The Marriage Story: Ragna FF; Part-23, Part-24(Edited) Pg-131, 31/10 - Page 99

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Posted: 10 years ago
Missing ur update dear. Pls pls pls pls update dear
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Posted: 10 years ago
comment for part 24

awesome update chahat...but i felt it was more than awesome 👏
ragna's journey to the hotel was quite silent but they are conversing through their eyes during whole journey to the hotel. kalpi was angry on him regarding pakhi's issue taken to the media and newspaper but she herself cannot control over her desire looked at his hot looking husband and on the other side raghav was also feeling the same desire to have kalpi in his arms and on top of it her red dress was complementing her more than before ever.
on reaching hotel raghav felt a pinch of jealousy seen kalpi and saakshaya in a close hug and skas complementing her as HOT!!!!!!...then he felt same pinch once again when kalpi addressed him as saks though she never addressed him as rags😆 ...oh god raghav is such a desperate guy in case of kalpi...chahat pls do fulfill his this wish to call him rags by kalpi...raghav deserves his wife's this attention but after kalpi come to know about his this wish to her ...😉
raghav was feeling jealous once more seen kalpi and saks intemate dance and to not react on that he left for washroom to calm down his anger...i love the way kalpi fights with saks for raghav that only she has the right to punish raghav ...no one else has the same right..
after that ragna dance on tum hi ho once again...superb...😳...and on ragna dance i like saks pov seen their passionate dance and their love and his making conclusion that they are perfect for each other.
it was nice to see raghav's trust on kalpi that she is his kalpi and she only love him and she will always be his only that she will not cheat him...she loves him only ...it does not matter to whom with kalpi dance and talks...he has his trust on his kalpi always...
peeyush got slapped from raghav and kalpi's thunder on been hug with her...peeyush deserves that.👏
after that ragna scolding each other in raghav's chamber ...specially raghav's scolding kalpi...it was showing raghav's concern for kalpi to be safe always from guys with bad intentions ...kalpi's innocence can lead her to worst which raghav don't want to happen on any condition ...he want to be safe her always...raghav always want her to safe from every person with bad intentions whether it was from kaoors or from peeyush.
it was so pure how kalpi calmed him and his fear to loose her...she knows how to handle raghav in worst to worst situation.
once again chamber romance 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳
😆 sonal is not believing that raghav can be so romantic😆...why not she ...coz she had not witnessed ragna's romance live telecast😆 like saks has witnessed.😆 otherwise she would not have asked such question..


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Posted: 10 years ago
intezar intezar intezar mujhe hai update ka... 😳




dida update plzzz 😃 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
comment for part 23
actually by mistake i had read part 24 before part 23 so commented for part 24 before this comment..hope you did not mind.

coming to update chahat..
superb update..rammy conversation was fabulous specially from raghav's part ..i love his every word about his and kalpi's relation and the trust exist in btw them that kalpi is his soul mate ...she is his love ..his world and being a wife she has all rights to know about his every deed and actions..kalpi has full right to show her anger for him for his misdeed ...she has full right to ask him about his involvement in pakhi's defaming case..though she has complete doubt about his involvement in this defamation of pakhi...and at the end he blurted out the real truth behind his involvement after being questioned by kalpi...this is the honesty which is exists in every relation of husband and wife.

😆sammy was lost in his dream girl's land😆...chahat now sammy badly needs a companion😉

gauri was yet hesitate to be open with the counselor ...she wants to be with herself only ...the pain she had felt in those years is refraining her to be open with any person...

in the office ...kalpi was thinking about raghav's defamation towards pakhi but besides this she was also thinking about her and raghav's marriage revelation in front of the society coz she was feeling lack of her husband, her love ,her companion and her real home i.e,,,singhania mansion ..in her life...she was feeling lonely without her all deserving rights ...it was showing her pain to being a lonely inspite of having everything in her life.
but also in all this her thoughts she did not forgot raghav's coffee daily routine..she herself made his coffee and for sammy too..
the way kalpi placed coffee on the table in front of raghav and sammy with thuddd i was like 🤣 coz at that time it was worth to saw rammy faces...now rammy has to bear her anger and sammy sammy sammy...🤣 gosh he was confused on why kalpi was behaving with him with the same manner like she was behaving with raghav...and raghav's answer to his question..."for been my partner in my crime"...i just love this dialogue.😳

conference meeting ragna eyetalk...pakhi's stubbornness ...and raghav's making kalpi agree to drive to hotel together was nice...

again romance and that too of trial room😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳..blushy blushy...

finally sonal got to know about ragna ...that kalpi is in love with raghav ...so detective sonal's mission is half completed😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
finally done with the comments on all updates...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Charu Please update it's been 1 whole week
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Posted: 10 years ago
Beautiful update Charu, loved it.
Raghav and Kalpi's love, attraction, desperation and uncontrolled emotions are so beautifully portrayed in your words.
It was lovely to read this chapter and feel what the two are going through.
Feelin little sorry for Peeyush..lol

Saks is just awesome.. hope you have planned a love life for him too 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago

Hi Charu dear,

We are missing you very much.
Pls come back soon.
Infact,our days are not ending well without reading ur ff's as well Vish's and Sugi's'
SO PLS EK CHOTTU TINY WEENY UPDATE POST KARDONO NAA MWAHS LOTS AND LOTS
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Posted: 10 years ago
Missing ur updates 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Dil tarap tarap ke keh reha hai aa bhi ja tu humse aankh na chura tujhe kasam se aa bhi...
Dil tarap tarap ke de reha hai ye sada tumhari ho chuki hun mei tumhare paas hun sada...


Well i kno its a romantic song but dida not fair...no update...plzzz update dida...sachi ab to dil update ke liye tarap hi reha hai...

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