Ragna(Ashna) FF:Richie Rich v/s Mother India 29b -Pg 162 15/9

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maarushkaa

@maarushkaa

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Posted: 11 years ago

My hands were itching since so many days 2 write an ff.Finally the day has come...Exams over atlast !!

This is my first try at writing an ff ...so apologies in advance for my amateur writing as I'm not as good as many ppl in here !

MISSING THE GOOD OLD RAGNA DAYS WID THEIR SMALL FIGHTS & HIDDEN CARE IN IT!!

So here goes my ff from d extreme scratch!!

Part 2- Pg 3 Part 17- Pg 57 Part 29 b - Pg 162

Part 3- Pg 4 Part 18- Pg 65

Part 4- Pg 7 spoiler- Pg 75

Part 5- Pg 8 Part 19- Pg 79

Part 6- Pg 11 Part 20- Pg 86

Part 7 -Pg 14 Part 21 -Pg 93

Part 8- Pg 16 Part 22- Pg 98

Part 9- Pg 17 Part 23- Pg 103

Part 10- Pg 21 Part 24 - Pg 110

Part 11- Pg 23 Part 25 - Pg 117

Part 12- Pg 25 Part 26 - Pg 125

Part 13- Pg 31 Part 27 - Pg 137

Part 14- Pg 36 Part 28 - Pg 142

Part 15- Pg 43 teaser - Pg 149

Part 16- Pg 48 Part 29 a - Pg 155

Characters- Kalpana,Paakhi,Raghav,Sammy as in the show (their personalities)No incidents of childhood have taken place ... so rags & kalpi are completely unknown to each other!!

Part 1

The airport was buzzing with ppl all around.Some welcoming their relatives,some bidding farewell & some simply waiting with boards for their guests. Amongst them stood a feminine beauty with a dusky complexion , beautiful eyes no less than a deer with her bags.She was none other than KALPANA VITTHAL JADHAV.

Her mom ,dad & brother were giving her tips & asking her 2 take care of herself.They were both happy & sad as their daughter had come first in the Mumbai university & had proved that education & pursuing a dream was everybody's right ... even of a maid's daughter .But they were also sad that their raajkumari had 2 go 2 USA for her job away from them & her country 'INDIA'.

Suddenly someone came from behind & closed kalpana's eyes. A bright smile spread on her face as she knew who the person was. Kalpana turned around and gave Paakhi a hug.

Kamla :AAkhir Seeta-Geeta mil hi gaye.

(Unlike the show, KAmla is successful in maintaining a balance between both kalpi & pakhi )

Both the girls chuckled and bid farewell 2 their respective parents.They took aashirwaad from their elders & hugged their kamla maa tightly making neetu jealous. It was time for them to go .

Pakya :Kalpu ..thik se jaana...ticket sambhal ke rakhna ...TC aaye toh usko ticket dikha dena...koi kuch khaane ko de toh lena mat...Aur khidki se haath baahar toh bilkul bhi mat nikalna ...Darwaaze pe khade mat rehna...

Kalpana had great laugh as she knew that her brother was doing all this on purpose just 2 make her feel better.

Pakya :(at the end) WILL MISS U KALPU ...

This brought tears to kalpi's eyes but she knew she had 2 control herself as her family was doing the same.

She gave a final look to her aai & thought "You will be proud of this daughter of yours !!" Both the girls entered the airport.

Paakhi :Finally the day has come.We have become independent in our lives officially. But I am happy 2 have u by my side like always .

Kalpana nodded in agreement.

The girls were travelling by the same plane but in different classes. Kalpana in the economy class & Paakhi in the business class. But this difference didn't really affect their friendship. After the checking & formalities the girls boarded & got into their respective seats.

Kalpana was happy that she had got the window seat. As the plane took off she stared outside the window as the things were getting smaller & smaller. She looked around her & observed ppl. That was her fav game. She could easily make out who were first time travellers like her & who were not. Aware of the long journey , she had come prepared & plugged in her earphones listening to songs.

Suddenly she overheard a conversation between 2 females next 2 her. That's when she realised that the plane will be taking a halt at U.K. She closed her eyes & continued listening to songs unknown of the importance the halt at UK was going to be in her life .What would happen ?? Who would she meet ??

Any guesses guys !!😊😊😊

Do let me know if u find it boring. All kinds of comments/suggestions are welcomed , even showing me any errors if present. Thank you !!

Edited by mariee - 11 years ago

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Amy

@AmyChoco

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Posted: 11 years ago

Nope..not boring at all!! good start..keep going!!😛

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mishti058

@mishti058

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Posted: 11 years ago

Interesting...good start...plz continue... 😊

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Mihika

@Mihika

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Posted: 11 years ago

very nice start dear beautiful update 👏 and i think that sammy and raghav is going to enter the scene at UK halt😆 but dear where is prem he din come to see off the girls at airpert atleast for pakhi he shud have come na bhai hai 😆

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samy18

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Posted: 11 years ago

its awesome and interesting do continue soon👏👏👏

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maarushkaa

@maarushkaa

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Mihika
very nice start dear beautiful update 👏 and i think that sammy and raghav is going to enter the scene at UK halt😆 but dear where is prem he din come to see off the girls at airpert atleast for pakhi he shud have come na bhai hai 😆

Assume prem 2 b sumwhere else ... he will cum in d picture later a!😊

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Roshna

@RoshnA1

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Posted: 11 years ago

Awesome start. Rammy will enter at Uk halt right!?:)

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maarushkaa

@maarushkaa

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Posted: 11 years ago

im sooo happy ... my first ff ever got so many comments ...cant help smiling like an idiot ...with my mom wondering which psychiatrist should be consulted for me ...anyways ty ppl for making my day .