Originally posted by: swatiagarwal89
Hello zoya...
Hello!First of all congratulations for the new thread..!!!🥳
May u make many more threads for ALFAAZ...
Thank you so very much!Here's hoping!apologies if this part is not as good as you may have expected
This was way better.. but on second thoughts I had never imagined u would surprise us with something like this
Hehehe Shukriyaa!"Chup kar Push-kar!" She rhymed it,
N I was rhyming with her...hehe
Haina bro!
Walking down the garden with a hamper of goodies in her hand
This reminded me of their day spent together when he had that broken leg... she entered with goodies basket n rushed dropping everything to him
That's exactly why I put it there...
Shravan sat on the low wall, each leg hanging on either side. Hair ruffled, a few strands romancing with his face. The sun against him, casting a wonderful colour on his bronzed skin.. A pair of jeans hung low on his waist, his feet bare. As he strummed the guitar, the muscles of his back moved gloriously.
*completely whipped *
*officially dead*
Haye! Don't die!!!!
She would have passed it off as concentration but she knew him and something most definitely bothered him
Best friends know u.. n it shows!!!!
Ji!
She wanted to rush right into his arms and tell him it would be okay, wipe those creases off his forehead and make him believe whatever bothered him would sort itself out.
This is ur sumo... n she is love!!!!
Yo!
Getting up, towering above her, he straightened himself and without another lateral thought pulled her into himself.
Haq se... our hero
Ekdam hero!
Suman felt she could die of the emotions that coursed through her veins.
Incandescent flow of emotions. .. too hard to handle...!!
Oh yeyy!
One he knew would protect his feeble self but one he also feared for crushing his soul. He couldn't help himself.
This is what u excel at.. portraying two contradictory emotions together...
Sigh, thank you!
He didn't know what to do anymore, his heart and mind tore him to an extent of disarray.
Poor soul... this is what happens when we are at loggerheads with our inner selves...!
I agree bro..
How long do you intend to keep fighting all your demons by yourself?"
Everyone needs to have a confidant...
not all demons can b fought with alone!!!
N she wants to b just that😊
We shall see, its started to bridge.. So..
He gazed at her face which seemed to have lost the stress it showed earlier and now held hurt.
He can sooo see through her...
And she through him..
Eyes downcast he let himself slip at her feet as if offering a silent apology for having hurt her
This person is love... such heartfelt apology...!!!
Yeah.. Its dreamy...
I have missed you so much. I .. I needed you Sumo.
Such bold declaration. . Ab I love u ki kya jaarorat hai... I feel.. I need u has way more impact than i love u...
I agree! Wait for it 😉
N in their case just one I MISSED YOU would have solved all their misunderstandings long back in the show😭
Na yaad dilao!She cares too much to show her pain and dampen my resolve, she wants me to be happy
They do know each other like the back of their hand...👏😛😛
Oh yeah!Chala jaaon? Ijaazat hai?"
Feeble n vulnerable. .. this is Shravan at his true self...but only in front of sumo...love!!!
Ji...He nodded his head and gently placed it on her lap. Taking her cue she ran her fingers through his gorgeous locks
Nostalgic. ... BURDEN OF GUILT ki yaad aa gayi.. hmm feels😛😛
Ah! Yes!
He needed his calm and rest before he could take on the world.
Bang on...!!!!!👏👏
He felt like home
She is his home...❤️
Yes, she is!The person knew exactly how this scene would help him later, he smiled for he knew this was waiting to happen. His brother and his best friend surely had something brewing for else what would explain what he saw.
Our very own cupid... but i don't think they will need him here... 😆😆
Hehe who knows he might need them? 😉
The three of them sat on the swing, elbows on their thighs and face in their respective palms brainstorming as to how they would best this beast of a problem.This reminded me of three idiots.. I don't know why. ..!!!
Looks like everyone felt that other than me 😆Shravan wants to return! Shocked?
Not really to be very honest. .. I was kinda expecting this since NOOR...
Haina! Noor was an out an out indication...
How did you find it? Random? Not so randomNot at all random... but awesome as always
Yeyy!
What do you think of a shirtless Shravan, for nearly the whole update ;)Since I m officially dead after literally SEEING him like that... ab I m not left with more words...*sighs dramatically *
Hahahah! Itna toh bol diya behen!
What do you think about ShraMan's growing closeness?Well for emotional closeness.. they are bonding really well.. I would love to see how they both progress from here...
N for physical closeness... remember I m dead already... that slightly peppered hair on his bare chest *sighs dramatically again*
I would love to as well!How will the trio convince Ramnath? Would they even be able to?
I think they will b able to convince him ... par kaise.. hmm.. for that u need to update asap
...he he he. ...!!!
Mujhe khud pata nahi hai abhi...So finally after these long rants I would love to conclude with...
This was again amazing... Evil mamiji n her love story was funny. ..
Sumo monologues while listening to Shravan's singing were her heartbeats... she knows him so so well..
The song that u have used went way too perfectly with the entire write up... kinda depicted Shravan state of mind like a pro...
Ji aapka bohot bohot shukriya!That hug... Feels manh...!!!😳😳
Their mutual understanding is on next level... no need to say or explain anything...👏
Haina!Ijaazat mangi aur Mil bhi gayi. ... happy Shravan. ..🤗
Yo!Pushkar is as usual so cute. .. hopefully he will put himself to some good use here...!!!
He will!So again waiting for your next update palke bichaye... but don't rush... update when u can...
Na bol.. Already its so long and I have nothing in the pipeline!
Zoya u r love... please always remain the person u r...
Aww man! Will do!
Dil se duao k saath sighing off..🤗
Dua ke liye ❤️
Swati
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