Shraman ff: HUM TUM part 27(updated on page 144 - Page 9

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Marshall ah! Priya kya likha hai. To finally 20 bday ki baat finally saamne aa hi gayi.*sigh*. Aur budhu shravan he knows he is attracted to her, yet dur baagh raha hai. Lesson to sumo. Hmmh. Let's see. Update soon😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Shravan is jealous!!! Very well written!!!! Waiting for the next part!!!!!!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#83
Amazing chapi piya🤗👏
Its very nice to read Pushman's. Their bonding is amazing any one can feel jealous of them shravan's thinking is not wrong... Because they share good friendship... 🤪

The way Pushkar tease Sumo taking Shravan's name...

Shravan twirled around Sumo & fell down on the bed upon Sumo... Wow it was so romantic ...their eyelock...
Their feeling for each other...!!! without saying anything they can speak everything from their eyes...!!! 🥳

So CD khand is the reason for Shravan's angerness towards Sumo but she didn't do purposely... But who will make understand this khadoos...

Shravan has feeling for Sumo.. He is thinking himself that he never allowed any of his GF come closer to him... He has never kissed any girls in his life... Whenever he goes to kiss his GF Sumo's innocent face comes infront if his eyes & he never kissed any girls... He is so cute but still his ego won't allow him to think properly about Sumo... ❤️ 🤣

Update next part soon😃


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Posted: 8 years ago
#84
Wow
Amazing update
Enjoy a lot
Update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#85

Originally posted by: KitkitMkb

Great pace I hope Sumo fights back and shows him his place !


Ya she will but not as much like show.. As i told u all earlier that she is very sweet n bubbly.. Fun loving mordern.. Yet contemporary she love to live her life to the fullest.. And not at all egoistic like She was the show
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Posted: 8 years ago
#86

Originally posted by: Vinayarao

Amazing chapi piya🤗👏

Its very nice to read Pushman's. Their bonding is amazing any one can feel jealous of them shravan's thinking is not wrong... Because they share good friendship...🤪

The way Pushkar tease Sumo taking Shravan's name...

Shravan twirled around Sumo & fell down on the bed upon Sumo... Wow it was so romantic ...their eyelock...
Their feeling for each other...!!! without saying anything they can speak everything from their eyes...!!!🥳

So CD khand is the reason for Shravan's angerness towards Sumo but she didn't do purposely... But who will make understand this khadoos...

Shravan has feeling for Sumo.. He is thinking himself that he never allowed any of his GF come closer to him... He has never kissed any girls in his life... Whenever he goes to kiss his GF Sumo's innocent face comes infront if his eyes & he never kissed any girls... He is so cute but still his ego won't allow him to think properly about Sumo...❤️🤣

Update next part soon😃



Hi dear loved the way you annalyse the writing.. It means a lot to me...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: ArpitaSingh1806

Marshall ah! Priya kya likha hai. To finally 20 bday ki baat finally saamne aa hi gayi.*sigh*. Aur budhu shravan he knows he is attracted to her, yet dur baagh raha hai. Lesson to sumo. Hmmh. Let's see. Update soon😆


Thank u dear

Shravan to hai hi buddhu yahan bhi aur show mein bhi.. Lets see kaise uski akkal thkane pe aati hai
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Posted: 8 years ago
#88

Originally posted by: Sunain

Piyaaa... 🤗
tum nay tu mera dil hi loot lea 😳
Was stupendously written... 👏
hats off to u yarr ⭐️
Really loved it to core ❤️

The start was amazing...Nirmala's room Shraman scene was phenomenal indeed was grining infact still grinning like n idiot 😃 😳
Pushkar is such a tease sumtimes but isa cutoo 😆
Sumo wore the dress choose by shravab aawwwhh❤️
The flashy was 🥺 but his confession tht he cudnt makeout with someone just cuz of Sumo..tht he always missed her cudnt stop thinking bout her was❤️
N still he says he hates her though he can't stop thinking bout her 😡
Iss lawyer kay tu saray nutt dhelay hain..
theek karanay paraein gay 😆
Really really loved it n enjoyed it alot..
Piya u r sweetheart❤️
Plz plz plz plz plz PlzzZ updatw sooon cant wait to knw wht happens nxt...curiosity ka tuffan aya hua hai meray andar 😳
Love u dear 🤗



Thanku dearrr.. I was waiting for ur comments.. U made my day dear
I will update asap
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awesome update. .shravan can't stop himself from looking at sumo...shravan is planning a revenge. ...eagerly waiting for next update
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nice update priya
But i feel sorry 4 sumo
Thank you
Waiting 4 next update

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