ShraMan FF: Holding You, (C18 pg 102) - Page 40

Originally posted by: Faith28

Beautifully penned👏Every emotion was bang on... Glad he shared hes innermost feelings with sumo.

Ab Sumo se nahi karega to kise karega ;)[B]

Superbly written lengthy(which im glad of) update😳
[B] Lengthy indeed more than 8500 words I kind of have verbal diarrhea ;)

The story is developing so well...pls write soon😊

Originally posted by: ZehriliChidiya

Beautifully Penned..!!!❤️

Originally posted by: KitkitMkb

Khair Mubarak Tabby Kayan ho aaj kaal ?
Thank you for the comment though :)

Originally posted by: deltadawn

Res.

Ye din bhi a gaya that I have to wait to comment on this beauty

----unress

but I cant wait longer so here I am !!😃

🤗

You know what I absolutely love about you and this story. the emotional details of it that you never lose out on. there is no haste while you paint this one. steady hands doc !!👏

I seriously have to scratch my head I don't know how do you handle many stories at the same time so seamlessly and never lose the track, need to learn a thing or two ;)

For Shravan the discovery that Suman loved him is a new lease on life. From where he stood and was trying to recover from, that moment came at such a great time. It can lift spirits manifold which it seems to have.

Shravan in love we got to see this in only few episodes and I loved and I wanted more of him I haven't seen him happier than when he realized that he loved her. That smile and those twinkling eyes made a guest appearance and I wished they were permanent. Sigh.

But Nimmo has to be Nimmo. As a parent always failing to see what is needed and what is wanted.

I don't imagine her character redeeming overnight and I think that sometimes when you rebound with someone you ought to make some mistakes unconsciously. She might realize it one day ;) who knows ?

But good though that Shravan no longer relies on only that corner for emotional support. He has a stronger pillar in Suman now and he did figure it out. Good job there Sal. Anyway shaadi ke baad priorities to badal hi jaati hain insaan ki.😆
Kisi ki yaad aarahi hai ? ;)

Sumo's take on independence. I do agree with it because she said it. If Nimmo had given this justification she would get a tight slap from me.

That makes us two 😆

Independence is only needed when there is a lack of freedom. Otherwise in a family there should always be interdependence. Its about priorities. And no one is making the world a better place by holding on to their jobs as CEOs or Managers of the corporate world so save the gab. Its money we all need and if there is a bigger priority than money then pick it for the sake of love.
Delta be preaching like the boss she is ;) I completely agree with you money is necessary for basic needs but then if it hampers your family life it's really not worth it. Gotta make some balance. I tried to make their conversation as real as possible I was afraid ke thoda zyada to nahi hogaya 😆
For Sumo, her priority was a debt, her priority was to not be dependent on her relatives so she is right.

Shravan's defence of his wife. I love him.❤️ Doesn't mean he needs to understand his excuse of a mother on the same lines. He is released from the shackles of trying to fix it with his non existent mother by delta here😉

As for the beautiful man here holding on to the poor little girl who was underappreciated by all. My heart goes out to the couple. They really need to hold on to each other cause nothing in the nearest vicinity reflects any love or care.

Beautiful update Sal.

Ramadan Mubarak🤗

Originally posted by: PrincessAshVik

Hey!!!

Ramadhan Mubarak to you too!! Have a blessed month!!
Shukriya, have a blessed month too :)

This was heartbreaking yet beautiful!!

