Shraman OS: 5 times Sumo did not kiss Shravan UPDTD part 3 - Page 5

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Posted: 8 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: vimikrao

Why did Shravan leave to London...

What she has done now... Why she is feel guilt ... Why can't she face Ramnath & Pushkar...

Continue soon

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This is following the original storyline when Shravan left to oxford after Sumo insults him in front of school. Her guilt is the aftermath.😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: CarpeDiem_

Part 3: my favourit-est by far...

Sumo's realisation journey is like an untravelled road... so much remained unsaid!
really feels nice to read about it!

unable to complete the thought as a shudder wrecked her body remembering his desolate stance and pleading tear-filled eyes. It was probably the wind that had chilled her heart.
Stunning lines...

Hold on for a second
If words can be weapons,

Her words had hurt him so bad...scarred !

And her WAIT...it melts once heart...!
He isn't coming too soon sumo! many holidays will come and go!

Cupid is symbolic of most of us!


Thank u!!

Sumo's side of love was left blank. Maybe it was to be Shravan's journey after their marriage to explore into her side of tale. Alas!

Words dig dipper than swords!

And she is in for the longest wait!

Thanks for the wonderful comments😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: pearl.white


🤣 So true!!
All that swag and tedhapan was a facade, tha toh Woh bhondu sa chashmish😆 Scared of being caught... TDS ki book ke peeche chip raha tha...😉

Agreed n that scene was one of the finest...! the parallel,,was wow...!!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Note: I was caught up in some work. Next part will be updated tomorrow morning.😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#45
Amazing..
Chotu ShraMan.. ❤️
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Posted: 8 years ago
#46
hey please update ...excited to read the next chappy
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Posted: 8 years ago
#47
Congratulations for your first story ... beautiful .. emotional and phenomenal
chotu Sumo and Sharavan are love ... their bickering.. and you are writing story from Sumo's POV that's amazing. last part is cliffhanger ... what happened between them... update jaldi se...

ye aapne first time likhe hai lagta nahi hai... you have captured all the emotions, story is very well structured and smooth. Bae is adorable and Sumo is Sumo ... hmmm
Now Sumo will realise her love ... awww
keep writing ... stay blessed 😊


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