FF:RagNa:A tale of Hate,Friendship and Love(Part 10 updated on page 20 - Page 8

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...Shayna... thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow..thank u so much for the compliment dear 😳
....pratu.... thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow shayna dear superb update...plz jaldi update karo
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: ...pratu...

wow shayna dear superb update...plz jaldi update karo


Thanx dear..😊gonna update it shortly
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Posted: 11 years ago
#74
Thank u everyone for yours lovely comments and likes😃Here is the next part of my ff😊


Part 5


Sammy knocked the door which made Raghav come out of his past dreamworld
Raghav looked at him and said:Sammy you never knock the door and come
How come you changed your habbit in one day?
Raghav said it blankly as he was not completely out from his past memories
Sammy walked towards the seat and said :Oh come on Raghav i called you three times but i guess you were in some other world only😆
Is 'someone'bothering you? Sammy said giving more stress on 'someone' and was amused seeing Raghav's changing face expression
Raghav :What do you mean to say?
Sammy:You very well know what i mean to say
Raghav looked away and remained silent for a while as if Sammy knew what was he thinking about

Sammy was Raghav's best friend since college days and the manager of the company.He understood Raghav very well.Sammy was like a second brother to him

Meanwhile on the Road:
Kalpi was walking on the Road
Suddenly a car comes from front and hits her very hardly from the side
Her head hits the ground hard and her head starts profusely bleeding
The person hurriedly drives away the car
Kalpi layed unconscious on the road


Sammy:You were thinking about Kalpana naa?
Raghav glared at him and said angrily:Yes i was!Happy?
Sammy:Offo man why you getting angry?Acha leave her!I want to talk something important
Raghav spit his anger
Raghav:Say!
Sammy:I a time while had a talk with Mr.Khanna.He is quite impressed and interested in our project and has called you and your C.A next to next week to discuss about the finance scheme of the project.So did you finalized a C.A?
Raghav:Yes i finalised Kalpi...umm I mean Kal..Kalpana
Raghav couldnt understand why he was hesitating so much
Sammy smiled
He coughed a bit indirectly teasing him
Sammy:Are you sure?..I mean would she be able to handle this project?
Raghav:Yes she has one year experience of her proffession
I am sure she would do it..I will tell Arpita to Mail her the details so that she could start
Sammy:Hmmm
Sammy gets a call from his mom
Sammy tells Raghav that he has got an urgent work at home and will have to leave
They both shake hands,embrace each other and Sammy leaves

On The Road:
Kalpi goes unconscious.Slowly people start gathering around
Meanwhile a car stops at a far distance from the crowd
It was Sammy inside the car
The road was blocked as everyone were gathered there
He moves towards the crowd
He trys to move away the crowd but he sees kalpi lying there
His eyes widens up seeing her
Sammy:Oh God!Kalpana!
What the hell you looking at her..cant u all take her to hospital?stupid people!
Sammy without wasting further time takes her to hospital
At home
Kamla to Pakhi
Beta just call up kalpi and ask where is she?
Its getting dark
She didnt even call us
I am getting worried for her
Pakhi:Yes maa she told me that she will call me once the interview gets over
I will call her
Pakhi calls kalpi
Phone ring goes but none answers
Layers of tension gets on pakhi's forehead

Sammy hurriedly enters the hospital
Lays kalpi at the stretcher and calls for the doctor
Kalpi was immediately taken to the emergency ward
Sammy goes towards his car
He takes her phone
He sees that she has received many calls from her home
He redials the number.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#75
Y did u leave the FF wid a cliff hanger ? ?? i can't sleep at night now... 😆. If there is a suspense, I can't sleep at night. So please update the FF soon.. plz plz plz...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Very interesting update soon 👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome update
Omg!!! Kalpi is hurt, I like how Sammy tell those people off and took Kalpi to the hospital
I can't wait to know Raghav reaction on hearing about kalpi
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hey shayna dear kya point pe aake ruk gayi yaar...plz jaldi update karo i cant wait more plz..
BTW superb chap...
Edited by ....pratu.... - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome update...
continue soon... 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thank you so much everyone for the heart warming comments🤗
And very sorry for leaving it half way..will be updating soon 😊

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