I always hated Nirmala. And the first part of this chapter proved exactly why. If the show wasn't rushed, I can imagine her doing exactly what she did here. Tried to stick to the character ;) I don't see her redeeming overnight.There's a monologue you gave during the scene which was heart wrenching but beautifully written. I could just cry for Shravan. His mum has just taken him for granted. She had and she is.
I found this scene to be necessary, to show Shravan that comes a time in life when you have the let go of people and accept the circumstances.
And it's just sad because he is such an amazing being. The type of a child a mum can be proud of.
This. I tried to highlight this in my other updates but Shravan was always afraid of failing people he Loves be it Sumo or his parents and I feel that this was shown in the show, like the fact that he wanted to pursue his studies in his father's desired field or even the kind of friend he was to Sumo. Such a complex character yet so beautiful!
Yeah he has his faults. He has made big (an understatement) mistakes, but something he may never had done if he had the presence of either of the 2 women (or even both) he loves so much, in his life at the crucial juncture when he actually did not.

That's Shravan's biggest mistake, he loves his people so much that their actions affect him in a way that makes him react he always let others' actions define him, that's what the next updates are going to be about I'll try to dwell deeper into his insecurities and how he deal with them.

The remaining chapter was so beautiful and happy. Yeah it had its sad moments but the happy ones were so much bigger!!! They give each other so much happiness. He does not want to burden her and he comes first for her. They have come such a long way from him wanting to hurt her and her putting everybody before him. Sigh. And you have shown that transition so well!!!

I wanted to see that beautiful transition on screen :(

My favourite kind of scenes are when a partner is defending the other half when they are not in the scene but around overhearing.
That makes us two !
And you had this here!! I LOVED it!! The way he stood up for her!!! And her crying in relief, her pain hidden from him.

This was such a beautiful chapter!!!

P.S: I have never asked you this before, what's your name?

Originally posted by: reshmanair356

This chapter was made of moments. ..Shravan basking under the new found knowledge of Suman's love, Nirmala anxiously waiting to seek his go ahead to run off to her foster son, him knowing her anxiety yet controlling his annoyance, them meeting, Shravan standing up for Sumo. ..but the moment that took my heart was when he promised her that he will always fight for her..something that Sumo never did for him.

I love how in the beginning of your comments you sum up the update and highlights the moments you liked it really helps me in knowing if I was able to convey what I was trying to and most of the time your favorite moments are mines too.

It's strange that Nirmala, however interested she sounded in seeking Shravan's permission to go to Aditya, actually thought of going over to Aditya. I had actually a theory about Nirmala if the show had more time, eventually if she realized her mistakes she wouldn't have left Aditya for Shravan because that would be like history repeating itself, she would have chosen one son over the other and then her already flawed character would have been impossible to redeem. But she stays flawed so Indid want her to make mistakes here and there. She doesn't know Shravan the way a mother does, she is still learning.
Shravan on other hand was yet again understanding enough to let her go without staking a rightful claim over his mother's love, either because he understood the futility of it or because it was late now to forge a natural bond with her.
He is smart and I'll go with both, he can see that crying or yelling won't do any good and sometimes it's better to settle with what you have.
One of the hardest things in life is to grieve the loss of a person who is still alive.

True.

I loved their meeting outside PCT, it spoke so beautifully about their relationship. They knew each others schedule, their movements were noticed without even they themselves being conscious enough to notice it...this spoke volumes of the depth they shared. They meant more than they knew to each other.

You always pick up in the details don't you ? ;)

The restaurant scene was again beautiful. Shravan did have caveman instincts towards Sumo, mine to cherish, mine to protect, mine to provide for.
Will dwell deeper into that aspect in the coming updates ;)
Her explanations were relatable as well.

Him standing up for her and Sumo getting overwhelmed and all that followed was bliss.

Like I said, love the way you write Saleha, everything you write is either exceptional or not enough for me..I always want more.😛

These words really mean a lot to me, really ❤️ 🤗

Ramadan Mubarak Sal!

Originally posted by: AnOptimist

I'm falling more & more forShravan with each update!!❤️
Banda hi aisa hai ;)

Love the way how you're also focusing on supportive characters to move this story forward.

Eagerly waiting for next update😊

P.S. : If possible, can you send me a pm next time?Neki aur puch puch

Originally posted by: KitkitMkb

Thanks Gunjan, will send you a buddy request :)