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Posted: 11 years ago
#41
loved it amazing update👏
wow nice to see strong and successful kalpi👏
thank u for pm😊
waiting for next part..
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#42
Very nice update dear:) And dont say sorry for long updates..We all are greedy people..So always want more😆😆😆...Happy that Kalpi is successful now...Very good and continue soon🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
#43
Dear r ead all chaps in one go. Superb ff. Loved it. And why do u think ur chap is long one. Actually I felt they t short. Write longer chaps if u can. All will love them.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#44
Atlast kalpi aa gayi...nice update..😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#45
Hi Aru! I'm Kiara. First of all welcome to the forum. Nice updates. Nice to know Kalpi had achieved her ek mutthi aasman. You write well dear. Continue writing. 👏
Edited by ragna_luv - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#46
appyk, smile_san, ragna_luv, wildcatluvragna, shikha aggarwal, neha,saharayna0011,esingh90, chinu_rose, aryagr..thank for u r loveable cooments ..i update next part hope u like it.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#47
Chapter-4

(ashu and kalpi in car)

Ashu- plz kalpu dhire drive karo.tumhe marne ka shock hoga mujhe nahi hai.i love life.

Kalpi- can u plz shut your mouth for somtime.waise bhi jo kuch bhi hua hai naa uski wajah tum hi ho..

Ashu- what ???main???ohh hello...subah tum bina mile gayi its your fault not my...aaj ke din office aane ka decision tumhara tha mera nahi.so jo kuch bhi hua hai uska reason tum ho main nahi.

Kalpi-ok fine jo hua meri wajah se hua hai but now don't give me lecture and keep silence for sometime.mujhe sochne do ki aage kya karna hai

Ashu- sochne se kuch nahi hone wala kalpu wo tumhe maaf nahi karenge.

Kalpi- plz don't say this...i need to do somthing...

Ashu- karo jo karn hai but i don't think ki aaj tumhara jaadu chalega.

Kalpi- tum meri dost ho ya dushman...meri side lene ki wajah unki side le rahi ho

Ashu- haaan main unki side hi loongi mujhe us ghar main jo rehna hai

Kalpi- kitni matlabi ho tum...musibat main dost kaam aate hai but tum toh saath chod kar jaa rahi hai...u pay for it...

Ashu- i don't mind...ek baar tumhara saath chodna afford kar sakti hoon but unka nahi wo mujhe nahi nahi chodenge.

(kalpi stop the car in hurry)

Ashu- car kyun rok di?

Kalpi- ghar aa gaya...now min upper jaa rahi hoon plz car park kar dogi

Ashu- ya tum jaao main car park karke aati hoon.

Kalpi-thanks..(and run towards lift...she come near in her house and stop there)

Ashu- tum yaha kyun ruk gayi.chalo andar.

Kalpi-i'm scared..pata nahi kya ho raha hoga?

Ashu- mistake ki hai toh ab saja bhi bhugto.come on open the door.

(kalpi open her house door and enter house...she switch on light...all said happy Birthday her...she is happy and shock also to see the surprise)

Kalpi- what is this...aap sab yaha aur ye kya hai?

Avantika- ye sab humne tumhara Birthday celebrate karne ke liye kiya.tum toh kabhi ready nahi hoti party ke liye so we thought ki hum tumhe surprise kare...so kaisa laga surprise?

Kalpi- thank you so much mam..i lov it.

Avantika mam- 1st thing ye surprise main nahi plan kiya ur 2nd thing hum ghar per hai so mam kehne ki jaroorat nahi hai.

(kalpi turn and hug ashu...she think ashu give this surprise but ashu refuse)

Kalpi- agar tum nahi toh phir kisne ye surprise plan kiya hai.

(hum ne...somone said )

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Charecter skecth:

Tiya- (kalpi and raghav's daughter)- she is 5yrs old.she is intellegent.sweet and cute...she is full of attitude like raghav.she is karbon copy of raghav but her eyes and her values like kalpi.

Darsh-(kalpi and raghav's son)-he is 5yrs old.he is also itelegent but more then tiya...he is like kalpi.he never talk to much, he is very understanding.wo apne umar se kuch jayada hi bada hai...he always read books and asking Question every time.

(darsh and tiya are twins)

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Kalpi- toh ye tumhara kaam hai...u know i don't like celebrate birthday phir bhi you that...why?

Tiya- app ko birthday celebrate karna pasand nahi its your problem not my...me and darsh want to celebrate your birthday so we plan this surprise party.and wahi hoga jo hum dono chahenge.iss mamle main aapki marzi nahi chalegi.

Kalpi-ok fine...tumahri marzi chalne waali hai toh bolo ab mujhe kya karna hai

Darsh- kuch nahi bas cake katna hai...phir hum dinner karenge and then we sleep.kyunki subah jaldi school jana hai..agar time per nahi uthe toh school main jaane ke liye late ho jaayenge.

Tiya- hey universeji apne isko kyun mera bhai banaya...isko bas school ki padi hai...school ek din nahi jaayenge toh kuch nahi hoga.

Kalpi- he is right sweetheart...school miss karna galat baat hai.if u want to enjoy then i promise that hum sunday ko kahi bahar jaayenge but abhi darsh is right...cake cut karte hai..then u eat and then go to sleep

Tiya- ok but only u said that's why i do it..and ya don't fought your promise.

Kalpi-no...i never fought my promise.

(kalpi cut the cake and then all eat and now its 10:00 pm...all left only kalpi, ashu and avantika there)

Avantika- now 10 baje hai so i think i should leave...take care ok

Kalpi-ok maasi..bye good night and you take care also.

