ShraMan Drabble Series~ The Center of the Room *Drabble #5 updated* - Page 11

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Posted: 8 years ago
Drabble #3 posted! Lemme know how much i bored you all...😆
The first kiss...😉
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Posted! Finally!
Lemme know? and about the first kiss...😉
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I want to build a monument in the centre of that room!!!
Honestly I know of a certain someone who can giggle during any situation, so this side of Sumo looks quite familiar 😆

Glad Shravan didn't wait to hear the rest of her rant. ..I couldn't either😉

Glad to see you writing afterso long sugar❤️...missed you more than you can imagine! !
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Awww. ..so beautiful.
😳 first kiss
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Originally posted by: shaggy8

Awww...it was so so sooo lovely, cute, adorable piece... ...
Beautifully written... loved it. .
Sumo in shravan's clothes (swimming ) 😆 ...
Shravan adjusting sumo' clothes ... omg so cute... ...
Update soon dr...
Thanks for the pm buddy 😛


Thank you!
I'm glad you loved this one...😊
Sorry for the late update though😛
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Originally posted by: KitkitMkb

My girl is back 🤗
This is so beautiful, Shravan's emotions are so well written his doubts and hesitations.
I always wanted Sumo to wear Shravan's hoody or t-shirt and you just made that possible, I want to read mooore !
Take care :)


Sal...🤗

Sumo in any of Shra's clothing was my biggest fantasy, age old but it was😳
Thanks dear for the comment and yeah I too want to write more😛
Till next time
Cas😊
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Originally posted by: evaviego

ohhh yeahh...!!!

Such a cute one this is...!!🤗
You liked it?! Phew...😆
Him trying to be normal so that she doesnt feel awkward ... He cares so much for her...!!!
Shravan always thought about her comfort didn't he?!😳
They forgot to bring Sumo's clothes.. Now thats realistic...!!! 😆
Hey! That was plausible since the chaos that must have ensued that day😆😛
The blunders he made.. 🤣 Mr.SexyMalhotra loses his consciousness in presence of Mrs.SexyMalhotra 😉
Heheheh those blunders were just my wicked mind😉
Imagine Sumo in #Mr.MalhotraKiFavTrackPants...!!! What a sight no??
Obvio I imagined her and that's how I came up with this one...❤️
Adjusting her pants' sleeves for her...!!! Awww... how cute...!!! What an adorable sight...!!!😳

" he was going to discover every way possible to make her blush even more." ahem ahem...!!! would love to read it all...!!! ☺️☺️☺️
Ooo naa baba...I'm still a kid! You can write that though..😆😛
Kiss kab hoga Casy... ye kiss kab hoga...!!! 😛
Hogaya Eva...go read⭐️
And sorry for what madam?? For writing such an adorable one??? Then toh you should be sorry always..😎

I love the way you keep using the phrase "Center of the room" Amazing and smart..👍🏼

P.S. Hey there could have been a drabble on the teasing part as well...!!! 😳 (greedy me 😛)
Hmmm let's see...


Thanks Eva🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: ArpitaSingh1806

Hey Cas Di,

How are you? ?
Main kitne time baad forum par aayi😲
But the 2 drabbles were❤️
First drabble main my fav was the line: it was no more about him or her, it was about them😳
Second drabble, conclusion line:
No matter how ridiculous she looked, she was his😳

What a comeback👏👏👍🏼
Keep up the great work

Love
Arpita


Hi Arpita!
I'm infinitely better now, thanks for asking dear!!

I'm glad you loved both the drabbles dude...and yes thse are my fav lines too!😳

Thanks man, you keep up with the comments and I'll keep posting😆😛

Till next time
Love
Cas😊
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Originally posted by: CarpeDiem_

OMG!!! I don't believe this..! 😕 Reading it after 4 long days.!!

Where on earth/if I was..! this is serious...!

Shravan n his heart beat..! Dreamy! 😳
Those slips...! Love- struck! ☺️
Sumo n the pyjamas..! Cuteness! 😛
Rolling up those track pants n sleeves...! Fondness! 🤗
The first..! Endearment ! ❤️

Loved it..!

Pm me nxt !if at all u do...😊


Aree its ok! Now I can understand how that happens😆

Your comment...! Simply-amazing!⭐️
Loved it❤️

PMed the next...i just did😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
After so long u have updated.. 😉

Sumo is really funny who on earth will giggle while u r kisses by u r husband. 😆 & she feels he is still that chota version chashmish of her. 😆

Shravan just took her first kiss, they kissed each other it in the centre of the room as a husband and a wife, as a man and a woman 😉 & Sumo madam toh sharam se tamatar ban gayi.. 😳

Keep writing ..

Vinu
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