The Wedding SS - Ek Duje Ke Vaaste - Page 2

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: KitkitMkb

I really liked what I read so far and even happier that a new comer is writing and that too so flawlessly. I hope that you have a great time in the forum and of course keep writing!


I've been quietly reading and liking the stories on this forum and loving all that I've read so far! ❤️
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Welcome to forum dear
nice starting
Sumo is brave here she listened to her heart not brain or didn't look towards her family before taking decision.

her agony her feelings written very well
Waiting for 2nd chap

Vinu
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Posted: 7 years ago
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wow dear I am just loving it from the first part...now that chomu will learn that unke beech me zabardasti ghus aane me kya hota hai jo bane hai ek duje ke vaaste...ab tkk to aapne suman ko dekha tha aaj chashmish ki sumo ke bhi darshan ho gye 😃 let's see how will vakeel sahab handle this situation...I am so excited for next part...please update soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Wow!!!
This was brilliant!

Welcome to the forum. Hope you have a great time here:)
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Halleo...!!😃🤗
Welcome to the EDKV forum..!!!
Amazing writing girl...too good👏👏
Thank god she did not go to nanu saying"please mujhe maaf kar dena"😆
Pushkar😳Hezz such a cutie yaar...
Waiting eagerly for the next part...!!!.And yes as reshma said a newbie with amazing writing cements the hope😃
Update soon..
Love,
Anu😳

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Wow ! Loved it :) I had decided not to read anymore FF of Shraman ( for my own sanity ) but your story jus lured me into waiting for more 😳

As Reshma mentioned thank god it is the saath phera ritual 😆

You description of Suman's pain is so well narrated and I'm happy you included Pushkie too
😳

Chapter 2 is being #awaitedmuch #level9999 wala 😉

Mayuri ❤️
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Posted: 7 years ago
#17

Originally posted by: HappyLibran1910



Wow ! Loved it :) I had decided not to read anymore FF of Shraman ( for my own sanity ) but your story jus lured me into waiting for more 😳

As Reshma mentioned thank god it is the saath phera ritual 😆

You description of Suman's pain is so well narrated and I'm happy you included Pushkie too
😳

Chapter 2 is being #awaitedmuch #level9999 wala 😉

Mayuri ❤️


Mayu. ..why do you only give special appearances these days? I miss you 🤗
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: vimikrao

Welcome to forum dear
nice starting
Sumo is brave here she listened to her heart not brain or didn't look towards her family before taking decision.

her agony her feelings written very well
Waiting for 2nd chap

Vinu


Hi, Vinu!
I really wanted Sumo to do something for herself once without thinking of the consequences that would follow and since it didn't happen in the show I made it happen here. 😆

Thank you so much!
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Welcome to the forum Rohina 😊
Loved the chapter. Interesting. 😳

Eva.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: sweksha

wow dear I am just loving it from the first part...now that chomu will learn that unke beech me zabardasti ghus aane me kya hota hai jo bane hai ek duje ke vaaste...ab tkk to aapne suman ko dekha tha aaj chashmish ki sumo ke bhi darshan ho gye 😃 let's see how will vakeel sahab handle this situation...I am so excited for next part...please update soon



AH! Your comment made me smile because that's exactly it! After Shravan left she was Sumo but she wasn't the same. And by the time he came back, Sumo was neck deep with all the familial obligations that no matter how much she tried (we did see a few glimpses of Chashmish ki Sumo) she couldn't make herself go back to the carefree Sumo she was before. ❤️

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