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Posted: 11 years ago
#71
Wow wonderful FF how did i miss reading this i read all the 6 parts it was wonderful plzzz update soon 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Just started reading your FF and all the updates were awesome 👏, continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#73
wow wonderful update..
they are cute angels
wow they want to buy singhania chawl..
loved ur update..
so finally kalpi is coming to mumbai..
plz continue soon.. waiting for it
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow super update pls waiting for next..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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shikha-aggarwal, rani214, Chinu_Rose, mounishree, ragnabw, Chin2_n, sharanya0011, turypriyathank you so much for your lovely comments...hope you like next part also i update 2 parts today 1st now and 2nd in eveing..read and share your view.😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Chapter-7

Mumbai Airport:

8:15 PM

(Kalpi's plain land )

Ashu- finally hum uss plain se bahar aa gaye..mera toh dam ghoot raha tha waha pe.

Darsh- dum nahi ghoot raha tha apka apko toh dar lag raha tha...aap plain main bethne se darte ho naa..

Ashu- plain main bethne se dar mujhe nahi tumhari mom ko lagta hai..kyun?

Kalpi- ye bolna jaroori tha...

Ashu- haan bilkul warna in dono ko pata kaise chalta ki unki mom kitni darpok hai.

Kalpi- shut up..and lets go.

(they come out of airport)

Avantika- finally hum aa gaye...take it its your new flats keys...i want to go to meet my brother and main wahi rahungi but kalapana abhi bhi soch lo tum bhi mere saath wahi kyun nahi rehti isse akele rehna mujhe thik nahi lagta.

Kalpi- maasi trust me kuch nahi hoga and such bolo to main waha kisi ko nahi jaanti so main waha comfortable feel nahi karungi.that's why i'm saying to arrange this flat.

Avantika- ok but take care of your self and darsh aur tiya ka bhi kayal rakhna.

Kalpi- you don't worry..we all take care of our self .now go wo apke liye wait kar rahe hong.

Avantika- ok...bye..( avantika go but thoda aage jaane ke baad she back) ye toh main tumhe dena bhool hi gayi..ye lo tumhari car keys and wo rahi tumhari car.

(avantika points 2 car stand front of them)

Kalpi- thank you so much for car.

Avantika- don't say thank you...tum meri beti ho aur beti hone ke naae tumhare liye ye sab karna meri jimedari hai aur ager tumne dubara thank you bolo toh main tumhe job se nikal doongi.(all laugh) ok now der ho gayi i want leave now.

(avantika leave from there and kalpi, ashu, darsh and tiya come to parking lot where car was parked)

Kalpi- ashu le lo car ki chabi aur tum angels ko leke ghar jaao main thodi der main aati hoon.

Tiya- mom where are you going?

Kalpi- mujhe kuch kaam hai sweetheart main thodi der main aati hoon..

Ashu- kaisa kaam kalpu...aur tum kaha jaa rahi wo bhi raat ke 9 baje.

Kalpi- plz don't ask me main kaha jaa rahi hoon but i promise ki main jaldi aa jaungi.

Darsh- ok..mom i trust u..plz cme back soon.

Kalpi- thanks champ..main jaldi aa jaungi.ashu plz kahayl rakhna and tum log khana kha lena don't wait for me.

Ashu- ok but jab tak tum nahi aa jaati main nahi sone waali.so jaldi aa jaana.come on angels chalte hai.

(they all say bye to kalpi and leave...after they leave kalpi also sit in car and leave)

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Chawl:

(kalpi stop her car in front of chawl and stare chawl from distance...she remind all her days in chawl spend with everyone)

kalpi (pov)- main yaha kya kar rahi hoon? kyunairport se bahar aate hi main yaha aa gayi? kay main iss jagah ko miss kar rahi thi? ya phir aai-baba ko miss kar rahi thi? sayad main unhi ko miss kar rahi thi aur isliye aaj sab sepehle main yaha aa gayi i wish wo mujhe ek baar dikh jaaye...kya wo abhi waise hi dikhte honge jise 5 saal pehle dikhte the...

