The Marriage Story: Ragna FF; Part-23, Part-24(Edited) Pg-131, 31/10 - Page 100

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Posted: 10 years ago
this 1 for u dida...



Bedardi balma tujhko mera maan yaad kerta hai...berasta hai jo aankho se wo sawan yaad krta hai

nd ur bedardi dida...no update...dida plzzz...1 update...

Nd plzzz dida ab aap mat kehna...''nahi nahi abhi nahi abhi kero intezar''... To mei kehungi...''nahi nahi kabhi nahi mei hun bekerar...''



UPDATE DIDA PLZZZ.. 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hi Charu I haven't Been able to comment or read,I'm sorry about that,I didn't had connection so,So i finally Finish Read all you FF's On this Beautiful story, and wow Jealous Raghav Singhaina lol Really Funny,Please Continue to write and Update soon!! And continue to PM me as well,Love you😛🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
dida aapko mere bakwas gane itne pasand aa gaye kya ki aap update nahi de rehe ho...update dida nahi to 1 aur gana post ker du gi...soch lo...my bakwas besura gana ya ur swt swt surila update...wo bhi romantic wala...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Charu,pls end your emotional,techical,mechanical and chemical break.
We don't want any baari barkam update.Let the revenge track remain in the place where it is currently NOW.Even our mind is exhausted and can't take any heavy load.
We are missing your ffs,your replies for the comments.Ab pas khijiye tadpaana and come back soon.
WE ARE GOOD SOULS AND NOT GREEDY ALSO.OUR PAKKA PINKY PROMISE,ONLY CHOTAWALA LIGHTER TOUCHY TOUCHY RAGNA ROMANTIC WALA UPDATES FOR
THE MARRIAGE STORY AND THE CELEBRATION OF FATES.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: zindgidilse

comment for part 23
actually by mistake i had read part 24 before part 23 so commented for part 24 before this comment..hope you did not mind.

coming to update chahat..
superb update..rammy conversation was fabulous specially from raghav's part ..i love his every word about his and kalpi's relation and the trust exist in btw them that kalpi is his soul mate ...she is his love ..his world and being a wife she has all rights to know about his every deed and actions..kalpi has full right to show her anger for him for his misdeed ...she has full right to ask him about his involvement in pakhi's defaming case..though she has complete doubt about his involvement in this defamation of pakhi...and at the end he blurted out the real truth behind his involvement after being questioned by kalpi...this is the honesty which is exists in every relation of husband and wife.

😆sammy was lost in his dream girl's land😆...chahat now sammy badly needs a companion😉

gauri was yet hesitate to be open with the counselor ...she wants to be with herself only ...the pain she had felt in those years is refraining her to be open with any person...

in the office ...kalpi was thinking about raghav's defamation towards pakhi but besides this she was also thinking about her and raghav's marriage revelation in front of the society coz she was feeling lack of her husband, her love ,her companion and her real home i.e,,,singhania mansion ..in her life...she was feeling lonely without her all deserving rights ...it was showing her pain to being a lonely inspite of having everything in her life.
but also in all this her thoughts she did not forgot raghav's coffee daily routine..she herself made his coffee and for sammy too..
the way kalpi placed coffee on the table in front of raghav and sammy with thuddd i was like 🤣 coz at that time it was worth to saw rammy faces...now rammy has to bear her anger and sammy sammy sammy...🤣 gosh he was confused on why kalpi was behaving with him with the same manner like she was behaving with raghav...and raghav's answer to his question..."for been my partner in my crime"...i just love this dialogue.😳

conference meeting ragna eyetalk...pakhi's stubbornness ...and raghav's making kalpi agree to drive to hotel together was nice...

again romance and that too of trial room😳..blushy blushy...

finally sonal got to know about ragna ...that kalpi is in love with raghav ...so detective sonal's mission is half completed😆


No I didn't mind. You are too sweet and cute to make up for everything and gave such long comments for both the parts. 😃 ❤️ Glad you liked Rammy part, I also love writing there scenes 😃 LOL, Sammy's companion is on way! 😉😛

Yes, Gauri has become comfortable with her pain and memories. It may take some time for her to be completely normal.

Yes, Kalpi loves Raghav and misses her home, her husband, and needless to say amongst other pains this one's the worst. But she never forgets to take care of Raghav as his wife and lover. 😃

LOL, Thanks for loving that coffee wala scene and that dialogue. 😃😳 Glad you liked rest of the scenes as well. Yes, detective Sonal's mission is half completed, but for her it is mission accomplished completely. LOL. so for now she may stop being a detective! 😆😛
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: zindgidilse

