Shraman ff: HUM TUM part 27(updated on page 144 - Page 35

Originally posted by: anonymousanju

piya thanks a lot dear for loving my analysis...m too happy that my each n every word means a lot to u :) n ur such lovely replies means a lot to me dear... thanks for the pm pehle to...:) ab tu hi bta Mai kya karu tera .. yar ur going to be the death of me :-p itni achi ff how could u write?? yar I just love u for this...a big tight hug for u darling.. :) :* from the beginning to end I was jumping in happiness...yay...n thanks a lot adi chapter clear krne k lie n for the assurance that vidhi chapter will also not create any havoc...aww that's so so sweet of u :) ab about chapter...namik k fvrt songs God they're my fvrt songs ...all four songs love them a lot ..n my fvrt song has become piya piya o piya piya, piya piya o piya. ,subh sham kare mera jiya piya piya piya piya :* now a days... starting m how sumo was numb ...lol...funny it was n how she was trying to put altogether his words that actually banda bolna kya chahra hai...rofl...fr how she shook her head pyar ni krta tha kl tk ...means ajse ..n how he asked her pyar ni krti n sumo ki to awaz hi ni nikalri thi ...hilarious n kaise sumo wrestler se bhigi billi she'd become n ni krti pyar Jane do n finally kiss ...omg.. itni easily you brought up that...amazing..n shravu ka dialog ab tmhare hawale shravan sathiyo n ye 6'4" shravu gya ...amazing dialogs they were...n then arrhhh ramu kitni buri timing hai...n sumo ko kaise shravu bola tmhari halat ni gate kholne ki tm jao Mai dekhta...lol...n fr how he was making excuses like Mai London call p tha ...sumo bathroom m hogi ya so ri hogi ...n was calling out her name...n then pale faced sumo...how shravu was teasing her bolo sumo answer kro papa ko...such a naughty Guy...n jaw dropped sumo...besharm hai ..hey bhagwan God lol...n then coffee mere lie v bnana n in kitchen how he again blocked her way n bechari vo milk...rofl...n then room m phuchana .. scared to hell she was to even go near him...n then ramu carefully asked tm thk ho na...n then sumo in shravu ka room how shravu was pacing impatiently n sumo how she ran ki sona hai...lol n how he took advantage of his qutub minar height n dragged her to her room n thanks God sumo blurred out her dilemma ki bade papa badi maa kya sochnge n her dialogs touched my heart dear...n how shravu made her understood that why everyone never let her wish him bhaidooj n rakhi ...n why his parents doesn't want her to leave them ever ...n the realization made sumo wide eyed...n again pushkie wring timing.. n how shravu said ki maa ko bolna Jo gift manga tha unhone av mil gya n his smile...wow...n shravu ka dialog itne saalo se lawyer k sth ho but dimag ghutno me h...lol... n next morning how ramu asked sumo wats wrong?? n I'm a lawyer...n sumo ka mind talk hilarious...n then ramu caught ya...n then how he asked her to think once n blushing sumo...wow.. n how she refused to wake him up but fr gyi khud ...dramaqueen...n then how a smile crept her face n nirmu ka msg wat a timing nirmu kaki ...jaldi aaja beti ko bahu banane k lie mana lia ...yieeppeee ..n alarm k bad suddenly shravu realised he hadn't set that n then realised who must be behind this... n then how he was looking here n there for her fr adi ka name sunte hi how he became angry n sumo to just know how to lower her eyes...n then shravu ka sarcasm m not late n I'll sit in front...n how jhumpa said hm jaise buddho k sth a baithega...good aunty ji ...;) n then vidhi ate k sath started flirting with shravu ...hugged him was okay but kissed...how dare she n jealous sumo n smirking shravu...lol.. I was like ye bhai bahan ko koi kam ni h kya hmare shraman ko why the hell don't they leave ... n then tigress sumo q shravu aage hi baithega adi k sth ...vidhi ka to muh bna hoga ... n then how they both excused ki they won't go n then shraman talk...how careful he got n sumo just spilled her heart out...usne kiss kia n shravu ka reply Mai hoon kon tmhara n then she started crying n then shravu v kaise tm adi k sth n sumo was like Chi tmhe lga Mai or adi ...Mai tips de ri thi ...Daphne is his gf (thanks God his chapter is closed...love u for this piya) ...n she was like tmhe lg v kaise skta Mai kisi or k sth n shravu to kiske sth jldi bolo warna kbtk khudko bacha paunga uske hotness se ya vo fr se kiss kare bolo ...arrghhh but they came...huh...n then how innocently shravu replied thought to give u some space with gf n vidhi ko sumo will sit in middle you sit that side...hihihi...funny he's...n how he asked her to sleep in his arms n she complied n then how she was smiling near her chest...so lovely...n confused vidhi friends se zyada hai kya bhai v kch zyada mante ...well ha vidhi sumo is future Mrs shravan malhotra ;) so no need to flirt with shravu...he wont give a shit to u dear :-p loved it piya ...n ha beach romance...Australia m n no beach romance...not good na. .I know you'll bring it up in next part.. waiting anxiously for next part dear...muuaahhh for this :)

