ShraMan Drabble Series~ The Center of the Room *Drabble #5 updated* - Page 8

Hey Cas,
Speechless. It was beautifully written. You are an amazing writer Cas. And OS is your thing. You are best at it. I always try to write an OS it becomes way too lengthy.
Just keep going my friend. 👏

Lubna.

Awww...it was so so sooo lovely, cute, adorable piece... ...
Beautifully written... loved it. .
Sumo in shravan's clothes (swimming ) 😆 ...
Shravan adjusting sumo' clothes ... omg so cute... ...
Update soon dr...
Thanks for the pm buddy 😛

Originally posted by: Sunain

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O to the M effing G!!!
What a Fantablous piece!!!
So so lovely...m all Awe struk
So beautifully Penned! ⭐️
The cutest part was when Shravan adjusts her clothes for her..n thr kiss..[8->...Loved it to core❤️
Shravan folly was damn cute...Suman nay aj hi aday shade dekha deay pink n red kay😆
Shramanliciously Delicious❤️
Plz plz plz do continue soon😳


Love
Sunain❤️

Bud 🤗

Your comments are always a boost Sunain do you know that?!! 😆

I'm glad you loved this one 😛 😳
But abhi kiss hua nahi hai beta! 😉

My favorite part is also Shravan adjusting Sumo's clothes 😳
Yep! Ab Shra ki biwi bani hai toh Sumo red aur pink ke har shade me regularly badalti milegi! 🤪

Thanks dear! Will try to update soon!

Till then
Cas 😊

Originally posted by: Nik03

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Aww... 😳
That was mind boggling dear...!!

Shravan's folly... 😆
His talks with his conscience was so adorable... 😳
N what a damage control Mr. Malhotra...!! 😳
Shravan adjusting Sumo's sleeves...aww...A sight to behold..!!
N their first kiss... 😳

Loved the title bud...👍🏼
Awesome update...Or itte achi update ke liye sowii...No way..!!
Am loving this series... 😳
Thanks for the pm n update next soon...
Loads of Love
Nik

Hey Nik!!

Happy birthday again! 😳
Shravan kuch zyaada toh dumb nahi tha naa?!

Damage control and adjusting Sumo's clothes was ❤️ for me *sigh*

Abhi kiss nahi hua!! 😈

I'm glad you are loving this one!! 😳
Keep liking and commenting and I'll keep writing 😆

Thanks and till next time
Cas 😊

Originally posted by: Namiksfan

Hawww this was so cute

Made me go awwwiiieee

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<div>Bichara shravan🤣those gutter thoughts ...omg!!! I could really imagine shravan mentally whacking himself and sumo blushing😳

And the kisss omg!!🤪hayeee

And did you really say sorry for this cute piece ? I may really kill you for this😡never ever do that...okay? consider this an ultimatum

Okay zyada dhamki ho gyi kya? Sorry

Love yaaa,

Dolly😊

Dolly!

Hehehe I'm glad you loved this one! 😃
Hmmm haan Shravan 11 saal baad apne 'pyaar' ke saath hai toh can we blame him?! Naa!! 😆

Sorry cause this didn't come out as I had imagined it and was a bit long for a drabble 😕

Meko daato mat? Mei toh chhoti maasum si jaan hun! 😛 😆 😈

Thanks dear!
Till next time

Cas 😳

Originally posted by: Sadia.Ritu

Awww Ilovedthisonesomuch!Beautifullywritten

ContinueASAP..

Thanks Ritu Di!!
And would try to include the kiss in the next part, probably 😉 😛

Cas 😊

Originally posted by: maddy_edkv

awww this is soo cute. i love this.

Sumo in Shravan's clothes. i was thinking about the same while i was writing my exam and i was smiling like an idiot.

and their first kiss in the centre of the room is<b></b>

thank you so much for updating.

Love

Madhu

Hi Madhu!

Haww exam ke bich ShraMan fantasy?! Ooo naughty girl! 😉 😆
Let's see about the kiss... 😈

Thanks for this comment dear!!

Till next time
Cas 😊

Originally posted by: Safire

So cute and adorable!!!

Expecting more from you...

Thank you!!
Will try to not disappoint you...
Cas 😊

Originally posted by: vimikrao

Hi Cas...

Shravan khushi ke mare pagal ho gaya hai... 😉 What blunder he was doing...when Sumo asked Kya pehnoongi? Is he said kuch nehin..😆... He gave her his dress to wear & she is swimming in that dress, Kutub Minar ke dress kahan fit ayenge usko... He fold her sleeves & pant... & was he going to kiss her...😳

Thanx for PM

Vinu

Hey Vinu!

Wahi toh!!! Itti saari khushi mili hai itte saalon baad toh yeh toh hona hi tha 😆

Thanks for your comment man!! Will try to update soon!

Till next time
Cas 😳

My girl is back 🤗
This is so beautiful, Shravan's emotions are so well written his doubts and hesitations.
I always wanted Sumo to wear Shravan's hoody or t-shirt and you just made that possible, I want to read mooore !
Take care :)