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awesome update chahat...but i felt it was more than awesome 👏
ragna's journey to the hotel was quite silent but they are conversing through their eyes during whole journey to the hotel. kalpi was angry on him regarding pakhi's issue taken to the media and newspaper but she herself cannot control over her desire looked at his hot looking husband and on the other side raghav was also feeling the same desire to have kalpi in his arms and on top of it her red dress was complementing her more than before ever.
on reaching hotel raghav felt a pinch of jealousy seen kalpi and saakshaya in a close hug and skas complementing her as HOT!!!!!!...then he felt same pinch once again when kalpi addressed him as saks though she never addressed him as rags😆 ...oh god raghav is such a desperate guy in case of kalpi...chahat pls do fulfill his this wish to call him rags by kalpi...raghav deserves his wife's this attention but after kalpi come to know about his this wish to her ...😉
raghav was feeling jealous once more seen kalpi and saks intemate dance and to not react on that he left for washroom to calm down his anger...i love the way kalpi fights with saks for raghav that only she has the right to punish raghav ...no one else has the same right..
after that ragna dance on tum hi ho once again...superb...😳...and on ragna dance i like saks pov seen their passionate dance and their love and his making conclusion that they are perfect for each other.
it was nice to see raghav's trust on kalpi that she is his kalpi and she only love him and she will always be his only that she will not cheat him...she loves him only ...it does not matter to whom with kalpi dance and talks...he has his trust on his kalpi always...
peeyush got slapped from raghav and kalpi's thunder on been hug with her...peeyush deserves that.👏
after that ragna scolding each other in raghav's chamber ...specially raghav's scolding kalpi...it was showing raghav's concern for kalpi to be safe always from guys with bad intentions ...kalpi's innocence can lead her to worst which raghav don't want to happen on any condition ...he want to be safe her always...raghav always want her to safe from every person with bad intentions whether it was from kaoors or from peeyush.
it was so pure how kalpi calmed him and his fear to loose her...she knows how to handle raghav in worst to worst situation.
once again chamber romance 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳
😆 sonal is not believing that raghav can be so romantic😆...why not she ...coz she had not witnessed ragna's romance live telecast😆 like saks has witnessed.😆 otherwise she would not have asked such question..


Thank You so much. 😃 Glad you liked car scenes. LOL, Rags, yes will do so in some update; fulfill Raghav's wishes to let Kalpi address him as Rags. 😆 Kalpi is always a sweetheart for me, glad you liked her fighting with her best friend for her husband; and Ragna dance. I guess i am obsessed somewhere with Ragna dances. Sometimes I wish I was a choreographer,, or knew dancing; I'd have incorporated some hot steps in some good songs. 😆😛

Ragna trust on each other will never go, at least I will try so. Yes, Peeyush deserved this slap, this time at least. Raghav is over-protective, but rightfully so when it comes to Kalpi. Personally i love his protective scoldings to her more than lovey-dovey scenes. 😛😳 Thanks for liking chamber romance, sometimes I fear for it to become repetitive. Yes, Sonal has not witnessed Raghav Singhania's passion in his personal sphere other than work. But you can bet, she'll get to know of it now. 😊 Sorry for late reply dear, I am kind of messed up terribly!
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: spontaneousmini

Beautiful update Charu, loved it.

Raghav and Kalpi's love, attraction, desperation and uncontrolled emotions are so beautifully portrayed in your words.
It was lovely to read this chapter and feel what the two are going through.
Feelin little sorry for Peeyush..lol

Saks is just awesome.. hope you have planned a love life for him too 😉


Thank You So much Mini. Glad you liked it. Lol, you are feeling sorry for Peeyush, what say make you feel sorry for him more in any of further updates? 😃😛 I am kind of yearning for another Raghav slap, ha ha. 😆 Yes, Saks love interest has been fixed! 😉😊😃

Originally posted by: ariarai

Hi Charu I haven't Been able to comment or read,I'm sorry about that,I didn't had connection so,So i finally Finish Read all you FF's On this Beautiful story, and wow Jealous Raghav Singhaina lol Really Funny,Please Continue to write and Update soon!! And continue to PM me as well,Love you😛🤗


Hey Aria, so-so good to see you back! 🤗 oh, so you had connection problem and here I was wondering where have you disappeared. I missed your VMs so much! Thanks for your wonderful comment, glad you liked my FFs. Yes, right now on a break, but I am tryng to be back sooner. I'll PM you when I update. 😃 love you too darling. 🤗❤️
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: bricka.tiwari

dida aapko mere bakwas gane itne pasand aa gaye kya ki aap update nahi de rehe ho...update dida nahi to 1 aur gana post ker du gi...soch lo...my bakwas besura gana ya ur swt swt surila update...wo bhi romantic wala...


LOL, tumhare gaane mujhe sach mei pasand aye. 😃 😆 I actually enjoyed them ha ha. Was looking forward to more. 😛 Actually darling I am busy with some unplanned things which are postponing my return and my plans to organise tracks in FFs. But I am busy in FF work only. For now cannot update here. But I'll try to give one update for one of the three FFs in between.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: balarangarajann

Charu,pls end your emotional,techical,mechanical and chemical break.

We don't want any baari barkam update.Let the revenge track remain in the place where it is currently NOW.Even our mind is exhausted and can't take any heavy load.
We are missing your ffs,your replies for the comments.Ab pas khijiye tadpaana and come back soon.
WE ARE GOOD SOULS AND NOT GREEDY ALSO.OUR PAKKA PINKY PROMISE,ONLY CHOTAWALA LIGHTER TOUCHY TOUCHY RAGNA ROMANTIC WALA UPDATES FOR
THE MARRIAGE STORY AND THE CELEBRATION OF FATES.


How sweet of you Vijaya and other readers also, whom I have not replied individually. I am also missing writing for this FF I'd thought of organising some tracks and proper planning. But some unexpected and unplanned instances are keeping me busy and hence postponing the return. You all will soon know where and what kept me. I will try to give one update of one of the three FFs in between. Love you all loads. 🤗 Muah. Missing my FFs and all of your comments also.❤️
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Posted: 10 years ago
dida as u said dat u luvd my besura gana...to ye lo aap 1 more song bt dida ven ever u get time plzzz update...nd don't 4get 2 pm me...




Aaja re mei to kab se khari iss par ye aankhiyaan thak gayi panth neehar


if u don't kno ki ye song kiss movie ka hai to let me tell u ye song madhumati movie ka hai its a black nd white movie... Iske kayi aur songs famus hai like suhana safar aur ye mausam haseen, vaijantimala is movie ki actress hai dida

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