Shraman OS: 5 times Sumo did not kiss Shravan UPDTD part 3

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Author's Note: Hey friends. I am Pearl.. This is my first venture in the field of writing. Shravan- Suman are my muse, they fuel my imagination to skies. This is dedicated to Shaily (Wiccamaya) for she was the one who suggested me to put the pen on paper or rather the fingers on keyboard.

The following piece covers the lives of Shraman. Please comment. Even criticisms would be welcome.

The five times Sumo did not kiss Shravan

I. "Jab choti choti bato pe

Hum haste the or rote the

Tabse tumse pyaar kiya."

Year: 2005, September

The air of St. Xavier's Junior College was filled with excitement. A flurry of activities was going on, colours complementing the cacophony of surroundings, for it was the commencement of the grand eve of Annual Cultural Fest 2005-06'.

Suman Tiwari, Class XI was standing bored, after being dragged up by Poorna, for the auditions of the Play Romeo & Juliet'. She shuddered at the thought of the Shakespearean gibberish she would have to mug up, but Anjali was flawlessly uttering them. Her cool gang was all taking part in the Play and she, being the coolest, most awesome of them all, had to show them that she can do anything.

She espied Shravan round the corner, listening attentively to Mrs. Joseph; after all he had been selected for delivering the Welcoming Speech and co-ordinating the events. Chashmish was immaculately dressed as opposed to her untucked left shirt-tail and loose tie. Her face brightened when he caught her sight and raised his single eyebrow, as if amused by her choice. She smiled and shrugged and he went back to his conversation with the teacher.

"Ae Sumo, yeh rahi teri script. Learn these lines by tomorrow, okay", Poorna turned to face her. She nodded and the last bell rang, indicating the end of school day.

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" Uff Sumo, ye kya bala sar pe le li tune, yeh script toh seedhe dekho ya ulte, same hi lagti hai! Ab kya karu mai? Ye kya hai "I profane with my unworthiest hand"? Ye Shakepear bhi na, Seedhe-seedhe English mei nahi likh sakta tha..." Her musings were interrupted by Shravan who entered her room.

" Sumo, aaj kya bana rahi hai, bahut bhukh lagi hai yaar!" He inquired clutching his stomach,suddenly startled at the sight of her pursuing the pages in her hand.

"Ye kya, Sumo the great, aaj pehli baar kuch itne dhyaan se padh rahi hai". He dramatically rubbed his eyes behind his spectacles.

"Shut up Chashmish, Ruk mai khana lati hu phir batati hu" , dismissing the topic leaving for the kitchen.

He took the papers she left behind and chuckled at discovering the script. She came back with his food. After he was done eating, she gave him a covered casserole.

"Arre wah, gajar ka halwa", he was delighted.

"Ab tumhe moong daal ka halwa suit nahi hota na",she giggled and continued," mami kehti hai yeh light hota hai"

He smiled and pointed at the script, " Tum kabse ye Shakespeare ke drame karne lagi?"

"Sab kar rahe hai. But mujhe nahi samajh raha, aur tum bhi help nahi kar paoge iss baar.", she worriedly pouted.

"Kyu nahi kar sakta, mujhe Eng Lit. pasand hai..."

"Waah Chashmish, tu sacchi mei genius hai, matlab tujhe yeh samajhta hai! Mujhe toh laga mai haar jaungi."

"Mai tumhe kabhi haarne nahi dunga", he said earnestly.

She beamed at him and said, " Toh bata ye kya bakwas dialogue likhe hai..."' as she began reading loudly,

"Good pilgrim, you do wrong your hand too much,
Which mannerly devotion shows in this..."'

"Ruk," He went down on a knee,"Shakespeare properly karna chahiye"

"Tu toh bada romantic nikla yaar", she giggledas he took the script in his hand.

"Chup, Toh ye Romeo Juliet ko propose kar raha hai..."

"Kitna chep proposal hai yeh, jab samne wali ko kuch samajh hi na aaye. Mujhe toh na tulips se..."

"Haan, haan, yellow tulips se decorated jagah pe , SRK ke cheesy dialogues wala proposal chahiye. Pata hai, hazar baar keh chuki ho tum, ab practice kare? Mere ghutne dukh rahe hai."

He began touting Romeo's lines and she again interrupted,"Shravan, Romeo chasma pehenta tha?"

