ShraMan Drabble Series~ The Center of the Room *Drabble #5 updated* - Page 10

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Posted: 8 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: adityasingh.246

Couldn't have been more adorable👏



Thanks! 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#92
ohhh yeahh...!!!
Such a cute one this is...!!🤗

Him trying to be normal so that she doesnt feel awkward ... He cares so much for her...!!!

They forgot to bring Sumo's clothes.. Now thats realistic...!!! 😆

The blunders he made.. 🤣 Mr.SexyMalhotra loses his consciousness in presence of Mrs.SexyMalhotra 😉

Imagine Sumo in #Mr.MalhotraKiFavTrackPants...!!! What a sight no??

Adjusting her pants' sleeves for her...!!! Awww... how cute...!!! What an adorable sight...!!!😳

" he was going to discover every way possible to make her blush even more." ahem ahem...!!! would love to read it all...!!! ☺️☺️☺️

Kiss kab hoga Casy... ye kiss kab hoga...!!! 😛

And sorry for what madam?? For writing such an adorable one??? Then toh you should be sorry always..😎

I love the way you keep using the phrase "Center of the room" Amazing and smart..👍🏼

P.S. Hey there could have been a drabble on the teasing part as well...!!! 😳 (greedy me 😛)
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Posted: 8 years ago
#93

Originally posted by: Castile2



Lips zipped and locked!! 😆 😉
Thank you thank you!!😳

Accha OK comment kar dena koi nahi!! 😛

Areee par drabble #2 pe tumhaar comment nahi dikh raha 😆
Baaki hai? Toh pls pls jaldi kardena!! 😉 😆


Done donaaa done done... uper dekho 😆😆😆

ye toh drabble ke jitna hi mera comment bhi ho gaya 🤣
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Posted: 8 years ago
#94
Hey Cas Di,
How are you? ?
Main kitne time baad forum par aayi😲
But the 2 drabbles were❤️
First drabble main my fav was the line: it was no more about him or her, it was about them😳
Second drabble, conclusion line:
No matter how ridiculous she looked, she was his😳

What a comeback👏👏👍🏼
Keep up the great work

Love
Arpita
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Posted: 8 years ago
#95

Originally posted by: anukulgr8

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif"><font color="#9900FF">Casi...🤗
This was juz awesome man...
Like loved so much ke 3 times padha pura ka pura...😳
Swimming in his dress...OMG ...juz imagining that is so adorable...
Supperr se bohot bohot bohot zyaaada upper vala drabble...👏👏
Dil mange more...😃
ANU😳
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Anu! 😃

You really liked it?! Teen baar padha?!! 😳
ShraMan are just adorable in whatever they do!! 😛 😆

Thanks for the comment dear!!
Till next time!

Cas 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#96

Originally posted by: amlavs

Wowww...

It's beyond amazing...
Shravan shravan...his talks my god...
Loving ShraMan...
Their first kiss...ufff!!!!!!
Hope more ShraMan moments is waiting for us...
LavSriya



Hi Sriya!

Thanks dear for this comment! 😳
Shravan is OMG in whatever he does!! 😆 😛
And abhi first kiss nahi hua 😉

I hope I don't disappoint you...

Cas 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#97

Originally posted by: sptrno

Awww how cute adorable!



Love,
Spandana



Thank you Spandana!

Cas 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#98

Originally posted by: LubSha

Hey Cas,
Speechless. It was beautifully written. You are an amazing writer Cas. And OS is your thing. You are best at it. I always try to write an OS it becomes way too lengthy.
Just keep going my friend. 👏

Lubna.



Yo Lubna 😊

Thanks man! Somewhere I felt it was a bit superficial 😕
Yaa! I can only write OSs, SS aur FF toh baap re...woh toh aap log hi karo! 😆

I'll keep going if you do that too 😛

Till next time
Cas 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Drabble #3~ Best Friends?! First Kiss?!

Shravan Malhotra couldn't believe his own two ears! Had he heard it right? He stood frozen in his place, confused. In the center of the room, his eyes closed and hands gently holding his wife's face and his own face leaning towards her, lips mere centimeters apart. After all that the two of them had been through and in the middle of their first tryst with intimacy, his wife had to just do that. Really.

Suman giggled. Just before their.

What was so funny about it, again?

It wasn't like Shravan didn't like it when she laughed or giggled, for a change, but there is always a moment for it. And now wasn't it. But of course with his Sumo there is never an appropriate moment for just about anything!

Shravan thought with slight exasperation as his wife was still giggling away.

He looked down at his wife and cocked an eyebrow in question. Suman's face was flushed with amusement as she opened her eyes and met his gaze.

"You are kissing me!" Suman said with mirth twinkling in her big brown orbs. Shravan just gave her a look.

Yeah right, Shravan thought sarcastically. Expect Sumo to state the most glaringly obvious thing in the most ridiculous way. But he still failed to understand what his wife found so funny about this. And by just stating the obvious, she was confusing him further and keeping him from staking his claim after 11 years, 3 months and 20 days!

"I am not kissing you, per se, rather I was in the process of kissing you, Sumo Madam." Shravan rolled his eyes.

"But do tell me what you found so funny about the fact that your own husband is kissing you after confessing his love that made you break in to impromptu giggles just before your first kiss?"

Instead of getting a crisp retort, Shravan was rewarded, surprisingly, with a fresh set of giggles that tugged at the corners of his lips and spread a delicious warmth in his chest. If he didn't know better, then he would have thought that his wife was definitely drunk. But he really needed to know and now!

"Sumo...jaldi bolo naa!"

"Ruko-toh...S-Shra...van!" Sumo said between her giggles. she took a couple of breaths and looked back up at him. What she said next left Shravan to gape at her and her ludicrous musings.

This woman...

"Shravan tum mujhe kiss kar rahe the, I mean karne wale the par tum bhul gaye? Hum toh pehle best friends haina aur bachpan se tumhe aise hi maana hai toh abhi tumhe, I mean hum dono ko aise dekh ke, you know mujhe thoda odd laga matlab not in a bad way, par thoda funny lagraha hai...tumhe nahi lag raha? Funny I mean..., mei toh ab bhi ankh band karti hun toh tumhara chotta version yaad aaraha hai, Chashmish Shravan...hehehe...and look what I'm wearing...pagal lag rahi hoon mei...aur tum toh muuhhh-"

Shravan suddenly bent down and captured her lips to stop her rants. Given their inexperience in the field of physical intimacy, their first kiss wasn't bad, at all. He felt his wife's breath hitch and then she responded, tentatively. He could feel a strange tingling in his body down to his toes and guessed Sumo too might have felt the same. He drew back after the brief but intense kiss and gazed at the woman in front of him.

Suman's eyes were wide and dazed and her cheeks were tinted with red and Shravan thought she looked absolutely adorable.

"Lalloo..." Shravan breathed.

Standing there, in the center of the room, holding his love in his arms, they had shared their first kiss, as a man and a woman, as a husband and a wife, staking his claim.

Finally after 11 years, 3 months and 20 days, he had made his best-friend his wife, in the center of the room.


~~~

Reply #100 on this post!😆

Till next time

Love

Cas😳

Edited by Castile2 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
OMG!!! I don't believe this..! 😕 Reading it after 4 long days.!!
Where on earth/if I was..! this is serious...!

Shravan n his heart beat..! Dreamy! 😳
Those slips...! Love- struck! ☺️
Sumo n the pyjamas..! Cuteness! 😛
Rolling up those track pants n sleeves...! Fondness! 🤗
The first..! Endearment ! ❤️

Loved it..!

Pm me nxt !if at all u do...😊

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