Make A Wish - Page 5

Originally posted by: karankrysle

Nooo words Karina!

U have left me speechless!

Absolutely speechless!

I could imagine all that happening in our show coz both our Virika are actually like that!

And their love is just what you portrayed in the story! Purity to the core!

I am actually blushing as if all that happened to me! 😳

I think oyu should write more os's!

You write them much better than other writers!

Anyway!

Love always!

- Anushka! 😊

Originally posted by: mehwish123

Awww
So beautiful
Ur r amazibg at writing os
Seriously believe me
I loved reading ii eas just reading again n again
Words wre just drooling n dancing in my mind




I lived it and yet wad enjoying

Originally posted by: Sabapari

Karina karina karina how could u be a sooo perfect writer its an amazing updates i have no words i am just speechless after reading it hats off to u dear its superb updates love u yaar:-)

Originally posted by: romanticgurl070

mind blowing one

loved it

aww loved the kiss, the way viren calling jeevs 'my love' n he stayed back in rishikesh for her

AWESOME

Originally posted by: Kashy15

Wow. This was simply amazing!

I particularly loved the ending bit.

😳

Originally posted by: Silentreader324

Wow this was new
Excellent job
I never thought u would write an os
But it's great
Continue to write stories like these

Originally posted by: krystu05

karina i really wonder if this was your first os

it was hell amazing 👏

you are an absolutely mindblowing writer no doubt!!

loved each and every bit of it!!

viren calling jeevika every day...

viren's sudden appearence..

their first hug...

viren's gift..

their holding hands...

the surprise party..

virika desperate to talk to each other...

their kiss...

jeevika's wish...

and finally the last part...

seriously no words to describe them 😳

hats off karina🤗

superb!!!

do write more like this often

love

aaliya

Originally posted by: karanshalaka

Okay this is AMAZING!! During reading this whole OS only one thing was escaping my lips that is "awww"... everything was BEAUTIFUL n PERFECT! U r just Fabulous *hats off* *bows down*
I want more n more n more OS plzz!! Cant stop saying u r awesome!!

Originally posted by: NeetuHarshi

Aww very nice.
Firstly I liked jeeman n then would be virens surprise,
Their hug etc... And many more. Good one n tanx for the pm 😊

Originally posted by: PriyaVirika

As always i really like your this story also.. i mean not like but loved it <3 i m actually speechlees always reading your amazing story.. u r trueky a great writter, and in my opinion u should give some idea to CVs people so that they can celebrate viren's birthday like this or virika annivarsery :D coz we eventually miss that part in the show... m i right or wrong??

but honestly speaking u can write great stories and u even get amazing idea to write such a great stories..

thanks for always sending me pms.. :)