"Sumo ki bacchi, Tu bata Juliet kab itni moti thi", he teased back, getting back on his feet.

She gasped and threw a pillow at him. He began running around and throwing pillows at her in turn and she followed him and a pillow fight broke out.

" Ouch" , Sumo winced keeping a hand on her left eye as a corner of pillow touched it.

"Kya hua Sumo, dikha mujhe" he uttered as she nodded in a no. He bartered taking off his specs, " Le ab chasma bhi utar diya, bina chashme wala Romeo ban gaya, ab toh dikha.."

She removed her hand, her eye had turned red. He began blowing warm air on her eye whispering soothing nothings. Concern and care tinged with guilt were filled in his large, chocolate-brown eyes. She had never noticed how beautiful his eyes were. He continued his soothing and she was lost in his eyes. A strange feeling had started to envelope her and she kept on looking at his face, his long nose, his barely visible whiskers, his pink bow-shaped lips...

"Suman Bete...",Nanu called out to her breaking her of her reverie.

"Ji Nanu, abhi ayi" She replied.

Shravan was still busy in comforting her," Ab theek hai na Sumo? Jao aakh dho lo", he instructed softly.

She nodded, washed her eyes and they left towards Nanu's room.

"Damn!" Screamed Cupid, who was hovering above.

"Jab anjaan the, nadaan the

Tabse tumse pyaar kiya"


II. "Jab chup chup ke raato mei

Hum tare gina karte the

Tabse tumse pyaar kiya"

Year: 2006, January

As the clock neared midnight, Tiwari Killa was lulled to sleep with the full moon luminescent in the darkness. The chirping of crickets reverberated with the pounding of his heart as adrenaline pumped into his veins while sneaking through the secret way into her house.

She hummed a tune as she finished her bath, wrapping a towel securely around her body she walked out of the bathroom. Jolted into awareness by Shravan's sudden entry into her room, she squealed and both of them immediately turned around, her heart beating in her throat. Taking a deep breath, she calmed herself and before she could express her outrage, a litany of "Sumo, I am sorry; really sorry" fell in her ears.

She ducked behind the cupboard dressed up and walked tippy toed towards Chasmish who was still facing the wall. She saw him red faced with his hands covering his eyes. As she removed his hand, she saw that his eyes were still closed tightly and his lips kept on muttering apologies, his waif like appearance a picture of innocence that tugged her heart. A surge of affection filled her soul for her best friend, her fattu.

She neared his ear and queried, " Ae chashmish, koi aise ghusta hai kisi ke room mei?"

" Sumo , maine kuch nahi dekha, sacchi mei" , he pleaded as he opened an eye slowly and continued, "Koi aadhi raat ko nahata hai kya?"

"Main nahati hu" pat came her reply as she asked in her next breath, "Waise tum aaj yaha kaise, boards ki preparation ho gaye kya?"

" Arre aaj pata hai Meteor Shower dikhne wala hai, tujhe dikhane aaya tha", he responded brightly.

" Toh chal terrace pe!" she whispered excitedly.

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Beneath the starry night they sat perched on the parapet, watching the wonders of universe twinkling solely for them. The untarnished innocence of childhood on the cusp of adulthood made the stars within their reach.

Glancing at his digital James Bond watch, he complained, " Yaar its already 1.10, meteor shower ka time toh 1.07 ka tha..."

"Uff Shravan, ab ye nature teri watch pe punctual thodi hoga", and she exclaimed," Woh dekh chashmish, it started!"



The dazzling stars glowed brighter and some fell like raindrops while some stretched across the horizon puling their tails behind them. The beauty enchanted their senses, lightening up the deep trenches of their soul.

"Its amazing na", mumbled Shravan.

" Hmm..", she concurred still mesmerised.

" Pata hai in falling stars se jo wish mango, woh mil jaati hai! Tu bhi maang le, he said.

" Jo khud toot raha hai Woh hamari wish kaise poori karega Shravan." She softly muttered.

He turned to look at her, her eyes reflecting the stars yet they were filled with an inexplicable hue. "Matlab?", he wondered.

" Matlab much nahi yaar", She flashed a radiant smile and queried," Achha bata tune kya manga?"

" Kyu batau tujhe, batane se wishes puri nahi hoti!" He declared, dismissing the earlier anamoly as his imagination.

