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Arpi1234

@Arpi1234

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Posted: 7 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: BloodRune

Yeh 'RES' kya hai samjhao mujhe!😆😕

baad main comment karenge, pehle hi reserve kardiya

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Arpi1234

@Arpi1234

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Posted: 7 years ago

#32

What an excellent update 👏
Sumo's pain, anger, debt, majburi everything has been written beautifully..
Really feeling bad for her, poor girl has to bear a lot..
Pushkar is a true friend..
Aakhir main shravan ki entry 😃
Continue quickly..

Love
Smita

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Sumodreamer05

@Sumodreamer05

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Posted: 7 years ago

#33

Another beautiful piece...
Sumo always said shravan is bhukkad par yahan toh bhukkdi ho khud nikli..
Absolutely beautiful Pushkar and Sumo scene..
Really Sumo's pain never really shown in the show but glad that you portrayed it beautifully 👏
Thanks for pm..

Love
Shrujani

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sweksha

@sweksha

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Posted: 7 years ago

#34

I knew it I knew it when she was telling to pushy about everything mujhe lag raha tha koi to teesra hai jo sun raha hai...let's see how much he listened...awesome update dear...you are a great writer the way you described sumo's feeling was amazing...eagerly waiting for next part thanks for pm

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shirly amirja

@shirlys

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Posted: 7 years ago

#35

Wow...wonderful...liked sumo and pushkars bonding...finally shravan is here..

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Only4ShraMan

@MariaCreations

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Posted: 7 years ago

#36

Wonderfully penned each and every emotions 👏

Welcome to our family 🤗

Update fast eagerly waiting to hear ShraMan conversation

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BloodRune

@BloodRune

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Posted: 7 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: CarpeDiem_
And the famous cliff is here !! 😛
Our runaway bride is having burger with coke... 😆 Sumoish! !
Suman n Pushkie convo- I was all eyes...ears and heart,,.until an evesdropper came into picture!!
This black clad man is one kinda black hole...😳 attention seeker! !

The moral of the story is...Love isn't hard to find, trust is !!

Pleasing update! !
Thanks for the pm! !😊

Sumo has to do Sumo vale kaam. Lol!

I always wanted more of Sumo and Pushkar's friendship shown because they had been there for each other for 10 years and that is a very long time to form a special bond.

Arre, black clad man is always in a black hole because he refuses to see anything. He took everything at face value. With him jo dikhta hai vohi hota hai. 😆

And the moral is spot on!

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BloodRune

@BloodRune

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Posted: 7 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: Arpi1234
What an excellent update 👏
Sumo's pain, anger, debt, majburi everything has been written beautifully..
Really feeling bad for her, poor girl has to bear a lot..
Pushkar is a true friend..
Aakhir main shravan ki entry 😃
Continue quickly..

Love
Smita

Thank you! Gald you liked it 😳

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BloodRune

@BloodRune

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Posted: 7 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: Sumodreamer05
Another beautiful piece...
Sumo always said shravan is bhukkad par yahan toh bhukkdi ho khud nikli..
Absolutely beautiful Pushkar and Sumo scene..
Really Sumo's pain never really shown in the show but glad that you portrayed it beautifully 👏
Thanks for pm..

Love
Shrujani

Bhukkad dono hai. Kabhi nahi sudhrenge 😆

Thank you so much! 😳

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BloodRune

@BloodRune

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Posted: 7 years ago

#40

Originally posted by: sweksha
I knew it I knew it when she was telling to pushy about everything mujhe lag raha tha koi to teesra hai jo sun raha hai...let's see how much he listened...awesome update dear...you are a great writer the way you described sumo's feeling was amazing...eagerly waiting for next part thanks for pm

Ha! That part kinda just happened. I actually never planned on Shravan coming there. 😕😆

Glad you liked it! 😳