- haaan...wait...i'll show you

(kalpi think somthing and open her cuboard...she show them chawl photo)

Kalpi-ye dekh ye hoti hai chawl..

Tiya- mom ye toh bahut badi hai.kyaaap yaha rehte the?

Kalpi- haan main yahi rehti thi apne aai- baba ke saath.

Darsh- mom iss photo pe ye kya likha hai?

Kalpi- ohh ye singhania chawl (kalpi stop after reading)

Tiya- singhania chawl but mom ye toh aapki chawl hai naa phir iss pe singhania kyun likha hua hai.

Kalpi- haan ye chawl hamari thi but ye chawl ke owner Mr. singhania the unhone ye chawl apne workers ke liye banayi thi.mere baba unke yaha kaam karte the.

Darsh- kya abhi iss chawl kw owner wahi hai?

Kalpi- abhi ka toh pata nahi beta but haan jab tak main waha thi tab tak toh wo chawl unhi ki thi.

Tiya-but wo meri hogi..

Kalpi- what?

Tiya- haan mom jaha aap rehte the mujhe bhi waha rehna hai aur ye tabhi possible hai jab wo chawl hamari hogi.

Darsh- she is right mom hum wo chawl Mr.singhania se buy karenge.

(kalpi smile on that)

Kalpi- angel's tum ye Mr. singhania se nahi buy kar sakte.

Tiya- kyun mom???

Kalpi- kyunki ab wo iss duniya main nahi hai.

Darsh- toh ab ye chawl kis ke pass hai?

Kalpi- unke bete ke pass..Mr.Raghav singhania.

Tiya- koi baat nahi mom toh hum un se chwal kharid lenge.

(kalpi scared to listen tiya's words)

Kalpi- no tum dono unse kabhi nahi miloge.agar tum unse mile toh pata nahi kya hoga.no main ye nahi hone dungi.

Darsh- mom why are you scared about this..you hide somthing from us hai naa..

( kalpi start to say somthing but ashu come there)

Ashu- kalpu avantika mam aayi hai bahut paresaan lag rahi hai

(kalpi and ashu go to leaving room)

Kalpi- mam aap itni raat ko yaha?sab thik hai naa..koi problem toh nahi hai?

( avantika told her about hospital project and raghav's conditions)

Avantika- look sweetheart this project is really important to me and my family.i accept all conditions of them and i want you come with me to india.

Kalpi- no mam aap ko sab pata hai phir bhi aap chahti hai ki main india aao its not possible.

Avantika- haan mujhe pata hai but only you can handle this project on behalf of my company and i trust you.plz kalpana sirf 6 months then you come back dubai.i never stop you but plz iss project ki starting tum karo.plz don't say no.plz.

(lots of strugel ke baad kalpi agree )

Kalpi-ok but only for six months.then i come back.

Avantika- no problem...you come back i not stop you.

Kalpi- unko phone kar ke bol dijiye ki humain unki condition manjoor hai and also said that humari company ki taraf se hum 1st meeting main presentation bhi denge.

Ashu- what presentation..are you gone mad...its not possible.we didn't know about this project and its detail.hum presentation nahi de sakte.

Kalpi- agar hum nahi denge toh wo apni agli condition yahi rakhenge. toh kisi bhi haal main presentation toh dena hi padega aur isse pehle wo ye condition rakhe maine samne se bol diya ki hum presentation denge.

Ashu- tumhe kaise pata ki unki agali condition ye hogi.

Kalpi- ashu jo condition unhone rakhi hai wo sirf isliye ki hum ye project naa kare but they didn't no me.ab meri marzi ki bager wo humain iss project se side nahi kar sakte.

Avantika(to ashu)- that's why i told her to come with me.only she can handle them.

Kalpi- mam told them what i said...

Avantika-ok i do that..and book also ticket to go to india.

(kalpi become tension)

Ashu- what happend now?

Kalpi- i think about angel's

Avantika- don't worry...i'll take care about everything.

kalpi- ok..btw company ka kya naam hai.

Avantika- oh sorry main toh poochna hi bhool gayi?

Kalpi- no problem hum waha jaa rahi hai toh pata chal hi jaayega.ab aap jaaiye bahut raat ho gayi. good night

Avantika- good night and take care.

( avantika leave , ashu go to sleep and kalpi think about the company and the conditions)

sorry main jaldi jaldi update kar rahi hoon but baad main mujhe time nahi milega so that's why main abhi story thodi aage badha rahi hoon.hope you enjoy this part.its long one i know and i promise that in next part ragna will meet.plz share your views.and tahnk you for your commets. keep reading and sharing your views.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#67
Awesome chapter
tiya and daksh are too cute
finally they are going to meet
update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#68
Nice update
I love darsh n tia
So finally kalpi gng India
Continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#69
Awesome update...
Loved the cute kids...
Continue soon🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
#70
Reall nice updte dear loved i
t finaly kalpi coming mumbi...and sorry for late commnt actually today i stuck in office work so not did now i read both..thank u for lovly update

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