Make A Wish - Page 4

Originally posted by: sweetdollashita

Thanks a ton kays for writing this os...❤️

This is your first os but it seem to be as if you are writing one short stories from long time...😃

what to say about this os...

this has made me totally speechless...

its charm n brilliance can't be expressed in words...👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

really kays, you are an outstandingly brilliant writer...⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️

you were saying that this os is not good but read the comments of your fans, u'll get to know how terrific is this os...

i just loved this os to the ore n core of my heart n has read it many many times till now n still want to read it again n again...😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

i was smiling widely throughtout the whole os...😃 😃 😃 😃

the way you described jeeman's relation was just beautiful...

let me come to the main part quickly that is VIRIKA...

OMG...they are sooo romantic in this os even before their marriage...

viren call her every morning on his way to office...

viren came all the way from jeevika to wish her n organised a surprise party for her awww ...

It was her love, her Viren, her everything. She stopped the swing quickly with her feet and turned around engulfing him in a hug so tightly. This was their first hug, and it was so special. She was ecstatic seeing him, and he was on cloud nine seeing Jeevika's reaction. She really was his angel.

these lines for me are just perfect... i love these lines alot... ❤️ ❤️

whole of virika part was just out of this world...

it was sooo mesmerising...

virika can never get enough of each other n i can never get enough of them...

everything was just perfect from the gift viren gave her to the party scene...

For someone beautiful like you, it's not even that amazing" ,,how can someone be sooo charming 😳 😳 😳 😳

they both went hand in hand inside the hotel

virika's feelings for each other, jeevika's happiness coz of viren, their kiss, hug everything took me to dreamland n i loved it...☺️

jeevika wished on her b'day that viren could stay with her one more day...omg n viren understood her even without asking her anything n stayed there...wowww ☺️

loved the last part where jeevika saw viren, went to him, he gave her rose n she kissed him on his cheek n express their love for each other was damn mesmerising...

i loved this osss alot...

please dooo write more os on them...

And i'm the first one to comment yayayayaaya

Originally posted by: Dhoxi

Awww ❤️

It's beyond words to explain, like the bonding of jeeman and virika..

How I wish on the show they will hug before marriage but... but ... your OS made me feel that moment ❤️

Jeevika blush ahhh ☺️

It was her love, her Viren, her everything. She stopped the swing quickly with her feet and turned around engulfing him in a hug so tightly. This was their first hug, and it was so special. She was ecstatic seeing him, and he was on cloud nine seeing Jeevika's reaction. She really was his angel.

How much i'm in love with that sentence ❤️,

It was your first OS and I really loved it, p.s I told you people will love it.

You keep on saying no-one will like it but see you have got a good response 😆

And one more thing your OS was just mindblowing... love it so much ❤️

Originally posted by: latika_AshVik

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Awww awww...super cuteee 😳

OMG karina this was simply awesome and beautiful...😳👏👏

Virika were adorableee😳

i think first time u wrote about jeeman this much...and it was lovelyy...

about VirIka everything was perfect...👍🏼 viren was the best and jeevika was sweet...!!

viren's surprise was sooo lovely...😳
and virika's kiss was soo cute and divine...😳
and the best part was the end of ur story viren was right there with jeevika...😃 and jeevika's wish became true😊

a brilliant and a great story dear👍🏼⭐️
❤️ it...!!

Originally posted by: radzzz123

amazing..

no words to describe..

its was such a sweet story..

from the beginning..

manvi putting the banana peel on dabbu's head

and then the jeeman fun..

then the surprised and sudden entry of viren..

the beautiful earing..

and the surprise party..

and the best part was the sudden hug from jeevika's side

and the kiss from viren's side

the then when she saw viren in the mirror..

her birthday wish had come true..

amazing'

fantastic

superb

romantic and full of emotions...

thanx for such a lovely update and the pm😊

Originally posted by: mgera3024

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Amazing, superb fantastic

No words to describe it

It was so beautiful os.

Loved d way viren gave a surprise to jeevika by pushing her swing.

How can anyone love eachoder so much,dey r so cute.

Deir first hug was just ossm

Virens surprises and jeevikas blush was aaawwwiiieee

Luved d way viren kissed her tears and deir kiss was ossm

And deir morning talk and viren came to meet jeevika was superb

Luved d whole os.keep on updating

Originally posted by: mariarauf48

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unreserved !!!!

Kinno Kinno Kinno
what tooo sayyy
you are beyond wordsss !!!!!
Dont tell me its ur first OS it wss nust awesome
no one can beat u in writting skills
you are indeed the bedt writter !!!
I m gonna print it definetely !!
Jeeman relation was described sooo cutellyy
she kussed on her cheeks awww <3
viren surprisee wasss d best
he z d best life partner anyone can hVeee !!!
Virika first hug n dattt tooo be in public !!!
The tighness closenesss awww <3
her prince charming <3
the diamond earing awww sooo awesome
how well viren understands ber
the party !!!
Cake feeding yayyy
d desperation omgg !!!
Finaally dey got sumtime
viren kissed her tearss
liplock
huggg
me blushing :-P
the morning scene
my love sooo cuteee
viren another surprise <3
she kissed aww viren blushing <3
awesommeee keep it up
lve u kinnoo

Originally posted by: drishti112

No words to say !!!!! awesome it was...man can i know how could you write so greatly?oh yaaar !!!!!!!! m just dead...🤪 superrbbb story !!!!!! greatly written !!!!!!!!! adorable❤️ fantabulous...n i have no words now...beyond expectations !!!! ☺️

Originally posted by: arshiasushma

amazing update thanks for the pm