Make A Wish - Page 7

Originally posted by: jenna_p

Beautiful OS👏 Loved it..

It was just perfect and a complete OS...

Fabulous writing and loved everything to how Jeeman enjoyed the day n Viren's surprise..

Loved the blushing virika ,the first hug was so special and was surprised at the kiss but the OS was totally virika..you r a fantastic writer and this was just more amazing...

thanks for writing this...😊

Originally posted by: NiraliVirika

Yayayayayaaayyyaaayyy!!!

You wrote an OS!

It was brilliant :)

I loved it to the core..

Superb!

Fabulous!

Fantastic!

Marvellous!

OutStanding!

These words aren't even enough for this os..it was literally too good!

The way you potray each relation is just amazing! :)

I also love the way you describe their feelings..it just makes everything feel real, you know..

Basically, this was your first attempt in writing an OS and you nailed it! This was surely a super success..

You should write OS's more often..like maybe one every weekend, that is only IF you get the time to write apart from updating your other FF's. We all would be really happy reading one! :)

Thanks for the PM

P.S- You're a phenomenal writer. Please don't stop writing :)

OMG OMG OMG!!

Originally posted by: KtYammie13

OMG OMG OMG!!

You Made my day Kays!!

Such an amazing one!!

I was Like.. double News... thn this OS...

wooohooo...

hehe...

Even my wish came true...!!

Lol...

Really hats off to you..!! that was mindblowing!!

Lovely Lovely Lovely!!

How do you manage to write so so so so awesome..?

That was so adorable...

Virika so cute...

And Jeeman too...

Please Please Write more stuff..!!!

Karina Di,

awesome amazing fab yaar

Originally posted by: nishyrelan

Karina Di,

It awesome OS yaar.. just love the romance between our sweety cuty virika... thanks for the long update its awesome... thanks for the PM coontinue soon... eagerly waiting for the next part

Originally posted by: surbhi1994

awesome amazing fab yaar

kiss

continue soon yaar

loved it

OMG Superb!!!!!

Amazing story and amazing writer!!

Beautiful story involving jeeman and Virika<3

Love how viren surprise her and jeevika straight away hug him
Them holding hand,
And the most subtle yet romantic moment when viren kiss jeevika when she cried. Aww<3
Thier lovely talk in the morning and another surprise in the morning:)) LOVE iT!

Viren is so dreamy!

Thank you so much for the story and pm. Superb work kays!:))

Originally posted by: Kays94

Goodness gracious you wrote me an essay Marziah!!!! 🤗 ❤️

You are like the sweetest person, no joke!

I really don't know how you tolerate all my non-sense and write such beautiful things 😆

I think there's something majorly wrong with you no joke, I think your job is screwing over your brain. hehehehehehehehehe 🤣

But thank you so so so so much for appreciating this OS

I'm glad I make you fall in love with Virika more, but remember Viren/Karan/Zaaine are all mine

SO BACK OFF 😡

HEHEHE ❤️