Shraman ff: HUM TUM part 27(updated on page 144

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shaggy8

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Posted: 8 years ago

#101

Amazing... especially bhai dooj part... and thanks for the pm

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Safire

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Posted: 8 years ago

#102

Thanks for the pm!! It was a superb update with a steady and smooth flow of story line!!

And yeah,readying to see the romantic shravan😉

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Meera

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Posted: 8 years ago

#103

Awesome update...sumo Varun Nd pushkar are just amazing together...Nd ramnath sumo look like real father daughter...Loved the part when sumo was unconscious Nd shravan confessed his feelings..now shravan is going to regret for his doings... waiting for shraman romance... continue soon

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Amisha.r

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Posted: 8 years ago

#104

Ohhh! I can't explain how amazing upadate it is
Perfect just like I...I mean we...all want
Thanks for writing such a nice ff
And waiting for next one 😉

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mariajamal

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Posted: 8 years ago

#105

mindblowing ... too good yr... pmz cont soon can't wait for next update ... chaska lagliya tumnay ...

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Frosty_Moon

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Posted: 8 years ago

#106

Piya.. 🤗
Awesome update dear..❤️
Oh poor sumo..stupid shra in jealousy says all this and sumo in bad Condition...shra knows truth about Pushkar sumo being bro sis..man he has made big mistake and gonna take long to settle the mess he has created but will love how he gonna confess to her..
Aww Pushkar sumo and varun..So.sweet...
Sumo leaving house ..interesting how shra gonna stop her .
Continue soon dear..
Thnx for pm... 🤗

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Sithara

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Posted: 8 years ago

#107

Awesome update . . .

I like all the parts.

It is difficult to say which one is more good .

Off course I want ShraMan romance soon. . . . .

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nadeeka1200

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Posted: 8 years ago

#108

No words👏

Amazing

Waiting 4 next update

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WhyAmIHereAgain

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Posted: 8 years ago

#109

Oh my God. D chapter was bumper...superb...update jaldi jaldi...m dying to know what Shravan does now...

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dhanyata

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Posted: 8 years ago

#110

Brilliant one !! so many interesting secrets are out. bhai dooj is simply superb and about anuj call, Much needed slap for shravan. Now he needed to know only about the CD. After that, he can become full fledged Romeo behind sumo😳

What a condition sumo is in !! really feeling sad. No wonder, why everybody at malhotra house are so caring about her. She needed them the most.

Shravan finally understood something about this.

Ram - sumo convo was lovely. Shravan dumbfounded with the action reactions of his dad and sumo...ha hah ha😆

Shocking decision by sumo, shravan would be shattered. But this will hurt others too. I hope malhotra's won't leave her alone. As usual, nice placement of scenes, all emotions portrayed so well. Sumo's breakdown scene was amazing. Literally felt the pain. Everytime, you end the chapter with a suspense. This makes the reading more interesting yaar.

And yes, tedha shravan can go off for sometime now, so that we can see more of his love

Thanks for the pm. Please continue asap