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Posted: 11 years ago
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its really nice aru dear loved it..ur very good writer..

kalpi ke do do bache wow ... and made ragna to meet soon... and continue sooon...
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Wonderful update!! Can't wait for reunion of kalpi and Raghav plus the kids. Please bring it soon and do continue soon 😉
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Amazing update...
continue soon😊
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Wow! Ragna's twins... cho chweet... Wish they were together!
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wow amazing update😊
sweet and cute twins of ragna
loved ur update..
continue soon..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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First welcum to forum dear 🤗
Superb updates...read all 4 parts
Loved kalpi achieved her EMA
Wow ragna ke twins
M loving dis story... continue soon😃
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Beautiful update dear:)
Ragna has twins... nice...Continue soon...🤗
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wildcatluvragna, appyk, mounishree, eishe10, shikha aggarwal, ragna_luv, sharanya0011, rani214, chinu_rose, chinu_n
Thank you so much for your loveble comments.😊and thank you for appricating my work.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: rani214

First welcum to forum dear 🤗
Superb updates...read all 4 parts
Loved kalpi achieved her EMA
Wow ragna ke twins
M loving dis story... continue soon😃

thank you so much. hope you like next part also😊
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Chapter-5
Mumbai:

RS construction:

Its 3:30 PM

(sammy enter raghav's cabin with anger...but raghav not look towords sammy & continue with his work)

Sammy- what's going on raghav? if you want to close this comany then tell me i'll help you in do that...main tumse baat kar raha hoon raghav...dhyaan kaha hai tumhara.

(sammy wave his hand on front of raghav)

Raghav- tumne mujhse kuch kaha?

Sammy- no...i'm taliking to this wall...

Raghav- ok...carry oo...

(sammy more angry on his answer)

Sammy- what's wong with you raghav???why you behave like this?

Raghav- now what sammy???ab main kya kar diya???

Sammy- kya kiya??? wow...pehle problem create karte ho aur phir poochte ho ki kya kiya???

Raghav- sammy plz stop puzzling me and bolo ki kya hua??

Sammy- tumne Mr.Mehra se kya kaha???tum unse iss tarah kaise baat kar sakte ho??he is our one of most important client and you fight with him..

Raghav- who said i fight with him?look sammy in Mr.mehra's project they want some international company involed in this and i don't want this so main unke samne ek condition rakh di that's it.

Sammy- you know wo kisko involve karna chahte hai??

Raghav-no i don't know aur mujhe jaana bhi nahi hai.

Sammy- you know tumhari wajah se hamare sabse bade client ko hum kho sakte hai...tum ne jiske baare main baat ki hai wo Mr.Mehra ki sister ki company hai and wo unko isliye involve karna chate hai kyunki they want some family member involve in this project.

Raghav- oh means they not trust our company...now i'm sure that ki main kuch galat nahi kiya.

Sammy- raghav tum her baat ko misunderstan kyun karte ho...baat yaha trust ki nahi hai...ye unki khandaani jamin hai aur uspe jo hospital wo bana rahe hai wo unki dadi ki yaad main bana rahe hai so he wants that unki sister bhi project ka hissa ho that's it.what's wrong on in that?

Raghav- if they want to involve his sister in this then told him to fine other way.i'm not agree to involve anyone in this project...and if they want to involve then they want to accept my conditions.

Sammy- which type of condition???

Raghav- yahi ki wo yaha india main akar iss project ko hamre saath handle kare aur project ka her decision humari company karegi and they accept our evey decision...in short the company do work under our company.

Sammy- what?they never accept this type conditions...koi bhi successful company iss type ke conditions accept nahi karegi.

Raghav- i know that tabhi to main Mr.Mehra ke samne ye conditions raki hai.

Sammy- agar kabhi ye company per tala laga toh uski wajah tum hi hoge...tumhara kuch nahi ho sakta..

(after that sammy leave the cabin and raghav start again his work)

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Dubai:

Kalpi's house:

Night: 10:00 PM

Ashu- kalpu look kya khoobsorat barish hai...chalo barish main bhigte hai

Kalpi- no ways tumhe jana hai tum jaao main nahi aa rahi hoon.

Ashu- kyun kya hua?

Kalpi- kuch nahi?

Ashu- tumhe toh barish humesha se pasand hai phir bhi tum bhigne ke liye mana kar rahi ho..why?

Kalpi- haan mujhe barish pasan hai but ye nahi..

Ashu- ye nahi matlab...

Kalpi- ye barish bhi koi barish hai...mujhe toh mumbai ko be mausam barsaat pasad hai..use kehte barish...

Darsh- mom uss barish main aur iss barish main kya farak hai dono asmaan se hi girti hai..ya phir kuch farak hota hai...let me cheak...(and darsh go from there)

Ashu- ye aur iske sawaal...pehle khud hi sawwal poochta hai aur phir khud hi jawaab deta hai.btw tumne jawwab nahi diya kya farak hai barish main...

Kalpi- pata nahi kyun but ye barish apni si nahi lagti...shayad isliye ki ye Dubai hi mujhe ajnabee lagta hai.

Ashu- may be...acha ye baate chode ye bato tumhari barish ke saath bahut si yaade joodi hongi hain naa?

Kalpi- haaan..but why are you asking me this Question?

Ashu- bas yun hi...now tell me tumhari jindagi main yaadgar barish kaunsi thi??jo tum kabhi nahi bhool sakti.

Kalpi- ye kaisa sawaal hai???yadgaar barish kaun si thi?

Ashu- i mean that ki tumhe aaj bhi wo barish yaad karke kuch kuch hota ho.

Kalpi- how filmy you are kuch kuch hota ho and all that...

Ashu- ohh ho...line pe mat jaao feeling ko samjho aur bolo...

Kalpi- to tum nahi manogi naa..

Ashu- sochna bhi mat...

Kalpi- ok...alibagh wali barish...wo barish main kabhi nahi bhool sakti..

Ashu-what? alibagh waali barish...

Kalpi-haan wo hum alibagh jaa rahe the...

(ashu cut her midway)

Ashu- hum???

Kalpi- haan wo main aur... darsh (kalpi shouthing on seeing darsh)

Ashu- what darsh tum usko lekar kab alibagh gayi thi?

(kalpi not stop listen to her and go)

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