Shraman ff: HUM TUM part 27(updated on page 144 - Page 7

Originally posted by: dhanyata

Excellent writing !!👏

I am totally in awe with the way you take the scene directions. Just feel like watching EDKV on screens with a slight different story line. Fun, affection, friendly gestures, love, jealous, anger,heart break, regret you portrayed all these emotions in this chapter.😊

sumo's monlogue "Oh bhagwan jii apne duniya mein yeh alarm kyun banaya" That was funny😆

Ramnath gifted ethnic dress for her (may be with a reason, we all, may guess😳) Nirmala and ramnath are always giving signs about an untold decision. they took a promise from her too. HA HA HA

Woah, sumo is doing the arthi, definitely she is considered the daughter of the house. feels so good.

Shravan sumo meeting was so divine (in front of mandir) and was awesome.

Pushkar sumo friendship is very pure and cute, as usual. He knew them both well and started teasing, Why not shravan pick up his hints. dumbo kahinka😡

I saw 2 beautiful things here, which I loved to see in the show. Though they may be small gestures, but for me they are sweet ones. I blame the writers of the story for missing them.

First one, shravan allowed sumo to put tikka (not happened in the show inspite of a chance).

Second, shravan family gift segment, it was too good. We get to see how much one knows about their family members and their likes dislikes.

Applause to you for bringing them.

ANGRY shravan and poor sumo.😕he was so harsh to her in the gift part.

but he bought a very beautiful gift for herhe didn't think her as baharwali. (how can he !!??)

But his anger or jealousy is not letting him to admit his feelings. How sad. Hope he sees the truth soon.

I liked all of shravan monologues, so expresses his thoughts.

Oh my God, the crying doll part. So sad, how badly she is crying. Shravan was jealous of her for taking his family's love. Poor baby. But i feel bad, that he lost his time to spend with his family all these years. But no problem, he is finally back for good.

And the flashback of teenage shraman, the glimpse of it seems so interesting. Waiting to know what exactly happened.

I like that Sumo is not intentional in any of her actions, that is so nice of her. And I always love sassy revengeful Shravan Malhotra (*evil me huh*) That is the reason I loved the initial part of the episodes very much. Later in the name of realisticity characters were spoiled😭

Wow, now diwali party is up, so eager to know what happens there. Also, looks like Vandhana aka Vandy is coming soon. So we will have marriage celebrations as well. Very excited🤪

Lastly, i am always feeling happy to see how sumo is getting all of Malhotra's love in your story. It is a definite heaven for her. Seriously hope she continues to get it throughout.

I am still struggling with withdrawal symptoms and got no idea, if i will be ever get over it.Your story is one medicine. Please update next part asap.

Khudos !!

Ohh thanks a lot for your annalysis
Actually i missed those moments which could have gave us more goosebumps
So just trying to visualise them in my own way wid a new story

Originally posted by: Vinayarao

What an amazing update ...👏👏

Emotional kar diya...😭😭

I felt tears in my eyes when Sumo was trying so hard to control her tears to fall from her eyes...😭😭 when Shravan was saying I brought gifts only for family members not for outsiders...

He is so mean.!!! Why he is hurting her so much when he knows he is hurting her he can see her tears still this tedha Shravan bhaaz nehin ata apni harkatosein... I😡😡

He has brought gift for her also but can't give her... Uff this guy kya karoon iska bhagwanji toda iska ego aur gusse ko shant karna nehin toh humari bechari Sumo aur kitna hurt hogi... I😕

What happened on his 20th birthday when he was about to kiss... did she slap him... May be that's why his friends laughed over him... That's why he has grudge on her...

Again now in Diwali party aur kya kya khand karega yeh kutub minar...

Waiting for next part eagerly...

Send PM if u can

Thank u & sorry for long comments...

Thnku for your annalysis
I m trying to unfold those past memories in nxt chapter lets see how it goes

Originally posted by: girlgunjan

Your story giving me so many feels. I am missing my shraman badly :(

Plz update asap.I'm damn excited to know how this story unfolds.

Thnk u dear m missing them too
Tht is the reason i those to write something so tht we can atleast imagine them

Piyaliii...jusr read part 2 n it was outstanding...really loved it❤️
Pushkar Varun n Sumo's trio is really cute...really love their bonding❤️
Shranan childhood flashy was damn cute..
Sumo hiding from him..n he on the other hand wanted to see her...aaawwhhh 😳
Shraman hate eachother but thy both knw thts not true...Shravan feeling jealous of Pushkar hmmm a good sign though but kya pata Shravan iss mein bhi kuch karbar kar dein...wel wht i think is Pushkar aur Varun mein koi challange ho ga regarding Sumo's diwali gift...like Sumo ko kis ka gift zyada acha lagta hai vaghaira...
N seems like Nirmala n Ramnath r cooking sumthing...seems fishy the way ramanth teased shravan n nirmala smirking at sumo...paka kuch tu hai...but jo bhi ho acha hi lag raha hai...
Thn shravan admiring her beauty...woah man tht was phenomenal..
cant stop thinkinf bout her 😳
Looking forward for more..
All in all really loved the upii..n for now m leaving to read the 3rd chappy so will post its reveiw in my nxt post..
tonz of ❤️ for u dear...u did a splendid job ⭐️

Piyalii...Hiii once again 😃

CHAP--4
it was phenomenal...
mandir part was beautiful..
Shravan jealous of pushkar..just cuz he thinks sumo choose pushkar over him...hiw stupid od him 😕
N moreover us ny sumo ki chooti he kaat dali...is he insane or wht...i mean who doz tht just for the sake of revenge 😡
Upar say he bad mouthed bout her twice n hurt her n got felt hurt himself...wel tht surely means hez deadly in love with her 😳 ..n so pushkar ki baat bhi sach ho gae..
😆
really felt bad for sumo 😕
Shravan also bought gift for her..
but in his anget n ego ussy nahi dea
really loved tht "clean bold" part...was damn hillarious 😆
Piyali really really loved it n enjoyed reading it❤️
Tonz of 🤗 for u...cant wait to knw wht happens nxt 😉
Plz update soob n dont forget to pm me 😳
N i was thinking to give u a nick name so can i call u Piya..??plzz 😳
u did a splendid job..as i had said before ⭐️

Master piece writing. Loved each and every bit of it. There was not a single part not to cherish.

Read all d updates at a go.. Loved it. Brilliant . jaldi update karo. N do let me know

Originally posted by: Sunain

Piyalii...Hiii once again 😃

CHAP--4
it was phenomenal...
mandir part was beautiful..
Shravan jealous of pushkar..just cuz he thinks sumo choose pushkar over him...hiw stupid od him 😕
N moreover us ny sumo ki chooti he kaat dali...is he insane or wht...i mean who doz tht just for the sake of revenge 😡
Upar say he bad mouthed bout her twice n hurt her n got felt hurt himself...wel tht surely means hez deadly in love with her 😳 ..n so pushkar ki baat bhi sach ho gae..
😆
really felt bad for sumo 😕
Shravan also bought gift for her..
but in his anget n ego ussy nahi dea
really loved tht "clean bold" part...was damn hillarious 😆
Piyali really really loved it n enjoyed reading it❤️
Tonz of 🤗 for u...cant wait to knw wht happens nxt 😉
Plz update soob n dont forget to pm me 😳
N i was thinking to give u a nick name so can i call u Piya..??plzz 😳
u did a splendid job..as i had said before ⭐️

Oh dear a big hug from meee.. Love the way you praise my work

Originally posted by: nileshni679

Master piece writing. Loved each and every bit of it. There was not a single part not to cherish.

Thnks dear fir liking my writing