The Marriage Story: Ragna FF; Part-23, Part-24(Edited) Pg-131, 31/10 - Page 98

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: chahat4u

Thanks for wonderful compliment again. Well you know initially I had planned Sonal to be Sammy's love interest. But later on things changed and somehow with the options I gave to readers (introducing new character wasn't in that poll) readers chose Maya with Sammy. Sonal will be with Saakshya now. See, i really need this break now I realise, LOL. With a loaded minded good tracks and organised ones can't come. I may utilise this time to organise tracks. But right now I am really in a break mood, haven't thought of any FF at all till now and don't plan to for this week at least. From next week i may think of good tracks and then return only after I think things are better placed. Why do I think my break's gonna be a long one now, LOL. 😆


I know... same here. I hate clutter, whether it is mind or a room. Can't function properly without removing it. Can understand the reason for your break. Enjoy while you can... Don't forget to come back...lol.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Double dhamaka!! Ek ke saath ek free 😃 and we greedy, bhukkad people still craving for more 😆 thnx for the double update charu! And the updates were as always awesome.
My special thanx to peeyush, just becsuse of him we got ragna's office romance scene. 😛
Edited by ban18 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: shoonya9

Perfect VIBGYOR of all the emotions charu, be it anger or love hidden in disguise of anger, the insecurity, jealousy, possessiveness, over protection can be sooo sweet nd Only u could do it. How sweet of you darling. 😃 🤗 ❤️ Thanks. 😳 But I want to say I cannot write anything without the support and feedback of awesome readers like you.😃

Both the updates are beyond comments and u dont need feedback but just applauds for it👏
just loved the fflashback, the Convo with Gauri, sweet sharing with Sonal nd a true friend Sonal who understood things which Kalpi didn't say nd yet didn't make her uncomfortable. And I think now u should make Kalpi call Raghav Rags as though both of them hv been deprived of true love before they met each other insecurities of Raghav are far more deeprooted nd Kalpi calling him rags would really soothe him. Also let Kalpi plan some more surprises with Sammy, Sonal nd Sakshya which will make raghav feel special nd more secured. Thanks for the suggestions, I'll keep them in mind for future updates. 😃🤗
You were simply superb when Kalpi told sakshya tht although they we're publicly nit together, no one has right to hurt or punish Raghav fixing Sakshya. My god take a bow Charu if this is a separation track, what will they do when they r officially together? U already gave the hints in their hotel dance. The additions in edition were icing on the cake. He showed openly in disguise yes they are truely RAGNA.
Thanks for liking it. I don't know now what will I do when the separation track would be over, LOL. 😆😛
Loved the way he fixed Peeyush in office and what followed in his chamber. Now awaiting for Sunday dinner outing. And now that u hv introduced Maya r u planning to make Kalpi too insecured nd jealous? Gosh these twos are beyond all these, yet very eager to see role of Maya.
We'll I don't think ppl celebrate both teej nd karwa Chauth as these two festivals r observed in diff parts, but ye to RAGNA hain, if u hv planned go ahead with all the fasts nd festivals u hv thought becoz u will defo give a beautiful dimension to their relations with each event. That would be a day-time outing, something of picnic kind. Let's see how well I am able to show Maya's role. I don't knonw about all parts of India, but we celebrate both Teej and Karwachauth. But in our family fast is kept only on Karwachauth. Teej is celebrated in various parts of India in their own customary manners. Actually someone had requested to show Diwali part, and I liked the idea.S o to show Diwali I cannot skip Karwachauth.Though now it ll be much later than Diwali. 😆

Once again three cheers to you and very sorry for delayed response SEPROMANCE QUEEN No need to say sorry sweetheart, one of my most precious readers. 😃 🤗 ❤️ in fact I should be the one thanking you. Some unpleasantness definitely make one realise the importance of pleasant ones.😉😃 Lots of love dear. ❤️❤️🤗

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: aanchal57

Sry 4 the delay dear...I loved ur both updates like always...I was eagerly w8ng 4 ur updates...I loved Sammy taunting raghav,how typical husband he is bt It shows his luv,trust 4 kalpi..when vl u give Sammy's luv ,poor soul w8ng 4 her since so longgg...seriously gauri need counselor ,,it vl help her 2 come out of her sorrows nd pain...I loved kalpi anger the way she was showing 2 raghav nd poor Sammy also got trapped...I loved flashback of dressing room omg I m blushing like hell...loved mil dil convo... raghav was feeling alone during trio date..lol kalpi dance wid saakshya omg poor raghav...loved ragna dance they perfect...omg poor peeyush got slapped frm raghav ,,,I knw he deserve it...now don't ask abt office romance plzzz it was breath taking...
Continue soon nd I hope u vl bk soon