Here i come with the next part
Part 12

"Hey so u guys r together??" Asked shravan
Aditya chuckled .."sumo told u rite??
ya we met during work .. N realised that we r meant tol be together.. "He took daphne's hand and kissedher..
"So is this love at first sight.. ? "Shravan asked
"Ya from my side.. Bhai bahut padad belne padte hai.. Tum kya jano shravan babu..?" Aditya laughed..
Sumo adjusted herself during sleep.. She was trying to pull herself from his chest..
"I know yaar " shravan said while pulling her back to him..
"Shravan dont you think u should leave her and let her sleep the way she wants.". Vidhi said...
"No ...i will not leave her ... Never leave her... Actually u see m tall so she can easily rest her head on my shoulder ". He smiled..
Aditya looked at shravan from the rear view mirror and smirked..."Belo belo papad belo.."
Shravan looked at him and smiled turning his head towards the window...
"What papad bhai?? I don't like papad... Ehhh its too oily.." Said vidhi making a weird face..
"Tu chup baith.." Aditya said..
"So shravan ...tell me about your life in London.. U must have had a lots of girlfriends rite..."asked vidhi adjusting her hair
"Not really.. Had a few flings but none of them worked.." Shravan shrugged
"Come on u r so soo handsome.. How come u dont have any gf?? "She narrowed her eyes..
"May be they were not made for me.." Shravan smiled looking outside through the window..

"Ohoo means Shravan malhotra the hi profile lawyer.. Beleive in fate... ?? "Vidhi said
"Absolutely yes.. "He tighten his grip on sumo..
"Why ??don't u beleive in fate?? "Shravan asked
"IAfter meeting you i want to beleive.. "She rolled her eyes..
" Bas tu ab suru ho jaa.. Shravan be careful"..aditya smirked
Shravan laughed
"Adiii shut your mouth.." Vidhi screamed

