Alfaaz - A ShraMan FF - Now Moved to Wattpad - Page 41

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Posted: 7 years ago
zoyi..🤗

awesome.update.👏

Ruhaniyat.. beautiful title

first kiss 😳

love it.❤️
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Posted: 7 years ago
Res ki ijazat hai?
😆
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Posted: 7 years ago
Wow..That was sweet and naughty.
They did get caught...But shravan turned the tables..Good for him.
You wrote beautifully, the morning after can get crass...But yours was very sweet.

It's been quite a journey...And hope it continues.

Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 7 years ago
Hey Zoya!!

Meet Casualty No.1!😆

God please let fluff grow on her forever!
I don't want any thing else.
These chapters are making my heart happy and giddy!!😳

This one is the sweetest one of them all.
All that Blushing ...teasing feels so good!⭐️

Hayee!! The morning after!
Sleeping in each others arms!
My blushing business is on!😳

Shravan's Moments of Impacts!
I like how they revolve mostly around her.😃

No D words should be mentioned about!
Just of-course Sumo's D!!☺️
I resemble a Tomato now!😆

Gift me these two please!
How happy every thing is ...Kamini Chachi kaala teeka lagao!
Inhe Buri Nazar (Sadist in you) se bachao!😛😆

Ahan! Pushkar the Lawyer misses Nothing !! 😉
Shravan gives a tit for tat!
They were trying embarrass him...he changed the course skillfully.😆

"I'm hungry, let's eat."

"Eat what?" Suman looked at him flabbergasted.

"Breakfast, love. Breakfast." He winked, as everyone started giggling.

Bass! this was it! I am dead!☺️🤪

But one Question so that I can die peacefully ...😆

What do you plan on eating Sumo!?🤣


How many Chapters left!? If it is gonna go my way ..then how about infinite!😉

But going your way in between 5 or 10!


Loved It so much!!

Apoorva


Edited by akrocks77 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
My Res is my res none of your res 🤣
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Posted: 7 years ago
awesome update zoyi👏
all teasing sumo and then shra turning tables that was fun.😆

"Eat what?" Suman looked at him flabbergasted.

"Breakfast, love. Breakfast." He winked, as everyone started giggling.
love it.😳

waiting for more ...
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Posted: 7 years ago
I want more!!!
It was a heartfelt update.🤗
Pls update soon...
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Posted: 7 years ago
Again res 😳
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Finally unres

I loved it...So much cuteness in one update...Hume maarne ka iradahai kya?!😆😆
Thanks for pm Zoya
Edited by Ivvy - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
Okay, so I have been awful. MIA and not reading this. But I tell you what, it was worth it. Totally. I love binge reading this story😳😆

Haha, so I was happy it was not Sumo but Vandy who came first cos itna fast visa kaise milgaya😕 So it made a lot of sense in the way you wrote the whole procedure and brownie points for making it seem realistic😎😳😆


Vandy is super duper cute!! I adore Kamini here!!! Actually I loved her int he show as well😉😆
Kamini Shrav is something I always wanted to see!!! And you got me this here!!
I love how protective everyone is of Shrav!! It's heartwarming. Show ki poori kasar yahan nikaldi😆

Finally indeed Ramnath Malhotra!!! Lol!! Love Nanu and Ramu! Hey that rhymed😆😆

Ahh I can't wait for more Zo!!!! Update soonish please!!

Please ignore my madness😳😆
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Posted: 6 years ago
Hey Zoya!
Marvellous update!👏
We have around 15 chapters. Phew! That's a big relief!😃

Shravan is discharged! No more hospitals!
But I will miss Dr. Cross and nurse ji...They were fun!

Just one day and already facing discharge woes!😆
Sneaky Shravan! I like it!
But way too smart family...they know it all😎
Kuch nai chupta inki nazroon se!

Ahh! This was long due...Shravan!
That feeling of being an outsider in your family💔
I am glad he had this closure.
He wants them to stay ...wants to be with them!
But don't want them to suffer in any way because of him!
Selfless!⭐️

Pushkar's silent monologue!🤣
Doctor has not allowed...Sumo's voilence and what not😆
Chaaron ki haalat bigaad di sabne milke!
And Ofcouse Oblivious Chachiji!😆

Enjoyed read it!
Do continue soon!

Apoorva
Edited by akrocks77 - 6 years ago

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