No need to say sorry my friend. I know whenever you are free, you do give me feedback. In fact I am late these days in giving replies to comments. Yes, Raghav's trust for Kalpi shall not vanish, at least in my FFs, even if people like drama more. I don't like the feeling of hurting someone more than necessary in FFs, especially in RagNa ones. Sammy k liye Maya aa rahi hai, as per reader's choice; or else it will be some new girl if I decide to change.
Yes, Gauri's wounds shall heal slowly with the help of counsellor. Thanks for loving the updates, especially blush-blush parts, LOL.How sweet of you to praise them even though I know about your personal tastes. Such a sweetheart you are. 😃 🤗 In the end thanks again you gave feedback on each and every part. 😃 and now how emotional I am while giving you reply on this comment of yours, and you know the reason very well! 😭 Sometimes I do end up getting confused when it comes to here, but then I have to learn to respect myself first, as long as it is not over-reaction. 😕 Love you so-so much darling, always. True friend which you are. 😃🤗❤️

Hey, hope you are not upset with my late reply? 😃 n hope I could make up for it. Muah, Hugs.😃🤗❤️
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: fairylover

Mind blowing update Charu... How do u manage to give such romantic updates??

Kalpi's anger is justified... She is not weak here and I like it. She loves Rags a lot... She cherishes his memories... Loves his gifts and cares about him but still doesn't encourage him in his wrong doings... she is strong enough to stay away from Rags for his betterment.

Love flashback and Kalpi's dress.. reminds me of Rachana's blue dress she wore in EMA success party... I can imagine how pretty she will look in red.

Sonal-Kalpi's fshp is amazing... Sonal understands her without words.. n Kalpi too felt bad after lying her and decided to speak the truth. I like how Sonal directly questioned her.. shows her good side. i wish someday Kalpi shares her secret with Sonal as i am sure Sonal will be a grwat support for her.

Sammy is funny here as well... paying for being a best friend and his dream girl... Who is she?? Is she going to enter soon?? Well I will wait for some more time to know the answer.

Pakhi... i feel pity for her. She is paying for her parent's deeds...But this time u showed that she is possessive about Rags.. hope she doesn't turn negative on knowing the truth.

Waiting for u to come back with one more update... Neways enjoy ur break till then.

Love u swthrt n sorry for not replying to ur pm regarding Love revisited... due to some issues I was not able to come online.


Ha ha... thanks for finding them romantic! 😃 I only try to make it romantic, but is readers who feel it si romantic and that adds to the beauty if there is. Oh yes, I sued to love both Raghav and Kalpi in EMA, both were strong, and how Kalpi matched Raghav in being strong and not supporting wrong, but still showing her love and concern.

Oh that party dress I had not thought of, but now that you mention, I can see it was kind of similar. Rachana looks very good and hot in modern dresses.Wish they had shown her true beauty in EMA also. Later on western wear had completely vanished and she was seen only in Indian suits. I'd have preferred her look in both.

Thanks for liking Sonal-Kalpi friendship. Well, as for now Maya is supposed to be Sammy's girlfriend, as per reader's choice. But then, let's see how future tracks turn out to be. Pakhi I will have to turn grey as readers hate her like anything and wanted me to either turn her grey or negative and then kill her!

This time I don't think I am going to return with at least this FF's updates any sooner. I've some reasons for it. 😳

I understood you must be having some issues when you did not reply for that PM about LR, hope you are better now though. take care and love you. ❤️
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: rani214

charu...superb ragnalicious hawwt hawwt update...thanxs sweetie for wonderful back to back updates🤗

Kalpi ka gussa my god... bechare rags n love guru ki bolti band hogayi lol...rammy convo was superb...loved rags honesty
Trial room scene was super hot☺️
Loved car scene
Saaks was fun...bechara raghav was already feeling jealous by der bonding n den saaks purposly increasing his jealousy by dancing intimately wit kalpi...loved d justification she gave for raghav...n yes only kalps has right to punish raghav
Loved Ragna sizzling hot dance 😳...poor saakshya ki icecrm bhi melt hogayi 😆
gauri was feeling guilty n she said she need her dil was nice
Peeyush deserved dat jhor ka thappad...ab to kalpi ke aas pass bhi nahi jaayega😆
Offc ragna scene was awesome...ragna confrontation...raghav expressed his fear n den ahem ahem 😳
Finally sonal ko ragna ke baare me pata chala
pakhi bechari paagal ho jayegi apne ramu ke bina ...let dem meet soon😉
Would love to read karwachawt scene...but instead of modifying teej scene write new one in upcoming updates na😉😃
w8ng for Maya's entry n ragna outing with saaks n sonal


