Shraman OS: 5 times Sumo did not kiss Shravan UPDTD part 3

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TangledThoughts

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Posted: 8 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: Namiksfan
Chotu update😭😭😭 *cries bitterly* but beautiful and soothing it was...i felt so calm and relaxed during reading this...the description of meteor shower was❤️ and bina knock liye ghusne ki adat shravan ko bhi a gyi🤣...but next pleaaasseee bada vala update... Pls pls pls...

Is part 3 long enough?😉

Thanks.

Ab Jo Sumo ka hai Woh Shravan ka bhi hai.. Kamra ho ya aadat!!

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TangledThoughts

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Posted: 8 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: A.Hajnal

Yes! I am loving it very, very much! So true, I wish we had gotten more of them! Kash!
And this is such a unique concept, more because it's Sumo's POV...The teenage Shravan's love had always been so there, so present in every action of his, but not Suman's, not really...So, I am so glad that we will get that from your writing! 😳

And aww, so sweet of you to say that, but believe me, your words always manage to express your love... 🤗

Part 2:-

Aww, Shravan wanted to watch Meteor shower with her so he went there at the 1 AM and what he found was...😆 And then there is a moment when she lets her guards down and gives him just a glimpse of the girl behind the Sumo - the strong mask!

Ah, ShraMan under the stars lit sky...!!!
And his wishes and prayers are for both of them, not just him...
The cupid is so cute, but so impatient too...😆

There was so much more to both Shraman that was left undiscovered. Sumo specially got shortchanged.

And Sumo's love is still not present in the tale... Hai bhi toh she remains oblivious.

Shravan realised it too soon, hers is more gradual.

Thanks for the wonderful comments.

Yup, the Cupid mayhaps represents the fandom.

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Lubna

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Posted: 8 years ago

#33

Hi Pearl,

Loved it. I hope you have a 6th part too where Sumo doesn't miss. Lol. But really like these parts as you are going deep in their friendship. You describe simple yet very affectionate moments very well. Waiting for the next part.

Lubna.

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dhanyata

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Posted: 8 years ago

#34

I do needed to see the guilty side of sumo. How she realised her mistake, how she wanted to apologise, how she started missing her best friend, how it turned to love. ...so I am so liking this 3rd part which talks about her guilt. Beautifully penned. Sharman times are also so adorable. ..Shravan so caring...jealous. ..loveable. ...😳 please continue soonish 👏

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CarpeDiem_365

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Posted: 8 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: pearl.white

Oops! My bad!😉
Better than Tedha Shravan?? Swagster Shravan?

Haha...These two qualities are inherent him... in fact in that tedha medha swaggy mode,,he was a buddhu destroying himself ! n fattu rolling on floor in order save himself from his sleeping wife!😆 #TattooScene

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vimikrao

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Posted: 8 years ago

#36

Why did Shravan leave to London...

What she has done now... Why she is feel guilt ... Why can't she face Ramnath & Pushkar...

Continue soon

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CarpeDiem_365

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Posted: 8 years ago

#37

Part 3: my favourit-est by far...

Sumo's realisation journey is like an untravelled road... so much remained unsaid!

really feels nice to read about it!

unable to complete the thought as a shudder wrecked her body remembering his desolate stance and pleading tear-filled eyes. It was probably the wind that had chilled her heart.

Stunning lines...

Hold on for a second
If words can be weapons,
Her words had hurt him so bad...scarred !

And her WAIT...it melts once heart...!

He isn't coming too soon sumo! many holidays will come and go!

Cupid is symbolic of most of us!

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TangledThoughts

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Posted: 8 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: LubSha
Hi Pearl,
Loved it. I hope you have a 6th part too where Sumo doesn't miss. Lol. But really like these parts as you are going deep in their friendship. You describe simple yet very affectionate moments very well. Waiting for the next part.

Lubna.

What about "5 times when Sumo kissed Shravan"?

Thanks dear.

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TangledThoughts

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Posted: 8 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: dhanyata
I do needed to see the guilty side of sumo. How she realised her mistake, how she wanted to apologise, how she started missing her best friend, how it turned to love. ...so I am so liking this 3rd part which talks about her guilt. Beautifully penned. Sharman times are also so adorable. ..Shravan so caring...jealous. ..loveable. ...😳 please continue soonish 👏

She would have gone through gradual realisations. Right now, it has started sinking in.

Thanks for appreciation.

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TangledThoughts

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Posted: 8 years ago

#40

Originally posted by: CarpeDiem_

Haha...These two qualities are inherent him... in fact in that tedha medha swaggy mode,,he was a buddhu destroying himself ! n fattu rolling on floor in order save himself from his sleeping wife!😆 #TattooScene

🤣 So true!!

All that swag and tedhapan was a facade, tha toh Woh bhondu sa chashmish😆 Scared of being caught... TDS ki book ke peeche chip raha tha...😉