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"Hey shravan come out .. Let her take rest.. "Asked vidhi while taking off her seat belt..
Adi and daphney got out.. As they reached macD to get some refreshment..
"U go i'll come."said shravan..
"Ok "vidhi followed daphne
Adi came to him n knocked the window.." Hey bro what would u like to have ??"
"Huh?? "Shravan asked
"C'mon bro i know u r not going to leave your sleeping beauty alone in the car to get some refreshments.. So i will get it for u ... So now tell me what should i get.. "Aditya winked
Shravan blushed.. "One regular latte with one sugar.. "
"Done " adi left..
Shravan sighed and relaxed his head...
After 5 mins daphne came with his coffee and some tissues.." Hey shravan here is your coffee.". "Would like to come out.. ??"She sweetly smiled..
"No dear m perfectly alright... U guys carry on". Shravan smiled
Daphney smiled and showed thumps up to him..
Shravan adjusted a bit becoz the coffe he was holding wah really hot.
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Why the pillow m sleeping on kept on moving..
Suman wiggled ..
Ohhh my neck hurts..
She got up ..and found something similar.. She opened her eyes and she remembered the flight moments..
She pulled herself and found shravan was looking at her taking a sip of hot coffee..
"Hey lazybones.. "Shravan smiled "feeling good??"
She was looking aournd as she couldn't understand where are the others n why the car is not moving..
"Sab coffee peene gaye.. U want something?" He asked..
"Uhu "she brushed her messy hair with her hand.. She massaged the back of her neck...
"Sardard thik huya??" He asked..
"Haan woh" but she couldn't complete as shravan put the cup on tge glass holder on the side of his door..
"Good to ab mere dard ka ilaaj karo.. Plzzz bahut dard ho raha hai.."He came close to her..
"Huh?? "Suman furrowed her eyebrows..
"Haan jo dard tumne mujhe diya hai .. "He smirked
Matlab..?? She couldn't able to understand.
"Main shoulder ki dard ki baat kar raha tha..tum to aram se soti rahi aur mera halat kharap ho gaya.." He sighed
She blushed..
Ek taraf tum so rahi thi aur ek taraf vidhi so rahi thi.. He rolled his eyes..
"Vidhi ????? Vidhi kahan so rahi thi?? "She widen her eyes..
"Kyun meri dusri side pe.. Shoulder pe sar rakh ke aram se . Jaise tum so rahi thi.."he sighed with a smile..
"Tumne use kyun apne bahon me liya?? Matlab kuchh bhi haa?? Aur woh to mere side pe thi tumhare side pe kaise gaya.. Besharam ladki .. Ladka dekhna nahin ke bas.. Lipat jao ...adhi angrezz.Aur tum ...tumne use sone kyun diya?? "
Shravan was njoying her jealous ness..
"Ab Itni hot ladki paas mein ho.. Aur woh mujhe khud se hug karen aur kuchh kuchh karen to main kya karun?? Aise nazara kaun ladka dekhna nahi chahega..."He said
"Aur kuchh kuchh ? Aur kya kiya tum dono ne.. "She gulped..
"Why should i tell u.. I dont kiss and tell.." He winked
"Kisss !!!!!!!!!she whispered.. Tumne use kiss kiya??
There is a lump in her throat..
"I warned you ke if u want to tell me something to jaldi bolo before something happen. " he shrugged
" maine tumhe bola nahin bus is liye tum..." She choked
Till now shravan was njoying but seeing her seriously upset he laughed.
"Duffer i was joking."
She was looking surprisingly "Matlab aisa kuchh nahin huya ..?"
"But agar tum ab nahi bologi to main is baar zarur kuchh karunga..." He smirked
"Vidhi ke saath?? "She raised her eyebrows in shocked..
Shravan sighed helplessly "Nahin .. Mare samne jo bewakoof ladki baithi hai uske saath.."
Shuman get scared .

"Waise ekbaat to maine sach kaha.. Aisa nazara kaun ladke dekhna nahin chahega.. "Shravan bit the corner of his lower lip with a naughty smile.