" Ja na bacchu, mat bata abhi!! Ek din khud aakar kahega!", She smirked placing her folded elbow over his shoulder.

" Dekhenge", he stuck out his tongue teasing her.

" Dekh lenge", she replied.

And the night echoed the sound of their laughter, their incandescent joy mingling with the stars.

"She should have wished", whined an unhappy Cupid.

" Don't worry, he wished for both of them", soothed the Angel.



A N: So guys, did you like it?? Thanks for the amazing response, it inspires me to write further.


Scroll down for Part 3.




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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hiii Pearl!!
this is ur First time...i literaly cant believe tht..Wht a Matser Piece u brought to us...simply Incredible!!
loved the poetry very much.
oohh their bickering was adorable n hillarious at the same time😆
"yeh script toh seedhe dekho ya ulte, same hi lagti hai!"🤣...Dumbo Sumo😆
Poor Shakspear..ab unhe thori na pata tha k humari Sumo itna confuseya jaay gi🤣
Romeo chashmish...Juliet Moti..🤣
Oye...a cupid..hmmm..intresting..lemme guess..Pushkar..rite???😃
Intuging start!😉
Just Loved it!
damn intresting...so eager to knw wht happens ahead...PalLeezZz...continue soon😳
till thn...


Take Care!
Sunain

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shraman convo are so cute...well-written ...hats off
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III. "Jab bin mausam barsato mei
Hum jhum jhum ke gaate the
Tabse tumse pyaar kiya"

Year: 2006, May

Dark, gravel-grey clouds had flocked up in the sky, indicating a downpour. It took her back a month in time to another unseasonal outpour when the drops rejuvenated the earth instead of spreading dreary bleakness.


"Ae Chashmish, yeah chilgoze sa muh kyu phula rakha hai. Ab toh tere exams bhi khatm ho chuke hai, chill kar!", She tried talking to her errant bestie who was walking two steps ahead of her, showing his unreasonable anger.

It had started drizzling and devoid of an umbrella, both were walking home, enjoying the cool droplets falling on their skin, the joyous atmosphere welcoming the rain after days of scorching Delhi heat.

" Tu baat mat kar mujhse", he continued to tread ahead of her.

" Par hua kya?", she inquired, genuinely confused at the strange mood of her generally amiable friend.

He stayed mum and she insisted, "Bol na!".

"Tu Rahul se kyo baat kar rahi this", he whined.

She smiled, " Oh, tu bhi na, kyunki woh Rahul hai aur maine uska naam toh suna hi hai!"

"Hasna tha?", he mocked ," Bohut bura joke tha yeh."

She smirked relieved at seeing him returning to his usual self and asked "Toh!"

"Tujhe pata hai na mujhe mere friends share karne pasand nahi hai", he said sternly.

" Pata hai jalkukde maharaj!", chortling at his possessiveness she replied.

" Sumo!!", he whined again," Chal ab jaldi, barish badh rahi hai!".

" Nahi jaana! Tu itna boring mat ban, chal khelte hai barish mei.", she insisted, loving the ambience.

" Khelte hai! Bacche hai kya hum, bukhar ho jayega", he cautioned.

" Nahi hoga na!", she pouted, "Koi budhe hai kya?"

The rain was washing away all the burdens and the puddles began plinking as it became heavier. She eyed a puddle in front of them and at a sudden inspiration jumped into it excitedly, "Wooh!!", splashing muddy water around.

" Eww! Sumo , kya karti hai, sab ganda kar diya mujhe!", he exclaimed.

" Jaise bada Mr. Ujala White tha tu, aa na", she chuckled brightly.

He stood there with his arms folded, facing away from her showing his displeasure.

"Shravan aa naa, accha dance karte hai.", she cajoled.

And she started dancing on the street, dragging him by his hand, jumping around breaking into an offkey song, the raindrops adding a soft musical chime,

" Koi ladka hai, jab woh chidhta hai,
Baadal aate hai ghumad-ghumad ghum-ghum!!
Chak dhum dhum, Chak dhum dhum, Chak!!"

Amused by her liveliness and spirit and simultaneously appalled by her ribbing,he stood there dazed. She continued her impromptu dance,

"Aise mausam mei, tum bhi kuch kaho
Tum bhi kuch karo
Khade ho kyu gumsum"

Pacified by her continuous gestures for him to join her and her contagious enthusiasm, he broke into a jig alongside and together they crooned putting frogs to shame,

" Chak dhum dhum, Chak dhum dhum, Chak!!
Chak dhum dhum, Chak dhum dhum, Chak!!"

