Shraman OS: 5 times Sumo did not kiss Shravan UPDTD part 3 - Page 2

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Posted: 8 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: Sunain

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Hiii Pearl!!
this is ur First time...i literaly cant believe tht..Wht a Matser Piece u brought to us...simply Incredible!!

😳 Yup, my first. Thank u dear!
loved the poetry very much.
It is from Mohobbatei..😃
oohh their bickering was adorable n hillarious at the same time😆
"yeh script toh seedhe dekho ya ulte, same hi lagti hai!"🤣...Dumbo Sumo😆
Haina!!😃
Poor Shakspear..ab unhe thori na pata tha k humari Sumo itna confuseya jaay gi🤣
Romeo chashmish...Juliet Moti..🤣
Oye...a cupid..hmmm..intresting..lemme guess..Pushkar..rite???😃

Asli Cupid, wings wala!!😃
Intuging start!😉
Just Loved it!
damn intresting...so eager to knw wht happens ahead...PalLeezZz...continue soon😳
till thn...


Take Care!
Sunain



Glad that u enjoyed it!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: dhanyata

shraman convo are so cute...well-written ...hats off


Thanks dear😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#13

Originally posted by: Castile2

Hello Pearl

I'm Cas 😊

Hi Cas😊
Choti Sumo and Chashmish Shravan ka romance!

Sweet na!!

Yes mujhe bhi Shakespeare palle nahi padta! 😆

Got major adorable feels when I imagined Chota Shravan going down on his knees! 😳

Mujhe bhi.😳

Moti Juliet and Chashmish Romeo! 🤣

It was hilarious and adorable at the same time!! 😳

And the undoubted concern!

Can't believe this is your first write up!!

Update soonish!!

Regards
Cas


Thanks for the lovely comments!!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#14

Originally posted by: Namiksfan

Omg!! Shraman combined with Shakespeare 🤣 weird but lovely..and chote shraman ka romance is a bliss. ...update soon...quite excited to read...and welcome here i am dolly 😊😊


Thank u dear. Chotu Shraman are ❤️
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Posted: 8 years ago
#15

Originally posted by: CarpeDiem_

Ab tumhe moong daal ka halwa suit nahi hota na",she giggled and continued," mami kehti hai yeh light hota hai

"Mai tumhe kabhi haarne nahi dunga", he said earnestly. favourite lines...😊
Loved their banter..! adorbs !
Beautifully written...glad u chose to put fingers on keyboard !


Glad that u enjoyed it.

And sacchi mei gajar ka halwa light hota hai. I asked my mum.😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: pearl.white


Glad that u enjoyed it.

And sacchi mei gajar ka halwa light hota hai. I asked my mum.😃


That's some creative homework ! 😉

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Posted: 8 years ago
#17
Amazing..ShraMan and Shakespeare...
Excited to readnext..
Update soon dear
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Posted: 8 years ago
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It was nice to read about younger version of Shraman..!...
Shakespeare drama & Sumo aisa lagta hai in dono mein door door ka nata nehin... Lazy Sumo & Mr. Perfect Shravan...

Chashmish Romeo & Moti Juliet... Hahaha...

First time writing... but incredible writing it is...

Continue soon

PM can be possible to send...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awww, younger ShraMan...!!!

This is amazing! From your comments and posts, I just knew you are going to be an amazing writer, whenever you will write and I was so, so right! 😳
I always wanted to watch and read the younger ShraMan, as their equation was never really explored well even though it played such a huge part in adult ShraMan's interactions...And who better than you to demand it from...So, keep writing and update soon, please, as I am impatiently waiting for the next chapters... 😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
#20

Originally posted by: vimikrao

It was nice to read about younger version of Shraman..!...

Shakespeare drama & Sumo aisa lagta hai in dono mein door door ka nata nehin... Lazy Sumo & Mr. Perfect Shravan...

Ab she is Sumo na!! She wasn't interested.

Chashmish Romeo & Moti Juliet... Hahaha...

First time writing... but incredible writing it is...

Continue soon

PM can be possible to send...


Thanks dear.
I don't hv time for pm. Pls try to catch it here.

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