Suddenly she noticed that shravan's eyes were stuck on the disheveled neckline of her black top.. She pulled her top on a proper position.. Shravan supressed his smile and lowered his head
"Has khun rahe ho..? "She asked
"U stupid der ghante se mere seene mein sar rakh ke soo rahi thi wearing a loose neck top aur ab jab duur baithi ho so u r adjusting it.. " Shravan laughed..
"Matlab tumne.." She raised his eyebrows
"I can't help it becoze sorry to dissapoint you i am not impotent .. "he raised his hands up as he is surrendered himself..
"U r wearing something blue "shravan whispered
"Shravan !!!!!! "She gasped..
"Sorrry but main kya karu..tum hi to dikha rahi thi.. Meri masoom ankhon ki kya galti hai isme..aur bhi kuch dekha huun...batau kya dekha??"..he rolled his eyes and laughed
Her cheeks were red.. She lowered her head
"Hey kya huya??"he pulled her ..
She couldn't meet his eyes..
Mujhe andaza bhi nahi tha ke sumo wrestler itna sharma bhi sakti hai.. Hey put her locks behid her ear..
"Kuchh nahi huya .. Maine hi to dekha kisi aur ne thodi dekha..hai???.."
She covered her face with her palms .
He moved her pams..
And cupped her face
He touched her eyes with his lips.. But didn't kiss.
"Shhhravan" she stammered
His lips moved to her cheek.. And he pecked a kiss..
"Stop hiding your beautiful eyes from me"shravan whispered
"Shrravan koi aa jayega. "She stammered
"Look at mee.. Sumo .. Plzzz I want to see myself in your eyes..." He asked pulling himself from her..
Suman slowly looked into his eyes.. ..
"Ab bolo jaaldiii se.. Sab a jayenge.. "He pouted
Shravan was amzed to see his reflection on her face...
She suddey pushed him andturned around opening the door she stepped out of the car blushing..leaving shravan shocked ...
"Ooof yeh ladki bhi naaa.. "He scratched the back of his head...
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Hey feeling better?? Asked aditya
"Ya much better... Just want yo use the washroom.. "Sumo said..
Before pointing the wash room aditya smirked..
"Hey what's cooking between you two??"
Sumo blushed..
He poked her arm.. "U never know may be i can help you..."
" nothing adi..." Now if your interrogation is done can i go.. " sumo shrugged..
"Dont forget to wash your face properly.. Tamatar ban gayi hai.. "Aditya laughed
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"Oyeee suman puttar teri tabiyat thik nahin thi??" Jhumar asked while she came out from the washroom.
"Nahin nahin aunty ji thodi sar dard ho rahi thi ab thik huun... "Suman smiled..
"Haiy ...To bolna chahiye tha na.." Jhumar touched her back with motherly touch.
"Suman humare saath aaja.. "Manmeet said.."adi ke car mein intni zor ki music bajta rahta hai mera bhi sar dard hota hai.."
"Ji ekdam sahi kahan.. "Humare saath chal .. Said Khushboo manmeet's elder sister who is also accompanied them..
.. Shravan was standing outside of the car while talking on phone..
He saw her coming towards him with aditya.. ..
He open the back seat door for her.. She just bend and took out her hand bag grom the car.. Shravan raised his eyebrows while talking on the phone..
Aditya was cheacking the tyers..
Suman signaled him bye by curling her fingers.. And headed towards the other car.. Leaving shravan dumbfounded..
"Where r the girls?? "Adi asked??
"Sumo kahan gayi?? "Shravan asked him ??
"Are Khushboo bua aur mumma use apne saath le liya." Aditya said
"Whattt the f**k?? "He screamed..
"R u guys together?? "Adi asked
"I m dying to be.." Shravan blurred out
"Hey congrats bro.. "Adi shaked his hand..
"No its not like that.. "Shravan said..
"Matlab..??" Aditya asked
"Matlab i confessed.. But she didn't replied.." Shravan said..
"Hey anyone can find it out the she is in love with you. "
Aditya slightly punched shravan's arm..
"Even we thought u guys r married.. "Aditya smirked
"Not yet .. "Shravan blushed...
"Hey look at u .. U r blushinggg.. "Aditya hugged him.. "Welcome to the papad belo club... "
Both of them laughed..
"Soon daphne and vidhi joined them..
Lets go .. Suman has joined mom n bua ..
Come Shravan.." Vidhi smiled.
"Mmm...Hey aditya would u mind if i drive.. Dont worry i have my international driving license wid me..". Shravan asked..
"Sure bro..."Aditya threw the car keys to him n shravan catched
Shravan sat on the driving seat while having adi beside him..leaving vidhi dissapointed...

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"So its decided that khushboo aur suman ko upar wala room de do.Vidhi daphney can share one room.. Ramnath bhai sab ko yeh wala room ..shravan and adi can share the room on upstaris.. Aur hum humare room mein .. Kya bolte ho ji.. "Asked Jhumar .
"Thik hai jii koi gal nahin.. "Manmeet unmindfully said..

They have reached the beach house of khoslas.. While jhumar was deciding the rooms Ramnath was out with shravan suman and aditya..
" hey sumo mijhe nahin pata tha tum itni achhi gana bhi gaati ho.. Mom ne bataya tumne car mein aate waqt unko gana sunaya..."
Shravan was surprised to listen dis.
"Itna bhi kuchh khas nahi .. Bas aise hi.." Suman shrugged...
"Hey lets go to the sea.. "
Aditya was pointing towards the private part of the beach which is connected to their house..
"Lets change n njoy.. "Said daphney and went inside with vidhi.
"Uncle aap chalenge??" Aditya asked
"Nahin bade papa bikul nahin agar aapko chalna hai to kaal .. Aj late ho gaya.." Sumo warned ramnath..
"Ab supreme court ne mana kar diya to kaise chalu u guys njoy it.".ramnath pouted..while shravan hide his smile..
"Tu kyun has raha hai.. Tujhe pata nahin bacchu suman ka gussa kitna khatarnak hai.. Ekbar mujhse gussa hoke 1 month baath nahi kiya usne.. " Ramnath said..and headed towards the house

