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Posted: 11 years ago
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Chapter-8

Kalpi's flat:

Morning 8:30 PM

(its left 1 week from kalpi going to chawl)

( kalpi sit on balcony and thnik bout her chawl visit)

Kalpi (pov)- bappa ka sukar hai ki sab log thik hai.sab ko ek saath dekh kar acha laga.wo khush hai toh aur kya chahiye mujhe...yahi toh chahti thi main isliye toh sabse door gayi thi.kuch th fyada hua mere jaane ka.

Ashu- to tum yaha ho?kiske khayalo main khoi hui ho madam...koi hai kya?

Kalpi- shut up ashu her time joke crack karna jaroori hai kya?

Ashu- nahi her time toh but jab tumhre saath hoti hoon toh joke crack karna jaroori hai warna main bore ho jaungi.

Kalpi- bore ho rahi ho toh phir jao yaha hai se..leave me alone.

Ashu- ok...i leave but jaane se pehle ye baata do ki chawl main kya hua???

Kalpi-tumhe kaise pata ki main chawl gayi thi...let me think you follow me...

Ashu- i follow you?how stupid you are kalpu...us din tumhare samne hi toh hum airport se nikle the toh phir main tumhe follow kaise kar sakti hoon?

Kalpi- then how did you know about it?

Ashu- tumhari face pe likha hai...buddhu jab tum us din laut ke aayi uske baad aaj tak 1 week ho gaya hai tum iss ghar se bahar nahi gayi ho..kya baat kya hua waha?sab thik toh hai naa...

Kalpi- haan sab thik hai aur sab apni life main khush hai...i'm so happy that mere jaane ka decision galat nahi tha...un sab ko khush dekhar main bahut khush hoon.now i'm feel relax..agar aai-baba khush nahi hote toh apne aap ko kabhi maa nahi kar pati.but ab sab thik hai and you know they all together now.i wish they live always like this.

Ashu- wow ye toh achi baat hai ...hai naa...toh phir tumne apne aap ko iss ghar main kyun bandh karke rakha hai wo bhi last 1 week se..

Kalpi- kuch nahi bas yun hi..

Ashu- yun hi nahi somthing is wrong kuch hua tha naa waha kya hua tell me...ohh ho tell me dar lag raha hai mujhe...plz bolo kya hua

Kalpi- ashu woo...

Ashu- wooo kya?

Kalpi- ashu i think that paakhi saw me

Ashu- what?paakhi ne tumhe dekha...are you sure?how its possible? you hide your self naa?

Kalpi-ya hide my self but i think usne mujhe dekh liya hai and us dar ki wajah se main 1 week se ghar main hoon...ye soch soch ke pareshaan ho rahi hoon ki pata nahi ab aage kya hoga?

Ashu- aage kuch nahi hoga...tum bhi naa itni si baat ko leke paresaan ho gayi.i'm sure usne tumhe dekha nahi hoga aur dekha bhi hoga toh kya hota hai?look sweetheart ab hum yahi rehne waale hai ...agle 6 mahine humko yahi mumbai main rehna hai har pal hum iss baat se dar ke gujaarenge kya?ye sahi nahi hai so be prepare your self for all this.and aaj se humara kaam bhi start ho raha hai so cosantrate on that.are you listen to me?

(ashu wave her hand in front of her face)

Klapi- thank you (and kalpi hug ashu)

Ashu- thank you for what?

Kalpi- for everything..your my support system from last 5 yr and always with me when i'm in trouble..so thank's

Ashu- your always welcome but for now go and ready ho jaao hum sab madir jaa rahe hai.

Kalpi- no yaar tum log jaayo main nahi aa rahi hoon.aaj ke presentation ki thodi tayaari baki hai but tum log jaayo main tumse directly office main milti hoon.

Ashu- ok as you wish...tiya, darsh ready ho gaye kay ?chalo hum mandir chalte hai.

(tiya and darsh come out of room)

Dasrh-tiya- hum toh kab se ready hai..chalo chalte hai...mom kya hum jaaye.

Kalpi- haan jayo but ashu maasi ko pareshaan mat karna and behave like angels.

(ashu ,tiya and darsh left for mandir)

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Singhania mension:

(paakhi, gauri and kamala waiting for sammy and raghav)

Pakhi- plz gyuzz jaldi chalo.pehle humain madir jaan ahai then tumhe office aur humko chawl.

Sammy- aa rahe hai but plz stop shouting.

Raghav- ye mandir jaana jarori hai kya?

Kamala- haan raghav baba jarori hai.kalpi ka janam din tha to us din uski salamti ke liye mujhe pooja karni thi per main kar nahi paayi isliye aaj mandir jaake wo pooja karni hai.

Raghav- okk ...fine chaliye.

(raghav,kamala,sammy ,paakhi and gauri come to mandir)

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At mandir:

(kamala fought her flower on flower shop)

Panditji- pooja ke phool layiye

Kamala- hey deva lagta hai main phool wahi pe bhool aayi

Paakhi- kaha ?

Kamala- flower shop pe

Paakhi- ohh kamala maa aap bhi aap ruko main lekar aati hoon.

Raghav-tum ruko main lekar aata hoon.

(raghav com to flower shop)

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At mandir:

(ashu,tiya and darsh come there)

Ashu- lo aa gaye hum mandir..chale andar

Tiya- stop 1st i want some flowers for universeji

Ashu- ok you stop here main leke aati hoon waha bahut bheed hai

(ashu take flower but her phone ring so she fought flower on shop)

Tiya- ashu maasi aap flowers lane gaye the naa?

