Alfaaz - A ShraMan FF - Now Moved to Wattpad - Page 43

Originally posted by: bworm

Loved the update.

I'm so glad you did!

The adults knowledge about the sneaking out, fresh air was hilarious.

Pyshkar needs a keeper.

LMAO! Yeah it was! And yes he does 😆

Glad shravan got it all out. In the hospital he got treated for his illness, family was able to cure what was festering for years.

Amen bro! Well put!

The trip is going to be fun. Looking forward to it.

I hope it is!

Thanks for the pm

Pleasure!!!

Originally posted by: _Eternity_

Zoyi...🤗

Ranju jaan 🤗

awesome update like always👏

Shukriya!! I'm glad!

shravan sneaking in sumo's room at night wah pehle full control ab no control😆

Udd gaya control sara 😆

Shravan worried about his family members and business and then ramnath's anger thats was beautifull part👏

Yeyy! I'm so happy you felt so!

then Scotland plan and SharMan's night stroll truth choto se le ke bado tak ko pta hai 🤣

Mashoor hai charcha inka!

last comes pushkar's reaction on dont break trust comment 😆 love his reaction of shra-sumo and varun-vandy😆

Yeyyy!

love it ❤️

Happiness!!!

Originally posted by: Nik03

Res ki ijazat hai?

😆

Originally posted by: bworm

Wow..That was sweet and naughty.

Thank you ji!

They did get caught...But shravan turned the tables..Good for him.

Amen!

You wrote beautifully, the morning after can get crass...But yours was very sweet.

I'm glad you found it classy... 😃

It's been quite a journey...And hope it continues.

I hope so too!

Thanks for the pm

Pleasure hon!

Originally posted by: CarpeDiem_

My Res is my res none of your res 🤣

Originally posted by: akrocks77

Hey Zoya!!

Hello ji!

Meet Casualty No.1!😆

Hello Casualty! How are you now?

God please let fluff grow on her forever!

Hahaha

I don't want any thing else.

These chapters are making my heart happy and giddy!!😳

I am so happy bro!

This one is the sweetest one of them all.

All that Blushing ...teasing feels so good!⭐️

Yeyy ness!

Hayee!! The morning after!

Sleeping in each others arms!

My blushing business is on!😳

Tu bhi kar le blush!

Shravan's Moments of Impacts!

I like how they revolve mostly around her.😃

I know right.. Uski life hi Sumo hai...

No D words should be mentioned about!

Just of-course Sumo's D!!☺️

I resemble a Tomato now!😆

LMAO! Who wouldn't be a tomato?

Gift me these two please!

How happy every thing is ...Kamini Chachi kaala teeka lagao!

Inhe Buri Nazar (Sadist in you) se bachao!😛😆

Haw haye! Mera naam hi kharab hai!

Ahan! Pushkar the Lawyer misses Nothing !! 😉

Shravan gives a tit for tat!

They were trying embarrass him...he changed the course skillfully.😆

Smart hai apna chokra!

"I'm hungry, let's eat."

"Eat what?" Suman looked at him flabbergasted.

"Breakfast, love. Breakfast." He winked, as everyone started giggling.

Bass! this was it! I am dead!☺️🤪

Hahahaha don't die!

But one Question so that I can die peacefully ...😆

What do you plan on eating Sumo!?🤣

Ah well.. Do you want me to elaborate what she would wish to eat or what he would want to savour? 🤣

How many Chapters left!? If it is gonna go my way ..then how about infinite!😉

Nah, infinite thoda zyada nahi hoga? Mera funda hai, story strong honi chahiye, lambi nahi...

Short and impactful else its just a tasteless chewing gum.. What's the fun in that?

But going your way in between 5 or 10!

Itni bhi bereham nahi hoon bhai!

Loved It so much!!

Apoorva

Originally posted by: _Eternity_

awesome update zoyi👏

Thank you Ranju ❤️

all teasing sumo and then shra turning tables that was fun.😆

Hahaha

"Eat what?" Suman looked at him flabbergasted.

"Breakfast, love. Breakfast." He winked, as everyone started giggling.

love it.😳

Aaisa? 😉

waiting for more ...

Me too!

Originally posted by: tarushiv

I want more!!!

Me too!!!!

It was a heartfelt update.🤗

Sigh Shukriya

Pls update soon...

Yes ma'am!

Originally posted by: Ivvy

Again res 😳

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Finally unres

I loved it...So much cuteness in one update...Hume maarne ka iradahai kya?!😆😆

Thanks for pm Zoya

Originally posted by: PrincessAshVik

Okay, so I have been awful. MIA and not reading this. But I tell you what, it was worth it. Totally. I love binge reading this story😳😆
That's alright.. I know where you were 😳 I'm glad binging helped!

Haha, so I was happy it was not Sumo but Vandy who came first cos itna fast visa kaise milgaya😕 So it made a lot of sense in the way you wrote the whole procedure and brownie points for making it seem realistic😎😳😆

Hahahaha Realism is my middle name😆

Vandy is super duper cute!! I adore Kamini here!!! Actually I loved her int he show as well😉😆

LMAO! You liked Kammo? She was better than Ramu kaka but yeah 😆

Kamini Shrav is something I always wanted to see!!! And you got me this here!!

I wished he had that support as a child...

I love how protective everyone is of Shrav!! It's heartwarming. Show ki poori kasar yahan nikaldi😆

Haan be! I was pulling my hair by the end of it all...

Finally indeed Ramnath Malhotra!!! Lol!! Love Nanu and Ramu! Hey that rhymed😆😆

NaMu 🤣 Couple name!

Ahh I can't wait for more Zo!!!! Update soonish please!!

Done and Done bro!

Please ignore my madness😳😆

Never!