Alfaaz - A ShraMan FF - Now Moved to Wattpad

orion23

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Posted: 7 years ago

#641

@Reshma I sure as hell missed your comments!

Thank you so so much!

Mai detail mai laptop se comment karti..

Phone is annoying..

I head you weren't well..

Are you better now?

Feel better sooner 🤗

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_anukulgr8

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Posted: 7 years ago

#642

Originally posted by: orion23
@ Anu Bro koi PM nahi hai ...
You sent something?

Yeah I did. ..Wait up lemme check

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orion23

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Posted: 7 years ago

#643

Originally posted by: ZehriliChidiya

Yeah I did. ..Wait up lemme check

Okay 😛

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_anukulgr8

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Posted: 7 years ago

#644

@Zo Di Aab paaka check out

I just got a spamming message after like ages

Edited by ZehriliChidiya - 7 years ago

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orion23

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Posted: 7 years ago

#645

Originally posted by: ZehriliChidiya
@Zo Di Aab paaka check out
I just got a spamming message after like ages

Check PM box 😛

And wah.. spam messages na aaye toh maza hi Kya hai😆

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adityasingh.246

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Posted: 7 years ago

#646

After the last part , I was anxiously waiting for this one ..

& believe me its beautiful ,the best part that I can't fall out of love of shraman ever are their imperfections , with which together they reach out and perfectly fit together,belong together..

Its like however hard the day had been,their respite at sunset lies in their souls being together at the end despite all their differences..

& you have a beautiful way with words , the way you describe that tugging feeling of their emotions,raw immaturity still mature enough to be there for each other is 👏👏👏

Update soon , until next time❤️

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_anukulgr8

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Posted: 7 years ago

#647

Originally posted by: orion23

Check PM box 😛
And wah.. spam messages na aaye toh maza hi Kya hai😆

Wahi toh. ..aaj toh maza he aa gaya...

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orion23

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Posted: 7 years ago

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Originally posted by: ZehriliChidiya

Wahi toh. ..aaj toh maza he aa gaya...

🤗

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deltadawn

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Posted: 7 years ago

#649

I am still in a trance. This was like having the perfect dessert.

First with the eyes and then enjoying each tantalizing bite as it melts on the tongue.

It was like reading poetry.

Don't laugh at me cause I need to remind you of your title again Jahanpana!!

You said you feel liberated writing this, you have liberated something inside me as well. A step from each of them taken together. Perfect.

The description of how Suman realizes this was the best I have read maybe in my entire life. Takes a moment to take yourself and away and see this and realize. But rarely ever happens.

Her letter, she is no literary genius but you are. But she is suffering since long. And today the girl took a step to end it by herself. The Sumoness for sure 😊 also it can only be with Shravan. Telling that story needed a foundation of trust only that boy could have built.

I love them and how they have decided to "grow up" 😊

a hug for you cause I read a beauty today. 🤗

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