RagNa FF : Arranged Love Update on Page 26. 3 Feb 2017 - Page 12

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Posted: 9 years ago
Finally! Firstly Thanks Sejal for making Deepu update this FF! Used to wait for updates of this one so eagerly. 😃
Coming to update rocking update. I guess all hell will break loose on Kalpi? But she will say yes for the sake of her father. Uske baad kya? šŸ¤” Eager to see how Raghav and Kalpi come close; or how does Kalpi forget Prem?

P.S.: I m not commenting on Prem-Kalpi kiss. 😭
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow! This is such a beautiful story.
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Posted: 9 years ago
You called me Dhakkan????

😭 and you said, you had planned to complete all your stories this time!

Update... was fabulous! Wonderful... and I loved it... šŸ˜†

Prem and Kalpi.. šŸ˜† as I always say- CVs were fools... and writers are surely more creative than those DJs! woh sirf gaana banajne layak hai...
they could have sure shown this triangle... it's anytime, better then seeing Pookhi close n Kis... to Raghav 🤢 They wasted Prem ka character!
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Posted: 9 years ago
Lovely concept. Lovely update. It will be a sheer waste to let it go without completing. Thanks a million to one who was able to persuade you to continue! Please continue.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Great story! At first I thought the dance teacher was raqhav but this is better so plz update ASAP!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
Superb
Read all parts
Update soon next part
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Posted: 9 years ago

AUTHOR'S NOTE..

Hello my dearies, my sweeties šŸ˜› I am back.. Yeah.. Due to Sejal again šŸ˜† I made a promise to her that I would update and I never break promises 😳 So here you go.. 😃


PART 14

She didn't expect these words to come out. She felt a lone tear drop from her eyes and onto the floor. But she didn't care. Kamla looked between her husband and daughter. Pakhya looked intently at his sister. Kalpi wanted to cry. No !! Cry would be an understatement. She wanted to wail. She wanted to scream and cry out loud. She could feel three pairs of eyes on her. The room was very silent. It was as if even if a pin was dropped on the floor, the sound would be heard. Kalpi turned around and ran out of the room. Kamla started to run after her when Pakhya stopped her,"Mom... No.. Give her some time. Let her think. Let her ponder over her thoughts and clear her mind and then decide." Kamla agreed seeing the reason behind her son's words. Kalpi ran past a worried and concerned Raghav and out of the hospital. She didn't care that it was raining. She didn't care that she was getting drenched. She let her tears fall freely. She ran to where her legs took her. THE BAR. Kalpi wasn't the kind of person that would drink. But now she needed it. She got a bottle and started walking again taking huge gulps of the alcohol that sent burning feelings through her throat.

Prem was getting ready for bed when he heard the doorbell ring. He opened it to find Kalpi standing there with a bottle of alcohol in hand and in an inebriated state. Bewildered, he pulled her inside and closed the door. He looked at her. She was fully drenched which made her clothes transparent and clungy. He asked,"What happened to you ?" That broke it. Kalpi wailed her heart out. Prem was shocked at her sudden outburst and caught her in his arms comforting her,"Shh.. Shh.. Now don't cry. Tell me what happened." And the entire hospital scene came out. Kalpi told about what her father told her. Prem listened to her. She grew sleepy due to all that alcohol and started feeling touchy-feely all of a sudden. She turned and kissed Prem on the lips. A bit reluctant at first, he responded back with as much enthusiasm and passion. Things grew heated between the two. Kalpi tugged on his shirt while he fiddled with the threads of her sphagetti top. Soon both of their shirts were down on the floor. Prem's lips moved to her cheeks, jawline, neck and throat. He sucked at her throat making her moan. Her fingers moved to his chest working wonders on his chisled abs. His fingers fiddled with her skirt and soon both their bottoms were discarded too leaving them in a skin-to-skin contact. As the rain poured out and the thunder sounded in the sky, they both made love resting in the warmth of each other.

