Ragna(Ashna) FF:Richie Rich v/s Mother India 29b -Pg 162 15/9 - Page 124

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: spontaneousmini

Very sweet Update.

Adorable to read Kalpi faking so she could make Rags come to "Hope".
The whole celebrations scenario, cake, photo session super adorable as it is moving strong towards the relationship and developing soft feelings for each other.
But then they have to fight in the end to keep it "normal".
Noone is impressed...

Sabko ho rahi hai Khabar chupke chupke ... Do Dil ...!! ☺️❤️

Jaldi update 👏


😆😆 That song is perfect !!
What do u mean by noone is impressed ??
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Posted: 10 years ago
Amazing update Marushka.. I am back forum after a looong time nd the first thing I checked was ur FF.. Such an amazing update it is.. Loved the way this two Nut cases are developing feelings for each other.. Awesome work..I just wanna read more nd more.. Update soon buddy :)
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: idonkno

Hello!! Hello!! Hello!! Here I come 😆!!! U missed me, right😉? I missed you 😕?? nah 😆!! I missed RR and MI more 😳😉😆 LOL!! kidding 😆 I missed you Marushkaa and this fiction!! I was so eagerly waiting for you to leave me a tweet but sorry I was caught up with work, classes and assignments and hence I could not reply earlier. Anyways, bear with me because this will be a very very long comment 😆


Part 29 (a): short, sweet, non-RagNa one and yet so important keeping in mind the nail-biting teaser you had left us before!! So now I can join the dots and know the reason behind RR coming to India! I always knew Sammy would be the one to give Raghav a false information regarding Kalpi's marriage 😃 But, it would be worth reading how the trio execute the plan 😉 Obviously, Sammy only could have handled Raghav but need someone else to handle Kalpi( Pakhi in this case I would say). Oh wait 😕!! Raghav still does not know that Rohish is Kalpi's brother? So will he be used as a bait (GROOM) to lure our RR into the trap? And Pakhi be used as a reason for taking Kalpi to India and arranging an event which will be mistaken for a wedding by RR?

Com'on spill the beans my lil devil!! You have made me brainstorm about the teaser so much that now I eat, drink, sleep and breathe MoRi MoRi 😆😉 Have mercy on me 😆😉

Part 29 (b) : So I had expected that maybe you will alteast throw some light on the teaser but my lil devil is so intelligent in building suspense and making me so go NUTS!! I HATE you for doing this (LOL! Don't take it literally 😆

RR!! How can you concentrate on work when you keep thinking about MI 24/7 😆😉? Com'on admit it that you are under the love spell of MI!! All you can do is keep thinking about her, dreaming about her and missing her 😆 I guess you should be renamed as Majnoo Richie Rich (MRR)😆🤣 See you are in such a trance that you don't even look at the caller id before picking up the call and then you have to look at the caller id to make sure that you are not hallucinating and MI is calling you in reality 😆 Literally you have become MRR 😆!!

Awww!! She is a little hurt and you are so worried for her! But, still can't forget being yourself and hiding those emotions, haina? Damn, why did you have to taunt about her eyes amidst such a concerned tone of yours !! This is not fair 😭

But as it is said "One can be the master of what one does, but never of what one feels." You can control what you say but not what you feel and hence without even waiting for her to finish her sentence you just hurried to HER 😆 Not your fault RR!! Its just the feelings that you have for MI. It will always draw you closer to her even when you try to hide it behind your words or action 😃

That was so good of her to celebrate his birthday and that too with the kids who were as alone as him in this world. A lot has changed between them after that night. That explains her getting lost in his dark-brown eyes and she knows what is hidden behind those eyes 😉 And that aspect of him (the other caring and emotional side of him) is drawing her more closer to HIM😃

I guess rather than someone doing something for him, it was more about MI doing something for HIM that made him feel so content. Love is such a strange emotion. It is ever evolving and this story is a perfect example of this 😳.

She knew that it will be hard for him to forget the past and move on at once and I guess she was right in thinking about this way as she is still does not know about her importance to him.

At a point I feel that Raghav knows the truth and realises that it was not his fault but he needs someone to tell him that and who better than MI? Right?

Inside of all of us there is the need and the desire to be heard, to have our innermost thoughts, feelings and desires expressed for others to hear, to see and to understand. We all want to matter to someone. And finally Raghav is experiencing this in his life and this explains how he agreed to MI rather than creating a fuss about his past today.

I am pretty sure he wished for their togetherness while blowing the candles 😃 Though not as a relation as far as I know him but I am sure he wants her to be with him always and forever 😆 Stupid MRR 😉 That is his reason to live and smile again and forever! And, somehow I feel those photos will make him accept the REASON!! Because, they are the speaking the truth (the reality) 😃

And he finally said it : don't think that any other man in this world has the capability of bearing u & ur stupid talks other than me.

How I wish they both had realised the hidden meaning behind this sentence? LOL!! I am expecting too much, right?

But as I say "...no one can do a thing about feelings, they exist and there's no way to censor them. We can reproach ourselves for some action, for a remark, but not for a feeling, quite simply because we have no control at all over it."

So I am keeping my hopes high and waiting for them to admit their feelings soon! I know they will in a rush of emotions and very soon


OMG!! I have lots to say but I am running short of time!! Sorry If it did not turn out as long as promised because I feel I have lost track!! I am completely lost in this masterpiece and there so many emotions and thoughts captivating my attention!! Sorry Marushkaa. I know you understand the effect of your story on my mind 😆 Love you!! Eagerly waiting for the next part!!

