Alfaaz - A ShraMan FF - Now Moved to Wattpad - Page 8

As I had promised to come here and because one of my resolutions is to read and comment on everyone's work, here I come!

Chapter 1

So, the first thing that attracted me is the title, of course but also the banner and I believe you have used them for every chapter, can't wait to discover them!

A great start! Sumo's realization was quick if only she had realized this while he was still around her.

"Sumo ab tumhare nakhre nahi uthane padte, tumhari zidd nahi poori karni hoti, paise kis par kharchoon?"

This is so Shravan! He is angry, hurt beyond measure and yet she is the only one he remembers. Beautiful monologue!

Qutub Minar? Tab to uski height utni nahi thi. 😆

The conversation between Nanu and Sumo was heartening. He is the messenger between them and Shravan crying to Nanaji had my heart. I would have loved to see such a scene translate onscreen.

Dear Diary, I guess is everyone's favorite! Well for someone who keeps a diary, I find it very realistic and endearing at the same time, when you have no one, you find relief in small things like writing. ❤️

"When my own mother doesn't miss me, why would Sumo?" 💔

Loved the first chapter! I hope they patch up soon!

zoyi🤗

Hey Zoya,
Tahnk you so so much for the dedication. Was a totally unexpected yet super surprise.
Hope you and your family are better. Thanks for staying on.
The update was fantastic. Suman- Pushkar's plan was completely filmy, Ramnath- Shravan scene was heart touching. 👏 Waiting with bated breath.
Rajiti.

Originally posted by: Nik03

@Tabby Waiting now

Originally posted by: Nik03

Don't be re!
I unresed @Series after 2 n half months!

Take your time!

Originally posted by: Nik03

Laga na😆

Arey koi na...am sure Zoya won't mind either😉