Alfaaz - A ShraMan FF - Now Moved to Wattpad - Page 42

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Posted: 6 years ago
It seemed short :( Oh man the cons of reading only one chapter at a time. But it was amazing as always!!
ShraMan are ADORBS!!! Loved the part where Shravan talks about his issues. Love Eric for being a momma bear!!!
Can't wait for the trip!!!
Update soon please and thankies for the PM <3

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Posted: 6 years ago
Loved the update.
The adults knowledge about the sneaking out, fresh air was hilarious.
Pyshkar needs a keeper.

Glad shravan got it all out. In the hospital he got treated for his illness, family was able to cure what was festering for years.

The trip is going to be fun. Looking forward to it.

Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 6 years ago
Thanks so much people 🤗
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Posted: 6 years ago
Zoyi...🤗

awesome update like always👏

shravan sneaking in sumo's room at night wah pehle full control ab no control😆

Shravan worried about his family members and business and then ramnath's anger thats was beautifull part👏

then Scotland plan and SharMan's night stroll truth choto se le ke bado tak ko pta hai 🤣

last comes pushkar's reaction on dont break trust comment 😆 love his reaction of shra-sumo and varun-vandy😆

love it ❤️


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orion23 thumbnail
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Posted: 6 years ago
Thank you Ranju Jaan ❤️
Detailed reply, eventually 😳
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Posted: 6 years ago
Hey Zoya!!

Fabulous Update!
This one is dreamy!

Trip is happening! Shraman on vacation!
Engagement ke baad honeymoon...I am ignoring the presence of others😉😆

I could literally visualize everything there in my head⭐️
All those picturesque Scenery ...everything!
The way you described it all and even details of the mansion everything feels so real.
Like it's happening in front of my eyes.
I am liking this safar!

Eric toh kuch jyada hi rich nikala😆
Mansion in such scenic place with lush garden and fountain...Team of chefs and butlers.
Yummy food and cranberry juice...and of course Eustace.😳
Do they plan on plan on adopting a child ...I am game...this place sounds fun!🤣

Ahh! Ramnath and Nirmala love story...I feel you Shravan!
As for the second chances part if it would have been for Show's characters of the two I would have said no ...but in this story we have seen their journey even after the fallout so I would say if they are willing then why not ... after all Love tops it all!
Though in all this they should also be careful about Shravan's emotions this time.

Terrace garden set up and Shaman alone!😳
Under the blanket ...on the swing romance...I like it.
Sumo is getting naughty though who wouldn't ☺️

I am glad they are discussing all this ...this will eventually strengthen their relation!
I am in love with this scene!
I wish we could have Namik do some like the last scene on screen...

Lastly did I tell you these regular updates of Alfaaz with all the talks of ending...seems scary!😒

Kuch mahine baad...
Hum aur humari tanhai aksar ye baatien karenge
Alfaaz kaa update hota toh aisa hota
Series kaa update hota toh waisa hota
Zoya ki Stories ki update hoti toh kaisa hota

Okk! This is madness..ignore this😕😆
Kuch naya likh rahe ho naa aap inn par...please!😳
Kuch toh socho naa!

Loved reading it!
Excited for the next!

Apoorva

Edited by akrocks77 - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: akrocks77

Hey Zoya!!

Aj I shall reply to you! I haven't replied here in forever!
Fabulous Update!
This one is dreamy!
Sigh.. Shukriya Apu ji!
Trip is happening! Shraman on vacation!
Engagement ke baad honeymoon...I am ignoring the presence of others😉😆
Hahaha feel free, for the most part, so will I 🤣
I could literally visualize everything there in my head⭐️
All those picturesque Scenery ...everything!
The way you described it all and even details of the mansion everything feels so real.
Like it's happening in front of my eyes.
I am liking this safar!
I'm so glad! It took me a while to study the architecture there 😆
And the cover btw, is Braemar for real 😳
Eric toh kuch jyada hi rich nikala😆
Arey haan aur kya! I only stopped short of making him Royalty.. I was like duke zyada ho jayega 🤣
Mansion in such scenic place with lush garden and fountain...Team of chefs and butlers.
Artey choti baat hi nahi hai! And Ben ke dad rich the 😆 Just so you know where its coming from 😉
Yummy food and cranberry juice...and of course Eustace.😳
Martha too!
Do they plan on plan on adopting a child ...I am game...this place sounds fun!🤣
LMAO! I will have to check with my brain if they are open to adoption, I'm signing up first 🤣
Ahh! Ramnath and Nirmala love story...I feel you Shravan!
As for the second chances part if it would have been for Show's characters of the two I would have said no ...but in this story we have seen their journey even after the fallout so I would say if they are willing then why not ... after all Love tops it all!
Though in all this they should also be careful about Shravan's emotions this time.
Note made... I think I have it covered as per your thoughts 😉