(ashu sit on sofa and do some office work...after some time kalpi come out from her room)

Ashu- dono so gaye kya?

Kalpi-haan...aaj jayada mehnat nahi lagi.bahut thak gaye the.

Ashu- haan wo toh thakenge hi naa..aaj itna kaam jo kiya dono ne

Kalpi- i'm glad that ye meri jindagi main hai warna pata nahi main aaj kis tarah jee rahi hoti.

Ashu-plz aaj nahi kalpu...aaj tumhara birthday hai aur aaj sad talk nahi...main toh keh rahi hoon ki aaj koi baat hi nahi karte...directly sone ke liye chalte hai...goodnight

Kalpi- u never change...goodnight

(its morning 6 o' clock kalpi' house)

Kalpi- wake up all..plz 6 baje hai aur sab ko ready bhi hona hai...ashu, tiya, darsh utho...

Darsh- mom main uth chuka hoon...

Kalpi-tum waha ho toh ye tino kaun hai???aur tum baher kya kar rahe the

Darsh- wo ashu maasi, tinya bunny aur uska frogi hai.aur main baher nahi brush karne gaya tha.

Kalpi- toh phir tiya kaha hai?

Tiya- main yaha hoon...hall main sofe ke piche...

Kalpi- what are you donig here...and kya dhoodh rahi hoo tum?

Tiya- mom meri drawing book nahi mil rahi hai pata nahi kaha chali gayi?

kalpi- i'll find your book but you go and brush you teeth.

tiya-ok mom but plz find it soon warna late ho jayega and then darsh blame me.

Kalpi-ok.(andthen kalpi go to room where ashu is sleeping)

Kalpi- wake up ashu...warna office ke liye late ho jaayega...wake up

Ashu- kya hai kalpana...sone do mujhe...office ka baad main dekh lenge.

Kalpi- tum abhi nahi uthi toh aaj ka breakfast tumhe banana padega.

Ashu- kya?nahi..

(ashu wake up but in angry on kalpi)

Kalpi- good girl...now go and ready ho jaayo jaldi...ofice jaldi jana hai aaj

( all be ready and in hall now)

Tiya- mom meri drawing book mili...

Darsh- mom meri bottle kaha hai?

Ashu- meri dairy dekhi

Kalpi- plz will you stop...ye rahi tumhri diary...ye tumhri drawing book and tumhri bottle tumhre bag main daal di hai...now chalo..

(kalpi drop darsh and tiya school and then ashu and kalpi go to office)

its 11:30

Mr.batra- plz mam don't do this with me.

Kalpi- i'm sorry but ab aur nahi kaam kar sakte yaha...aap bimaar hai aur iss baat kaa apke kaam pe aser ho raha hai so plz accept my decision and go back to india.

Mr.batra- plz mam...plz mujhe kaam se mat nikalye...

Kalpi- mr.batra leave now...your wasting my and your time also..plz leave now

(mr.batra leave from there and kalpi call her PA.)

Kalpi-tulika plz come in my cabin now..

(Tulika come in kalpi's cabin)

Kalpi- tulika give advertisment for manager post...

Tulika- but mam mr.batra...

Kalpi- jitna bola hai utna karo and ya Mr.batra ki india ki ticket karo do...wo bimaar hai so he need his family support.unhe paise ki jaroorat hai so wo ye jab chod ke apna treatment nahi karvange so i want to he go to india and to his treatmet.

one more thing.don't stop his salary wo unko waise hi milni chaiye and unka treatment ka kharch company karegi.he give all hie life for this company now its our turn.and ya unko bolna ki jab wo thik ho jaaye tab unko unki position dignity ke saath phir se milegi..i promise.

Ashu- wow..pehle khud hi nikl ti aur phir khud hi ye sab karti ho...agar treatment karni hai toh wo yaha bhi ho sakti hai phir ye sab karne ki kya jaroorat hai

Kalpi- jarorurat mujhe nahi unko hai unke family ki...unki bimari main wo apni family ke pass rahe yahi thik hai.aur agar main unko jab se nahi nikalti toh wo kabhi apn treatment nahi karwate.he save money for his family and wo apne treatment ke liye usko kharch nahi karte.that's why plan this...ab unka treatment bhi hoga aur wo kuch time apni family ko bhi denge.

Ashu- love u sweetheart...mam ne tumko company ka CEO banakar koi galat kaam nahi kiya.u always think about our company and his employee.

Kalpi- now bas bahut hua...but ya ye baat tumhre mere aur tulika tumhare bich main hi rehni chahiye.kisi ko mat batana iss ke baare main

Tulika- no mam main kisi ko kuch nahi bolong but ashu mam is right your golden hearted person.

Kalpi- don't buttering me..main tumhari salary nahi badhane wali iss ke liya.leave now and do what i say

(tulika leave and ashu hug kalpi.)

hope u like this part...plz share your views ..and fought mistakes.your all view are most important to me..its encourage to write,..if u didn't like somthing then also tell me i trying to change..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#48

Originally posted by: ragna_luv

Hi Aru! I'm Kiara. First of all welcome to the forum. Nice updates. Nice to know Kalpi had achieved her ex mutthi aasman. You write well dear. Continue writing. 👏

hi i'm aruhi..thank for u welcoming me and thank you for aapricate my work😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#49
res😆
unres...
me 1st
ragna k twin child hai

gud updt👍🏼..dear

nw cntnu soon...
Edited by wildcatluvragna - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#50
Awesome update aruhi...aww ragna ke bacche chooo chweet...😳

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