FF:RagNa:A tale of Hate,Friendship and Love(Part 10 updated on page 20

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Hello and welcome my dear friends.This my very first ff.I Hope you all will enjoy reading it😛

FF:RagNa: A tale of Hate,Friendship and Love







Character Sketch:

Kalpi and pakhi : They both are sisters belonging to a middle class family.Kamla and Vitthal are their parents.A sweet loving family. Paakhi is younger to Kalpi. Both sisters love each other a lot.❤️

Raghav and Prem: Brothers and belong to a rich family.They lost their parents at a young age.They both lived with their grandmother.Raghav completed his graduation and took responsibility of Prem and the Singhania constructions. Prem respects and loves his brother a lot 😊





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Part 1 (Below)
Part 2
Part 3

Part 4

Part 5

Part 6

Part 7

Part 8

Part 9

Part 10
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Part 1:

It was a pleasant Monday Morning.Rain had just visited the city relieving the city from the unberable heat.Kalpi had just woke up from her sleep.It was a big day for her 😊 Her dream,her hardwork all depended on this day.
As she woke up she saw her younger sister pakhi sleeping peacefully with her mouth open.She giggled and closed her mouth.On doing this Pakhi woke up from her sleep
Pakhi:what di!let me sleep naa.
Kalpi:han han whos stopping u! What can one do if u sleep wid such wide open mouth.
Pakhi:haha whatever!Anyways u go get ready.Today is ur interview naa I am sure u will definately get dis job.
Kalpi:I hope i get dis job pakhi .I have great hopes.chal i will get ready nw.

Kalpi gets ready and goes to kamla and vitthal to take their blessings.She finishes her breakfast and leaves.Outside it was heavily raining.She trolled here and there but she didnt get a single autorickshaw.She decided to go by bus.

She somehow managed to reach office.She was ten minutes late and was fully drenched.She went towards the receptionist.
Kalpi:Excuse me, where is the interview for a C.A being held?
Receptionist:At 1st floor in the right corner.
Kalpi:Thank u
She headed towards first floor .The floor was wet as it was just cleaned.Kalpi stepped on the wet floor.
She lost her balance and was about to slip... But two strong arms Of Raghav caught hold of her. Kalpi closed her eyes out of fear.Raghav carefully watched kalpi's frightened face and a smile lightened up his face❤️.In his mind he said " Kalpana?"

...Hope u all like it 😛And i hope i did not bore u all.Please do give ur suggestions whether i shuld continue or not 😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Very nice...this forum is veryslow and there r so few ffs and ss ir os...infact this is second ff I guess...
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Does that mean ragna is a couple so that means paakhi and prem r couples
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: dreamyjennice

Does that mean ragna is a couple so that means paakhi and prem r couples

Actually the main focus is on Raghav and Kalpi😳.About pakhi i will have to think
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: dreamyjennice

Very nice...this forum is veryslow and there r so few ffs and ss ir os...infact this is second ff I guess...

Thank u so much 😊yeah i agree dat der r very few ffs so i thought of writing.nw it depends hw much ppl like it.If i get positive response i wuld continue...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: shayna23


Thank u so much 😊yeah i agree dat der r very few ffs so i thought of writing.nw it depends hw much ppl like it.If i get positive response i wuld continue...

I think this forum has very less members...but plz do continue for readers like me..l would love it
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hey really great yaar👏 u have good writing skill i must say👏
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Originally posted by: dreamyjennice

I think this forum has very less members...but plz do continue for readers like me..l would love it


dats very nice of u 😊 i will surely continue
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Originally posted by: Desiteengirl

hey really great yaar👏u have good writing skill i must say👏


Thank u so much for the compliment dear.I am glad dat u liked it

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