Make A Wish - Page 6

Originally posted by: amritaluvskryan

wow lovd it...that jeeman part was awesome... Then the virika part..viren is so caring & loving...the kiss wow...virika kissed b4 their marriage totally unexpected & jeevika kissed viren's cheek that was too...i luvd the wish part...where she wished 4 viren & viren was there...so basically a hawa tight & super se upar ka story...well done karina...lovd it

Originally posted by: princesshelen

Superb OS

Originally posted by: girl97

OMG first OS

this is awesome

i loved it

i love the way u described their emotions and all

its superb

and jeevika's dialogues are so realistic

its awesome

thanks

and do write more please

Originally posted by: virika4eva

Awww

this was so amazing👏⭐️

U potrayed all the feelings so well

I loved the lst prt the most...❤️

Ahhh no more words are comin into ma mind after reading this...

do write many mre os'

Originally posted by: --Iqra--

Excellent OS! Super cute! Love the title! Thanks for the PM!

Originally posted by: Wara082007

AMAZINGLY AWESOME form of STORY WRITING...👏👏

PERFECTION at its PEAK

SPLENDID IDEA👍🏼

YOU stories have made believe in FAIRYTALES' Now I am WAITNG that SOME DAY SOME of MY WISHES cold be FULFILLED like THIS..😉😉❤️

Originally posted by: jeevi7

HOLY SHIT KARINA!!!!! this is just out of this world...you have written it so perfectly dude!!! i just looovvveeeddd this OS and specially the title "Make A Wish" ufff u make me fall in love with Virika more and more...i can never get enough of them and i can never get enough of ur writing...this OS reminded me beggining of the show reminded me of the JeeMan sweet and sad momments before marriage and cute Virika scenes too! you have described everything so well...the love between Virika and the sisterly bonding just amazing..u always leave me speechless hahah i know i have said this more than hundred times but it is true after reading ur stories im always speechless dude..u should actually write a novel about Virika hehe if u do than my one wish will come true lol my most fav part of the OS was the ending where Jeevika went and touched Virens face to make surre shes not dreaming..he indeed is the best hubby to be...when she kissed him on the cheek and the way Viren blushed i could actually imagine his blushy face awww...overall the whole story was beyond mind blowing, amazing, fantastic, perfect, outstanding, awesome, etc. 👏

I didnt even proof read what i just wrote...so, sorry if i didnt mentioned anythin else Kays...but please please please give us moreee OS like this again..pleaseee and never stop writing about Virika! Love you❤️ Big hug🤗

Originally posted by: vishwa94

OMG...Karina...another brilliant n beautiful story by u👏👏👏...loved loved loved it so much❤️❤️

Jeeman scenes were so amazing n the way u described their bonding was awesome

n what do I say abt virika...so damn adorable...viren surprising jeevika n their first hug n viren is such a sweetheart...arranging party for her n gifting those diamond earrings n virika first kiss😳❤️ so beautiful...virika r just perfect together...n the jeevika wishing viren to stay with her one more day n her wish got fulfilled n jeevika touching viren's face...everything was so beautifully described

Once again HATS OFF Karina...for writing this wonderful story..can't thank u enough for writing a OS for virika fans🤗

thanx for pm

Originally posted by: Love_Family

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Totally amazing OS

Your amazing at everything

Don't have any words for your writing they always blow me away

Thanks for the pm please make more OS's cuz your absolutely fabulous

Originally posted by: kryanforever

awesome cute lovely romantic amazing mind blowing

continue it yaar plz

loved it

fab yaar

👍🏼