Ashu- haan

Tiya- then where is flowers.

Ashu- oh no i f thought i fought flower on flower shop..tum ruko main lekar aati hoon.

Darsh- no hum bhi aate hain kahi aap phir se bhool gayi toh...

Tiya- he is right we also come with you.

Ashu- ok chalo.

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(before ashu, tiya. darsh come raghav take flower from flower an left)

Ashu- bhiyya hamre phool yaha the kaha gaye?

shop owner- woh toh wo saab leke gaye.

(he point towords raghav and tiya strat running behind raghav and ashu and darsh run behind tiya)

Tiya-suno...ruko...hello plz stop.

Ashu- tiya don't run baby...stop ..

(raghav didn't listen to her and come at where all are waiting...tiya also come there)

Raghav- ye lijiye kamala maa aapke phool.

Kamala- sukriya raghav baba.

Tiya- main kabse aapke apko bula rahi hoon apko sunyi nahi deta kya?

(raghav see tiya and he feel strange)

Raghav- tum mujhe se baat kar rahi ho?

Tiya- nahi main unverseji ko bol rahi thi...abously apse pooch rahi hoon toh aapse hi baat kar rahi hongi naa...now give me my flowers back.

Raghav- kaun se flowers?

Tiya- wahi jo abhi aap flower shop se leke aaye hai.

Raghav- wo aapke nahi kamala maa ke flowers the.

Tiya- no wo mere the.ashu massi ne wo mere liya khride the.now give me my flowers back.

Raghav (angry now)- look last time i told you that wo tumhre nahi the go and cheak again.

Tiya- you cheak.that flower is my and i want that.

Raghav- tum bahut jiddi ho..

Tiya- same here..aap bhi bahut ziddi ho.

(ashu and darsh come there)

Ashu- what happen tiya?

Tiya- kuch nahi massi...he take my flowers and now don't give me back.but you don't worry jab tak ye mere flowers nahi dete mujhe tab tak hum yahase mahi jaayenge.

Raghav- look plz don't test my pesions...and plz leav from here...humain hamari pooja start karni hai

Tiya- no jab tak aap mujhe mere flowers nahi dete main nahi jaayungi.

Raghav (now more angry)- you ...look last time bol raha hoon ki wo flowers hamre hai.

(all listen this convo from somtime then darsh infear)

Darsh- plz you to stop fighting.wo flowers naa apke hai naa tiya tumhare..remember flowers mom kya kehti hai phool bhagwaan ji ke hote hai and chahe ye use bhagwaan ji ko de ya tum kya farak padta hai last main wo toh uske pass hi jaayenge.

Tiya- farak padta darsh.he take my flowers and then argue with me that's why i want my flower back...if he accept the mistake then i'll leave from here.

Raghav (now he didn't control in his anger)- dekho tum...

(that time sammy come there)

Sammy- kamala maa ye lijiye aapke phool..

Paakhi- ye tuhare pass the ?

Sammy- haan..kamala maa ye mujhe diye the.

Tiya- look main bola tha naa ye mere flowers hai now say sorry to me.

Raghav- no its just a misunderstanding an i did not do any mistake so i can't say sorry.aur tum jaesi batameez ladki kotoh bilkul nahi

Tiya- how could you say this to me?.aap bahut boore ho...i hate you...now give my flowers back...

Paakhi- i said sorry to you...ye lo tumhare flowers.

Tiya- no mom kehti hai jo galti karta hai usko hi sorry bolna chahiye...apne mistake nahi ki isliye aap ko sorry bolne ki jaroorat nahi hai. (tiya take darsh hand in her hand) lets go from here.

Raghav- kitni bataamiz bachi hai..ye ise hi hai toh pata nahi iske maa baap kaise hogne?

(all are shocked to here raghav and tiya's convo...they don't understand ki kya hua...and raghav and tiya left from there in angry mode...)

Ashu- i'm so sorry behalf of tiya.wo thodi ziddi hai.

Darsh- thodi ziddi?

Ashu- shut up darsh..

Ashu- i'm so sorry...an tell them also plz...lets go darsh

(and then ashu and darsh left from there)

sorry i'm little hurry so don't psot thank you note..but ya i said thank you to all who like the story and comment also...hope you like this part..i think ye part apko boring lag sakta hai...and uske liya advance main sorry...hope you enjoy..waiting fo your reply's..and promise ni next ragna meeting.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#82
Res...

unres...

nyc updt👍🏼..dear
cntnu soon
Edited by wildcatluvragna - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#83
Very nice update!! Loved the scene between Tiya and Raghav, it's was cute. Keep writing.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#84
Nyc story
I love tiya and darsh
Darsh is so cute and so as tiha
Keep updatingblike this
Superb ipdates
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Posted: 11 years ago
#85
Amazing chapter
lovely conv. Between raghav and tiya
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#86
Nice update
Both father-daughter fight in der first meeting
After knwng truth raghav will have hard tim to convince his stubborn daughter😉
Continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#87
Aru dear wonderful update loved it...
Loved father daughtr fight ...aftr raghsv knw that shr is his daughter it will be wonderful dear...plz continue soon i am waiting
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Posted: 11 years ago
#88
Nice I love tiya n raghav ...pls update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#89
wow wonderful updates..
loved daughter and father fight..
waiting for ragna to meet
continue soon..

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Posted: 11 years ago
#90
awesome updates...loved it... for not commenting...waiting for ragna to meet😳...continue soon

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