Terrace garden set up and Shaman alone!😳
Under the blanket ...on the swing romance...I like it.
Of course you did! 🤪
Sumo is getting naughty though who wouldn't ☺️
Aur kya, mauka mile toh why not? 😆

I am glad they are discussing all this ...this will eventually strengthen their relation!
I am in love with this scene!
Yeah, its the growth I was going for with this.. Romantic khud hi ho gaya 😆
I wish we could have Namik do some like the last scene on screen...
Arey kasam se! We have been robbed! Namik ❤️
Lastly did I tell you these regular updates of Alfaaz with all the talks of ending...seems scary!😒
Oh gosh! Okay, check your wattpad pm box okay?
Kuch mahine baad...
Hum aur humari tanhai aksar ye baatien karenge
Alfaaz kaa update hota toh aisa hota
Series kaa update hota toh waisa hota
Zoya ki Stories ki update hoti toh kaisa hota
Arey pagal.. Aaise kyun bol ri?
Alfaaz has been a journey and journeys end right?
Rahi baat Zoya ke updates ki, toh jahan tak I can, I will keep writing!
So you won't miss updates.. Alfaaz, well, I'll kiss it goodbye the best way I possibly can...
Okk! This is madness..ignore this😕😆
It's not something that deserves to be ignored...
You feel for Alfaaz, if anything, this should be cherished..
Kuch naya likh rahe ho naa aap inn par...please!😳
Kuch toh socho naa!
Or teri.. Baat yun hai, ke Alfaaz end hona is a big deal.. I am planning to bid adieu to ShraMan with it. Mrs and Mr. will run its course eventually as well... I will prolong as long as I can..
But I'm planning to write different genres ahead, ShraMan may not make the cut 😔

Loved reading it!
Excited for the next!
I'm glad my love!
Apoorva

@Bold I hope I won't make you wait too long...
Love your comments as always!
🤗
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: akrocks77

Hey Zoya!

Hey there!
Marvellous update!👏
We have around 15 chapters. Phew! That's a big relief!😃
Hahaha yeah! A little idhar udhar maybe 😆
Shravan is discharged! No more hospitals!
But I will miss Dr. Cross and nurse ji...They were fun!
Yeahm they sure were fun!
Just one day and already facing discharge woes!😆
Sneaky Shravan! I like it!
Haina!
But way too smart family...they know it all😎
Kuch nai chupta inki nazroon se!
LMAO! Never!
Ahh! This was long due...Shravan!
That feeling of being an outsider in your family💔
I am glad he had this closure.
He wants them to stay ...wants to be with them!
But don't want them to suffer in any way because of him!
Selfless!⭐️
Selfless indeed! He is bae!
And he finally got his freedom from his demons!
Pushkar's silent monologue!🤣
Hahahaha Puhskie pie!
Doctor has not allowed...Sumo's voilence and what not😆
Chaaron ki haalat bigaad di sabne milke!
And Ofcouse Oblivious Chachiji!😆
He is in his own world na! Khana mil jaye bohot hai 😆
Enjoyed read it!
Do continue soon!
I'm glad!
Apoorva

@Bold Apu ❤️
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Posted: 6 years ago
Ahan ❤️
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: PrincessAshVik

It seemed short :( Oh man the cons of reading only one chapter at a time.

Not so much of a marathon eh? 😆
But it was amazing as always!!
Shukriya!
ShraMan are ADORBS!!! Loved the part where Shravan talks about his issues. Love Eric for being a momma bear!!!
Haina❤️
Can't wait for the trip!!!
Its here!
Update soon please and thankies for the PM <3
Always ya!

@Bold Saru ❤️

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