Shraman OS: 5 times Sumo did not kiss Shravan UPDTD part 3

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TangledThoughts

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Posted: 8 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: A.Hajnal
Awww, younger ShraMan...!!!

This is amazing! From your comments and posts, I just knew you are going to be an amazing writer, whenever you will write and I was so, so right! 😳
Aww!! Thank u dear. U really liked it so much!

I always wanted to watch and read the younger ShraMan, as their equation was never really explored well even though it played such a huge part in adult ShraMan's interactions...And who better than you to demand it from...
Younger Shraman added a unique dimension to the story truly.
So, keep writing and update soon, please, as I am impatiently waiting for the next chapters... 😃

Next part is here.😃 And I love your stories too much to put it in words.😃

Edited by pearl.white - 8 years ago

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CarpeDiem_365

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Posted: 8 years ago

#22

Part 2... wow...

Star in eyes of,,, star of my eyes...

Picturesque ! !

He wished for them...awwwdorable fattu...😳

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TangledThoughts

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Posted: 8 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: CarpeDiem_
Part 2... wow...
Star in eyes of,,, star of my eyes...
Picturesque ! !
He wished for them...awwwdorable fattu...😳

😆 Tumhaari aankho ka taara bohut buddhu hai par!!

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TangledThoughts

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Posted: 8 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: Naamika
I can't find 2nd part

It is on the first page itself dear. Below the first part in first post.😊

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CarpeDiem_365

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Posted: 8 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: pearl.white

😆 Tumhaari aankho ka taara bohut buddhu hai par!!

Waise star of my eyes was for ShraMan...😆

But I absolutely don't mind this Buddhu,fattu, chashmish!😉

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Dolly Chouhan

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Posted: 8 years ago

#26

Chotu update😭😭😭 *cries bitterly* but beautiful and soothing it was...i felt so calm and relaxed during reading this...the description of meteor shower was❤️ and bina knock liye ghusne ki adat shravan ko bhi a gyi🤣...but next pleaaasseee bada vala update... Pls pls pls...

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Lubna

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Posted: 8 years ago

#27

Hi Pearl,

Very beautifully written. Update the next one soon.

Lubna.

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A.Hajnal

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Posted: 8 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: pearl.white

Aww!! Thank u dear. U really liked it so much!

Younger Shraman added a unique dimension to the story truly.

Next part is here.😃 And I love your stories too much to put it in words.😃

Yes! I am loving it very, very much! So true, I wish we had gotten more of them! Kash!

And this is such a unique concept, more because it's Sumo's POV...The teenage Shravan's love had always been so there, so present in every action of his, but not Suman's, not really...So, I am so glad that we will get that from your writing! 😳

And aww, so sweet of you to say that, but believe me, your words always manage to express your love... 🤗

Part 2:-

Aww, Shravan wanted to watch Meteor shower with her so he went there at the 1 AM and what he found was...😆 And then there is a moment when she lets her guards down and gives him just a glimpse of the girl behind the Sumo - the strong mask!

Ah, ShraMan under the stars lit sky...!!!

And his wishes and prayers are for both of them, not just him...

The cupid is so cute, but so impatient too...😆