Love you too for liking the updates. ❤️ Thanks for loving Kalpoi gussa and Rammy scenes. 😃 Thanks for loving all the above-mentioned scenes by you, you always give a sweet and detailed feedback. Thanks a lot! 😃🤗

LOL, Ramu and Pakhi are in high demand! But I am not so good at comedy he he 😆 I'll see what can I do about it. 😛 Thanks for karwachauth suggestion. You'll have to wait for the next update though. 🤔
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ban18

Double dhamaka!! Ek ke saath ek free 😃 and we greedy, bhukkad people still craving for more 😆 thnx for the double update charu! And the updates were as always awesome.

My special thanx to peeyush, just becsuse of him we got ragna's office romance scene. 😛


Thanks Rishu for liking the Double Dhamaka and even for craving for more. 😆 😃 Glad you loved them, thanks also for giving your sweet feedback. 😊😃 I'll pass on your Thanks to Peeyush, LOL. 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice update charu...
well expressed pakhi's evil plan and ragha's backfire to her plan or say he has been a spoilsport for her plan🤣..pakhi ki behes gayi pani mein🤣...how fool she is ...and her plan was hilarious😆

but raghav was very near to her plan's succession but thanks to raghav's extra running mind he made the situation in his favour from pakhi's hand.smart raghav singhania.
what was that in the car...ramuuu🤣 well hats off to raghav to spy pakhi from ramu...just perfecttt😳...perfechi rakhi😆

raghav's acting in front of kapoors was fabulous ...how beautifully he handled the situation and further postponed his and khi's marriage revelation in front of the society and media...which bounded kapoors to agree on the same...well played raghav.
again ragna romance☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️☺️ ☺️☺️ ☺️☺️ ☺️☺️ ☺️...i m still blushing chahat..
car romance...awesome...raghav was right only he has the right to see kalpi with those eyes which is prohibited for anyone else...he did not want to compromise with her dignity...actually i like his "dignity" dialogue.😳

i m extremely sorry for late comment chahat...
i will do comment for part 23 and 24 separately but after reading those updates..
i hope u will understand.

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: chahat4u


<font color="#0000ff" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">No need to say sorry my friend. I know whenever you are free, you do give me feedback. In fact I am late these days in giving replies to comments. Yes, Raghav's trust for Kalpi shall not vanish, at least in my FFs, even if people like drama more.I don't like the feeling of hurting someone more than necessary in FFs, especially in RagNa ones. Sammy k liye Maya aa rahi hai, as per reader's choice; or else it will be some new girl if I decide to change. </font>
<font color="#0000ff" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">Yes, Gauri's wounds shall heal slowly with the help of counsellor. Thanks for loving the updates, especially blush-blush parts, LOL.How sweet of you to praise them even though I know about your personal tastes. Such a sweetheart you are.😃🤗In the end thanks again you gave feedback on each and every part. 😃and now how emotional I am while giving you reply on this comment of yours, and you know the reason very well!😭Sometimes I do end up getting confused when it comes to here, but then I have to learn to respect myself first, as long as it is not over-reaction.😕Love you so-so much darling, always. True friend which you are.😃🤗❤️</font>

<font color="#0000ff" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">Hey, hope you are not upset with my late reply?😃n hope I could make up for it. Muah, Hugs.😃🤗❤️</font>



Aww cooo. cwttt of u...baby don't b sad...
Eagerly w8ng 4 next part...Oops...!! I 4got I seriously love trail room scenes nd yaa agree 4 dat office romance,it was CT ( u knw the ful form of CT plzzz try 2 remember )...lol
Okkk I won't start here...
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: chahat4u


Thanks Rishu for liking the Double Dhamaka and even for craving for more. 😆 😃 Glad you loved them, thanks also for giving your sweet feedback. 😊😃 I'll pass on your Thanks to Peeyush, LOL. 😳

Nd plz ask him to hop behind and around kalpi like this always so that we could get more jealous nd insecure raghav nd more ragna romance. 😆

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