The next morning, Kalpi woke up to the light falling on her face. It seemed familiar. She woke up to find herself in her own room. She sat up, holding her head. It throbbed a bit. How did she land up at her home !! The last thing she remembered was running out of the hospital and then something else. But she couldn't remember what that something else was. She heard a knock on the door and saw her mother come in with a glass. She sat down beside her and asked, "How do you feel now, Beta ?" Kalpi replied weakly, "I don't know Mom. My head is throbbing." Kamla gave her the glass and asked her to drink it. Kalpi made a yucky face after taking a sip, "Yuck !!! Kalaa !!!" Kamla said,"Its good for health. Now drink it fully before you make me shove it down your throat." Kalpi drank it quietly making different faces at each sip. Kamla said, "You should thank Raghav." Kalpi asked, "Why Mom ??" Kamla asked,"Kalpi, do you even know what state you were in when you came home ?" Kalpi said,"No.." Kamla said, "You were found unconscious on the road. You had fainted on the road. It was luck that Raghav had found you. He was so worried that you hadn't returned home and went out to search for you. He was the person that brought you home." Kalpi looked down at her lap. Raghav was really sweet. But she loved Prem. She decided that she would tell her family about Prem. Kamla got a call. She attended it and her eyes went wide, "What !!!?? I am coming right now." Kalpi asked,"What happened Mom ??" Kamla said, "Its your father. He got a minor heart-attack." Kalpi felt her breath hitch in her throat. Without thinking about anything, she flung the sheets off of her and stood up. He inner legs pained. But the pain was nothing.

She wanted to see her father. She rushed with her mother to the hospital. Her heart broker when she saw her father. He was lying on the bed with the oxygen mask on and drips on his hand. She forgot about Prem. All she wanted now was her father... She heard her mother ask, "When will he be alright ?" The nurse said, "He will be alright if he doesn't take any tension. Don't talk about anything that might give him shock or things that he never expected to happen but had happened. Instead talk about things that make him happy." Kalpi walked out of the ICU and to the reception where a small idol of Lord Ganesha was kept. She folded her hands and prayed, "Hey Modak Raj !! What will I do ?? I am torn between love and my father.. What will I do ?? Please help me out." She noticed two different types of flowers decorating him. She closed her eyes and thought. Moments later, she joined her hands and prayed, "Hey Bhagwaan !! You are sarvagyaani. You know everything including what is right and what is wrong for me. You know my thoughts. Please show me the right decision. As she streched her hands towards the idol, a marigold fell from the idol and into the hand. She opened her eyes and saw the marigold. She wiped her tears and went back to the ICU. Her father had opened his eyes. She looked at her mother who was holding her father's hands and looking at her. Pakhya was sitting on the other side holding his father's other hand. Kalpi said, "I have something to tell you." Pakhya said, "Go along Tinkerbell.." She took a deep breath and said, "I'll marry Raghav.."


PHEW !! That was a hurry burry chapter. I know most of you are waiting to kick me due to that Prem-Kalpi scene over there šŸ˜† but hey !! Wht's a story without a little masala !!! šŸ˜‰ Come one.. I am not bad. I gave news about Kalpi agreeing to marry Raghav šŸ˜› There is still more into this story.. Please LIKE and COMMENT.. 😳


Parody Time..

Prem : Yay !! Yes !! Wahooo !!!

Raghav : What happened to you, Monkey Man ?? Did Miss. Lady King Kong finally agree to marry you ?

Prem : Hah !!! Laugh all you want Mr. Humourless Humour. In the end you will be the one vrying that I DID NOT GET KALPI 😭😭

Raghav : Why would I do that when am getting married to her ??

I start backing away towards the door to run away..

Prem : What !! But that's impossible... Me and Kalpi made... Wait a minute... (turns towards me).. Veeraaa !!!!!

Raghav : Veeraaa !!!

I start to run.. They chase me...

Me : Guys !! Please LIKE and COMMENT.. I would have loved to stop by and talk but right now, I have to run for my life..

Prem and Raghav : Veeerrraaa !!!!

Me : Ok. Thanks.. Bye... LIKE and COMMENT please...

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Posted: 9 years ago
Kasmanukhaani ...hatto mere raaste se !!! (*pushes prem & Raghav off my way (they collapse ofcourse)*)

Veeerrraaa !!!!!!!😲😲
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Posted: 9 years ago
Kitne mahine 0ehle promise kiya tha??? Yaad nai aa raha hai.. Super happy to see you have updated... and harr baar due to Sejal ab likhna bandh kar.. warna... logo ki mujhse tujhe manane ki umeed badh jayegi... yeh story toh ab... khatam kar hi dena.. back to back update se..
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Posted: 9 years ago
did prem n kalpi sleep with each other
update soon

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