Shravan was njoying witnessing the love between his dad and his sumo
"Hey shravan come... "Said aditya taking of his shoes..
"Coming!!!!! Said shravan signalling sumo to join..
..jaldi se change karke ao .. " shravan joind aditya.. Who is already in the water...
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"Suman aj to tere haath ki chaye hii peeni hai.. Tere uncle se teri cooking ki bahut tarife sune hain hum .." Said jhumar...
"Are nahin jhumar bachho ko njoy karne do .. Vidhi n aur sare bachhe already chale gaye."said manmeet.
"Koi baat nahi uncle main abhi chaye banake jaati huun..." She handed over the medicine to ramnath and smiled

Suman just came out from the toilet after changing into a dark olive green capri and a yellow tank top.. She doesn't want to wear shorts and get drenched infront of manmeet's family..
While folding the black tops Shravan's word came to her mind and she blushed..

Voh bhi sajanwa chaahe tumhi ko

Naina uthaaye to pyaar samjho

Palkein jhuka de to ikraar samjho

Rakhti hai kab se chhupa chhupaake

Apni honton mein piya tera naam

She blushed infront of the mirror and whispered
"Shravan ki sumo... Sumo ki shravan..


Ohhh god where the hell is she????
Shravan was getting impatient.. Standing in the beach..
He just took off his tshirt..
"Hey u r hot" daphne giggled...
"Shravan put on your tshirt bro ...meri gf nahi to bigad jayegi."..Aditya mockingly said...
Shravan laughed..
"Hey come bro.. "Aditya called stavan pointed towards the sea...
Suddenly he felt a tug as he turned around he saw vidhi standing in a bikini...
"Come shravan.. "She pulled him..
"You go i will just come.." Shravan pushed her hand carefully
"Come on yaar dont be spoil sport .. "She pulled shravan into the water...
"Vidhi lets wait for sumo..he said
"Yaar yeh ladki mujhe marwayegi...
Sumooo where are u..." He murmured
Shravan reluctantly followed vidhi...
There were waves as its high tidewater
Suddenly a big waves hit them
And shravan lost his balance and stumbled over vidhi...
"I am sorry did i hurt u.."shravan asked vidhi
He was trying to get up from vidhi when he heard daphne said...
"Hey suman why r u standing over there.??. Come dear join us..."
Shravan snapped his head and found suman standing behind them shockingly looking at them...
"Sumooo!!!" he gasped..
He saw sumo turned around and almost ran towards the house...
"Sumooo!!!! "He caled
He called her..
She didint stop..
Hey shravan come na.. Vidhi hold his hand..
"Excuse me vidhi.. I have to go..." He said
"Sumooo rukooo!!!! "He almost screamed
Aditya turned around and realise the situation and ran towards suman to stop her..
"Hey dont be a spoilsport.." Said vidhi
"Vidhi plzzz.. Leave my hand.." He said annoyingly
"Why r u always after her shravan... ??"vidhi asked
Because I love her dammed.. He screamed and jerked her hand and ran after her... Leaving vidhi awestrucked
He found aditya drenched in water trying to stop her.. While signaled him to come fast..
Shravan reached her..
"Sumo vidhi is immature dont take her seriously.." Aditya said..
"Hey shravan take care of her.."
He patted his back and left them
Shravan was panting..
"Summo!!!!! "he huffed...
She was not looking at him..as there were tears on ther eyes..
"Plzz sumo trust me we just fell off .. "She pulled me.."shravan tried to explain
"She pulled u ?????size dekhe ho apna ??kutub minar ...woh massom si ladki pulled you?? " she said
"Masooom??" He screamed
"U know shravan it was my fault.. U were right main bewakoof hi to huun ke tumhe apne dil ki baat batane k liye mari jaa rahi thi... U carry on with her i m sorry if I disturbd you.." She tried to leave..
Shravan hold her hand " to bol do na jo bolne ayithi..plzz dont stop yourself sumo..."
"Do u really care shravan??? "She raised her eyebrows..
He can see tears in her eyes..
He couldn't understand what to do...
Sumo pushed him and ran towards the house.
Shravan was standing on the beach helplessly
... Suddenly he felt a touch on his soulder..
"Don't worry bro everything will be alright.." Said aditya...
Shravan looked at them and sighed..
Vidhi came forward ..
"I am extremely sorryshravan i ddint know about u two.. I thought u two werejust friends... Its all my fault.. " she apologised
"Adi u should have told me earlier about them.". "Cant u see how madly they are in love with each other vidhi "aditya said wid frustration
"Ohh god what have i done.."vidhi gasped holding closing her mouth with her palms
"Dont worry shravan we will explain her everything said daphne.. "Its just a misunderstanding.. .. She added..
Shravan sighed and headed towards the house..
All he can hear Was aditya scolding vidhi...