Brilliant update as usual

"It is beautiful to express love and even more beautiful to feel it." (Ain't it already happening in this story LOL though unintentionally 😆 and this is the best part of these RagNalicious updates). Both MI and RR have come a long way and it is completely evident from every tits and bits of the updates 😳


P.S: As for this comment I had focused on the stuff which I felt were important but I feel get sidelined due to the direct incidents which are mostly noticed in any fiction. I know you have already been praised for those incidents and hence I decided to point out those stuff which were not directly stated but still were the central part of the update and made it complete 😃


Priti ...Priti ...Priti ...
Ofcrs i missed u !😃😃
How come u always know whats in my mind ??
God knows from where i had somewhere begun to feel dat i force u to comment on my ff by tweeting u (since u dont comment on any other ffs on forums)!! I was gonna ask u the same as well in a pm... & here u were already answering that Q in the very beginning of ur comment even b4 me asking it 😆😆 Aur kitna impress karegi tu mujhe ??😆😆
Anyways glad that u wait for my tweets & nopt reply forcefully ... thank u for clearing my small misconception even b4 me questioning u .,... LOVE U FoR THAT !!😃😃
Bear with u for long comments ??? Girly... I love long comments. & here comes an even long reply to ur comment.
There's nothing like nail-biting in that teaser for u ... u have already guessed it correctly. I just have to weave in a story so that it fits into the rest of my ff.
Raghav is yet unaware of Rohish being Kalpi's bro ... & hence he got ready topick her up the moment Kalpi took ROhish's name. (the injury lie)
I HATE you for doing this (LOL! Don't take it literally 😆
I have not taken it seriously. Even if u write it down a 1000 times I know ur comment will always end up wit " LOVE YA MARUSHKAA" So why shud i worry 😉😉
MRR 😆😆😆 & My RR gets a new tag !!
hat was so good of her to celebrate his birthday and that too with the kids who were as alone as him in this world. A lot has changed between them after that night. That explains her getting lost in his dark-brown eyes and she knows what is hidden behind those eyes 😉 And that aspect of him (the other caring and emotional side of him) is drawing her more closer to HIM
This is my fav part of the comment which i had leftit to the readers to understand by their ownselves. & as expected u did get those emotions correctly.
Raghav always knew it wasnt his fault ... but he was too young when he was bombarded with those accusations. That young age &the saturation over a period of time resulted into a deep scar on his heart & soul. Where hi beloved MI came as an anecdote to it !! ...KK ..I stop here or else i can go on & on , on this particular segment of my RR.
The pictures are supposed to play a major role in the last part of my ff... a secret b/w u n me😉😉
That other than me sentence was the khuraafati idea of ur devil's demonic brain. RR & MI toh sidhe hai ... they dont have brains like us , u see !!😆😆
U dont know what ur comments do to me. I wait for them like anythin, then when u write 1 i smile like anythin while reading it (with my poor mom thinkin "Meri bacchi paagal ho gayi hai") & get despo like anythin to reply on it 😆
THANK U for this comment & i have already sent it to where it belongs ... My screenshot collection !!😳
& thats the major reason i like ur comments. They are always somethin different ...sometimes making me also think "Haa yaar ... maine toh aisa socha hi nahi tha".

LOVE , MARUSHKAA
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Posted: 10 years ago
@ Marsuhka - Don't you dare think that I am being forced to reply 😡 I am just a bit occupied and hence missing from the forum. I can't stay away from this FF and hence sooner or later I read the update! And once I have read it I can not control myself from appreciating the hard work you have put in this FF! Don't forget to leave me a tweets as I come to know about the updates through that only 😃!! I am waiting for the next tweet now 😉 Make it soon! Please, Please Please 😭
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: idonkno

@ Marsuhka - Don't you dare think that I am being forced to reply 😡 I am just a bit occupied and hence missing from the forum. I can't stay away from this FF and hence sooner or later I read the update! And once I have read it I can not control myself from appreciating the hard work you have put in this FF! Don't forget to leave me a tweets as I come to know about the updates through that only 😃!! I am waiting for the next tweet now 😉 Make it soon! Please, Please Please 😭


Sorry for that ... never again will i think that u forcefully comment on my updates !!
Arey ... tweet to u is the 1st thing i do after clicking that post reply button (while posting a new update) 😃😃
Next update ... ahd no plans of starting it today ... par ab tune request kiya hai phir toh karna hi padega !!😆😆
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Chinu_Rose

Amazing update Marushka.. I am back forum after a looong time nd the first thing I checked was ur FF.. Such an amazing update it is.. Loved the way this two Nut cases are developing feelings for each other.. Awesome work..I just wanna read more nd more.. Update soon buddy :)


Oh thanku ... means a lot to me !!
Even i wanna update more & more & more 😆😆
Shall definitely update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: mariee

@ zidagidilse

hahahha... a long comment for a long update.
yaa ...the stroking part ! even i like it when my mom does dat to me.
saakhi ?? idhar mere se ek jodi ki love story khatam nahi ho rahi & u r asking for 1 more😆
kk ...on serious note i personally admire friendship a lot more than love. so , since the very beginnning i never had plans for sakhi other than they being good friends.
ofcourse usko accept karna hi padega. cupid conference aise hi thodi bithaai thi😉
How tru ! She is his reason to smile.
No other man has guts to bear mi ??? Na...even if anybody has, then rr will make sure that that man looses them & never dare to look at his mi again. after all she belongs to him only😳
MARUSHKAA

dear marushka u summarised my comment..well done..
no sakhi..its ok ..tumhare mind mein kuch aur pak rha hoga..😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
hey dear...luvd ur ff 😊😊😊 suprb update 👏

plz jaan nxt time pm me i m not rgulr... plz nd yes kalpi gtng married i dont thnk so...its a plan...sammy pakhi nd rohish ka plan😊 wt say dear

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