Dancing around crazily with her, he tried to sing throatily, miserably failing in his attempt at melody,

"Koi ladki hai jab woh gaati hai,
Bakri bhi use acchi lagti hai!!"

Her eyes widened in response and yet they continued without a care in the world, dancing wildly, getting dirtier, the rainy pitter- patter acting as their instrument, singing happily along,

"Ghode jaisi chal, haathi jaisi dum
Oh saawan raaja kaha se aaye tum
Chak dhum dhum, Chak dhum dhum, Chak!!
Chak dhum dhum, Chak dhum ...!!"

The deep rumble of thunder jolted her into present. Dragging her feet reluctantly from the terrace, she reached her room, drenched to the boot.

Seventeen days had passed since his sudden departure. It still felt like he would walk into her room any time and...

"Stop dreaming Sumo, nahi aayega woh ab! Aur aaye bhi kyu, jo maine uske saath kia...", unable to complete the thought as a shudder wrecked her body remembering his desolate stance and pleading tear-filled eyes. It was probably the wind that had chilled her heart.

She picked up the photo-frame of the two of them eating ice-golas, the joy of his calm visage mocking her. Still she resolutely gazed at his picture, trying to make her apology heard, " Koi aise ruth ke jaata hai kya Chashmish. Ek number ki gadhi hu mai, stupid hu, par tu jaanta hai na mujhe... Phir kyu chala gaya?"

She had tried talking to Pushkar and Ramnath uncle, but every time she went in front of them, she felt herself unable to meet their eyes.

She had repeatedly tried to console herself, thinking that, "Itni bhi badi baat nahi thi, woh vacations mei aayega tab sorry bol dungi." But then why did his pleas echo in her ears, his tearful image haunt her. A strange restlessness had started creeping in her heart whenever he was mentioned.

She had interrogated Anjali, her brother studied in London, who had told her that Oxford chaps had winter break. He would definitely be home for holidays and she would hold no bars to pacify him.

Her eyes kept on stinging as she picked her apology card, Chashmish had told her about the increasing acidic content in rains, her eyes were definitely suffering a reaction to them.

She laid the card back, hugging the photo-frame closer as she sat near the window gazing the now clear sky, the garden filled with blooms. The purple flowers outside had acquired a silverish hue.

"Jab saase thami si thi
Aankho mei nami si thi
Tabse tumse pyaar kiya"

A tear slid down the cheek of Cupid as he time and again contemplated the complexities of humans.

Author's note:Phew! Done with the third part. I seriously need your feedback as I don't know how this one has come about. I wrote two pages about Sumo's guilt but then deleted it as it looked out of character.

Sumo is reaching there.And it is human tendency to absolve oneself of all crimes. So yeah, that's about it.

P.S. I tweaked the lyrics of 'Chak dhoom dhoom', but it sort of went with the flow. And they are silly teenagers.

Next up is Suman.

Edited by pearl.white - 8 years ago
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Hello Pearl

I'm Cas 😊

Choti Sumo and Chashmish Shravan ka romance!

Yes mujhe bhi Shakespeare palle nahi padta! 😆

Got major adorable feels when I imagined Chota Shravan going down on his knees! 😳

Moti Juliet and Chashmish Romeo! 🤣

It was hilarious and adorable at the same time!! 😳

And the undoubted concern!

Can't believe this is your first write up!!

Update soonish!!

Regards
Cas
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Omg!! Shraman combined with Shakespeare 🤣 weird but lovely..and chote shraman ka romance is a bliss. ...update soon...quite excited to read...and welcome here i am dolly 😊😊
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Good start! Update it soon!
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Ab tumhe moong daal ka halwa suit nahi hota na",she giggled and continued," mami kehti hai yeh light hota hai
"Mai tumhe kabhi haarne nahi dunga", he said earnestly. favourite lines...😊
Loved their banter..! adorbs !
Beautifully written...glad u chose to put fingers on keyboard !
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Romeo chasma pehenta tha?
Tu bata Juliet kab itni moti thi?

Ahahaahaha🤣
That was adorable!!😳
Please continue ASAP!😃
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Amazing... ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️
Choti Sumo in love... this concept is so good...
waiting eagerly for the next part

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