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piya it was mind blowing update...I was eagerly waiting for this ...from the beginning to end, each n everything was perfect...ur an amazing writer my dear...n yeah ur ryt ...songs are a good way to express ur feelings...as u use 2-3 songs in each part so, I thought of suggesting one song ...its afreen afreen ...Singer is rahat fateh ali khan ...hope this song will fit in some of ur parts :) now about the chapter...adi caught ya that shraman loves each other...n the way shravu was holding sumo man it was like seriously he wont ever leave her...n how both shravu n adi were pulling each other's legs regarding their respective gf's ...n vidhi ...how shravu ignored her...no I won't leave her...whoa man...ab to he wont ever back off I think...n then at macd how shravu refused to go n adi understood...n then sumo .. lol her assumption while sleeping why my pillow is moving...funny n then she found shravu ...n then smirking shravu now its time for u too release my pain...too naughty he's...n how he said who would want to miss such a scene...badmash...n ur wearing something blue...aww "eyes closed with palms" badmash ladka ...n then how he teased her that vidhi too was sleeping...such a tease ...n how he laughed out looking at sumo ka expression..n how sumo was cursing vidhi handsome ladka dkha ni lipatne lagi ...lol...n arrgghh sumo with aunties...shravu ka expression was same as fine...I too was like what the f**k...no sumo can't leave him without answering...the moment shravu asked her to say wat she wanted, she ran out from car n then met with adi ...who teased her...n then aunty ...and beach wala scene God hell when shravu fell over vidhi, I was praying God please no sumo come little later n then Daphne called out sumo...I was like f**k...no...n then thanks God adi stopped her n then shravu...God I hate misunderstandings...n then vidhi ...she realised her mistake...n adi scolded her...poor girl...n sumo God hell she did vomit two times n didn't come for dinner ...how she cried in shower...my heart clenched at that moment...:( then ramu asked her is shravu behind all this n she just said ghr jana hai :( how shravu didn't have dinner when heard about sumo n got tensed...aww so caring...thanks God the trio adi, vidhi n Daphne controlled the situation at dining table...n then vidhi n Daphne cleared all misunderstandings...emotional n happy moment...n their hug...it was beautiful...wanna hug u like that piya :) ur such an awesome writer...n then how khushboo aunty scolded vidhi n Daphne...lol...n whoa an excuse...good ...n how shravu was murmuring at beach n sumo just went n asked kya kia Maine...n after that total shramanlicious moments...n full moon night...so romantic...bestest beach love scene or confession scene ever :* loved that...their hug...sumo confessing her love by singing...him kissing her carefully...n realizing the other how imp they're to each other...their concern ...omg everything was perfect...the best part of ur ff is there's no negative character...that's the plus point n how you just clear all misunderstandings before it gets worst ..amazing dear...waiting for next part :)
n ha <3 sumo ka shravan, shravan ki sumo <3 loved it ...
had loved that in serial too n here too...reminded me of the scene in serial :*
love u dear...
n ha <3 sumo ka shravan, shravan ki sumo <3 loved it ...
had loved that in serial too n here too...reminded me of the scene in serial :*
love u dear...
Pyaar Kii Ye Ek Kahaani
