ShraMan FF: Holding You, (C18 pg 102) - Page 34

Originally posted by: KitkitMkb

You always see beyond what it's written and you see the details and that makes me really happy ;)
Glad that I could make you smile :)
I really need to learn to quote properly as every of your paragraphs make me smile.
I love how you interpreted the characters' emotions here.
Thank you dear 😊
ShraMan had so much potential sigh just trying to fulfill that in my own way.
I wish they worked more on Sumo's character, like showing her struggles would have been a great thing to do.
They had much more depth in them but!!
Sumo's chatacter could also be presented in a much better way...Her character had many shades but butchered badly by writers :(
I think that would have come in the next episodes. Again I love it that you pinpoint details I just imagine myself in his place and that really helps.
Don't apologize for writing an OS, this matters a lot to me Nikka sa Nik 🤗

Originally posted by: Nik03

Glad that my words makes you smile...😊
I love your writing bud ❤️
Keep it up 👍🏼

Originally posted by: KitkitMkb

Pushkar was the best character ever I wanted to see more of him, alas ! The duo Sumo-Pushkar was the best, every time I read comments I realize the potential and if only we were given time.
If only!! 😕

I remember in the beginning of the story someone wanted to see Sumo realizing her mistakes here we are😆
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That's the way thing they didn't talk or when one of them tried to something or the other kept happening.
Exactly...All they wanted was to TALK!!
You and Tabby really have the eye for detail, yes it was back to square one !
Tabby is Tabby...She have a way with words 😊
He asked urgely his fingers almost touching her wrist..Remember episode 5 when she is about to wake up Nanaji and he almost touches her wrist so many feels❤️
❤️ ❤️
I am happy those lines had an impact😃
Holding You is leaving a deep impact on me with its every part ...Always ❤️
Thank you so much Nikka sa Nik🤗
Thanks to you too 😊
My Sunday is made ;)
And am Happy 😃

Originally posted by: Nik03

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Originally posted by: KitkitMkb

I need to learn to quote like this😆

Originally posted by: Nik03

Sal...one more thing I have to say ya.
Actually I have my exams from 8th May...So I wont be much regular from now on.
Will be there at night time but wont be able to comment.
It takes really long time...Long ones na 😆
But will drop by whenever I can.
Keep sending pms buddy...will make it up to you later.
Pakka!!
Love you buddy...🤗

Originally posted by: KitkitMkb

It's all good I still have so many stories to read so no tension aur Waise bhi few chapters left and then the end so you'll have ample time to unress 😆
Love you too 🤗

Originally posted by: Nik03

That means jab tak main waapis aaungi, Story end 😭

Originally posted by: KitkitMkb

Idk bro depends on my speed and if I get more things to add 😆