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Suman ran towards the house.. She was feeling cramps in her stomach..
"Suman beta kya huya tu itni jaldi aa gayi?? "Asked jhumar..
She was feeling the urge to vommit..
"Woh aunty i m not feeling well.. "Everybody in the living area looked at her .. She was looking terrible
"Suman kya huya.".asked ramnath with concern
.. "Kuchh nahi bade papa .. "She blinked to hide her tears.. "Just not feeling good.. "
"Khusboo aunty can i go to your room??" She felt that something is coming out from her throat
"Ji puttar ji.. But huya kya hai??"asked khushboo
She didn't say anything
"Kuchh kha to le puttar" said jhumar..
"Bhookh nahin hai aunty... "She left the hall leaving all of them shocked..
She ran upstairs taking her luggage to khushboo's room and closed the door..
She rushed to tthe toilet.. And throw up...
She flushed and stand infront of the shower letting the cold water drenched her..
Tears was coming out ftom her eyes..
She hold her hair and cried out her heart...
She sat on the ground and hugged her knees.. And cried loudly..


The moment he entered the house his eyes was searching her.. But he failed to get a glance of her..
Then he came to know that she moved to khushboo aunty's room leaving no chance to meet her..
Khushboo aunty added that she was not feeling good thts why she needs rest..
Shravan walked toward her Room and knocked.. "Sumo!!!!
Plzzz open the door...
Sumo????
Pllzzz sumo listen to me once..
She didn't open the door..
Aditya vidhi n daphne was looking at him helplessly...

It was dinner time everybody was sitting in the dinning table..
"Are koi suman ko bulao..."ramnath said..
"Bhaisab uski tabiyat thik nahi hai..
Main thodi hi der pehle gayi thi .. Bechari ko do baar vommit bhi huyi... Usne neeche aane se mana kar diya.." Khushboo said while serving the food
Shravan's head snapped towards khushboo..
"Usne darwaza khola?? Kab??? Shyad tab jab main aur aadi humare room mein baat kar rahe the..." He thought
"She vomited?? Why??? Bahut royi hogi... Shiit man.. Definitely medicine nahi li hogi."
Main kaise usko samjhao
"Kya baat hai tum sab itni chup kyun ho??"Shravan came out from his thoughts as Ramnath asked
"Actually uncle sab tired hai.". Adi said
"Shravan is everything alright??? " Ramnath asked
"Jee papa .". Excuse me mera ho gaya.. "He got up from his chair ..
"But puttar tune to kuchh khaya hi nahi.. "Jhumar couldn't finished as shravan hurriedly went upstairs...
He entered the room and shut the door .. He leaned back on the door .. And closed his eyes.
Sumooo plzzz ek baar mujhse baat karo

Shravan its all your fault..
U should have told vidhi..
Uske jagah pe koi bhi hota to wohi samajh ta..
Khushboo Aunty ne bola she is not well..
Vommit bhi kiya.. Medicine liya hai kya??
I know nahi kiya ..
Sumo plzzz mujhse naraz hoke apne aapko saza na do .. Tum agar mujhe galat samjh ke mujhse rooth gayi toh main pagal ho jayunga

Thank you , u gave a lovely update

Amazing update... waiting for next update

Its awesome dear.. Beach romance in a different way..best part of the story is every character is positive.. Keep updating dear.. And write the next part Asap

woww...yar...amazing ...super cool plzz next part jaldi
and I am the first one

Wow... loved it ❤️ .. eagerly waiting for next

Piya...🤗

Great update again Piya. Was eagerly waiting and every update of yours is worth waiting. Loved every part. Papad belo, Shravan teasing Sumo when she woke up, jealous Sumo and of course last but not the least the beach romance. Very beautifully written. Loved when Shravan said "saans liye nahi ja rahi thi Khana kaise kha loon".
In short amazing update. Please update soon. Can't wait.

Wowww...