5 saal...5 yrs...per phir bhi lagta hai ki kal hi ki baat ho jab main ne chwal chodne ka faisla kiya tha...

**************************************FLASHBACK**********************************

5 years before:

Chawl:

Night: 11:00 PM

(kalpi is crying constantly and kamala console her)

Kamala- kalpi chod de beta bhool jaa jo kuch bhi hua usko...mujhe pata hai ki kehna bahut aasaan hai but karna muskil...per hum kuch nahi kar sakte aur tujhe apne aap ko sambhaal naa hoga... ager tujhe iss tarah rote hui vitthal ne dekh liya toh phir se sawwal poochega..jo kuch bhi hua wo usko pata nahi hai toh tu rona band kar vitthal abhi aata hi hoga..tu rona bandh kar aur jaa jakar apna muh dhole...jaa

(kalpi only listen kamala and then go from thereand come to terrace)

kalpi (in mind)- how could i fought everything aai.its not possible for me.i love him aur main usse nahi bhool sakti.he misunderstand but its ok iss main uski galti nahi hai.ye toh halat ki galti hai...

(kalpi remind raghav's last word's...go from here...go from my life..i din't want to see your face in future...and stay from my life...i hate you)

kalpi (pov)- i hate you...raghav ke last words...wo mera chehra dekha nahi chahta...wo chata hai ki main uski zindagi se chali jaao ( she think about last line and repeat it...this line hurt her more) wo chahta hai ki main uski jindagi se chali jaao toh yahi sahi...main ab yaha nahi rahungi...( kalpi deside this and after that go to sleep)

Morning:

Chawl: 8:00 Am

Kamala- vitthal jaldi tayar ho jaao humko jaana hai naa.

( kamala's voice wake up kalpi)

Kalpi- aai tu kahi jaa rahi hai...

Kamala- sirf main nahi hum sab jaa rahe...tu bhool gayi kya...aaj hum sab darshan ke liye ganpati pule jaa rahe hai.

kalpi (in mind)- yahi sahi rahega...agar aai- baba samne rahenge toh main shayad nahi jaa paau but ye thik hai ye chale jaayenge aur inke jaane ke baad main bhi yaha se chali jaaungi.

Kamala- kaha kho gayi kalpi chal tu bhi tayaar ho jaa humko phir shaam 4 baje nikal naa hai.

Kalpi- aai abhi toh sirf 8 baje hai aur nikal ne main abhi time hai.

Kamala- haaan per abhi tyaari baki hai thodi se humain tyaar hoke kuch chieje kharidne ke liye bazar jaana hai.toh jaa ab jaldi tyaar ho jaa.

Kalpi- aai agar main nahi chalu aapke saath toh nahi chalega?

Kamala-kyun kya hua beta...tujhe main akle ghar per nahi chod sakti...agar tujhe kuch ho gaya toh?aur chawlmain bhi koi nahi hoga...sab ke sab hamare saath honge.

Kalpi- aai tu meri chinta chod mujhe kuch nahi hoga..aur bas 2 dino ki hi toh baat hai ...main apna poora khayal rakhugi..promise...per plz mujhe aane ka bilkul mann nahi hai mujhe force mat kar.trust me main yaha akeli reh sakti hoon..ek baar toh bharosa karke dekh..

Vitthal- agar meri rajkumari nahi aana chati toh yahi sahi...tu reh jaa yahi per koi tujhe jabardasti nahi karega.mujhe tujh per poora bharosa hai..tu apna hayal rakh legi hai naa...

Kalpi- thank you so much baba...main apna poora khayal rakhugi..promise...waise aap kab aaye?aur jis kaam ke liye gaye the wo hua?

Vitthal- kal raat tere sone ke baad aaya aur jis kaam ke liye gaya tha wo bhi hua...(to kamala)

ab chal kamala mujhe aur kalpi ko ek acchi si chai pila..

kalpi- aai tu ruk chai main banati hoon phir mauka mile naa mile.

(vitthal and kamala become shock here kalpi's words)

Kamala- matlab? tu kya kehna chati hai?

Kalpi- kuch nahi aayi bas yahi ki ab aap ke laut aane ke baad hi main aako chal pila payungi aur kuch nahi

(the day left like this...kalpi spend all her time with vitthal, kamala and pakya...at 4 o'clock all left for ganpati pule...after all left kalpi go to her house and pack her bags.)

Kalpi (in letter)- sorry aai...sorry baba...per ab main yaha nahi reh sakti...jo kuch bhi hua usmain apki galti nahi thi isliye uski saja apko nahi milni chahiye.ager main aur yaha rahi toh sirf apko dukh hi doongi...isliye main yaha se jaa rahi...apna khayal rakhna aur ho sake toh mujhe maaf kar dena...apki kalpi.

(kalpi lock the door and left the chawl)

************************************FLASHBACK END********************************

Present:

In chawl:

(kalpi's thoughts broke by some voice)

Vitthal- ye koi aane ke time hai...tujhe toh main...kaha naa tujhe se ki aaj jaldi ghar aaja lekin nahi...apni hi manmani karni hai tujhe.

( vitthal scolding pakya for he come late)

Pakya- baba aaj hotel main jayada kaam tha isliye late ho gaya..is main itna chilaane waali kaun si baat hai.

Vitthal- chilaane waali kaunsi baat hai???aare ager main tujhse kaha hai ki jaldi ghar aayo toh iss main bhi koi wajah hogi naa?lekin ab tu meri kyun sunega.itne bade hotel ka malik jo ban gaya hai.

(after here about pakya's hotel kalpi become very happy)

Pakya- aap phie se mujhe emotinal blackmail kar rahe baba...ye thik nahi hai.main aai ko bata doonga.

Vitthal-jaa bata jo batana hai wo bata..

Kamala- kis ko kya batana hai?

(see kamala and vitthal together kalpi want to meet them and start walking towords them but stop mid away...someone shout kamala maa from balcony...kalpi trun her face and see paakhi there..she stop)

Paakhi- kamala maa...main batati hoon...pakya vitthal uncle ke bolne ke baad bhi aaj late aaya hai..aue isliye wo use daat rahe hai.

(raghav also come there...they all come to chawl for dinner)

Kamala- acha toh tum aaj phir se late aaye ho...aaj toh tumhe saja milegi...vitthal tujhe jo karna hai kar iske saath main kuch nahi bolne waali hoon.

(vitthal trying to hit pakya by stick but raghav come between them)

(see raghav kalpi remembering all the moments spend with him ans also his last words i hate you..she stop and hide herself )

Raghav (to vitthal)- jaane dijiye naa use such main kaam hoga usko...chod dijiye usko aur chaliye bahut late ho gaya hai and i'm very hungry.

Paakhi-haan but baki sab ko toh aane do.

Raghav- wo aa gaye aur tumhare piche khde hai ab upper chale hum sab.

(kalpi see all this and haapy for them all...she thinks that all is well in her house and all is happy with there current life..she thinks raghav accept paakhi as his wife and he hate her till now.)

(paakhiis going with all but she here a phone ring and trun her face that voice.she saw kalpi there and shock...she stop there for second but raghav come there and touch her shoulder)

Raghav- what happened paakhi?

Paakhi- kuch nahi...give me 5 min's..

(paakhi go that place where she saw kalpi...but no one there...kalpi left that place before paakhi come there)

hope you like this part..thank you for aapricating my writing..hope u all enjoying my ff..sorry for writting mistakes.share you views and comments.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#77
Amazing update
continue soon😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#78
Awesome update!! Just hope Raghav and Kalpi meet up, soon. Continue soon 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#79
Nice update
W8ng for ragna meeting n raghav's reactn
Continue soon

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Posted: 11 years ago
#80
Pls change the title
sorry to hurt u
i mean new update page no.
Edited by shikha-aggarwal - 11 years ago

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