Shraman ff: HUM TUM part 27(updated on page 144 - Page 34

Originally posted by: mariajamal

haye.plz no rulawat b/w sharavan... let them married.peacefully

Originally posted by: mariajamal

haye.plz no rulawat b/w sharavan... let them married.peacefully

Originally posted by: maddy_edkv

Loved it.one of the best things is that there is no negative character here. And caring shravan is so cute.sumo is kinda crybaby but I guess she turns romantic soon.

Coming to this chapter shraman moments r sooo nice. waiting for sumo to confess her love for him.w waiting for beach romance.

Plz update soon as u always do and thanks for the pm

Originally posted by: Sb1185

I was sooo waiting for this! Outstanding update...i hope Suman confess soon.. And this vidhi..chipku... 🤢. Loved every bit of it. Update soon... Already waiting for next one. N thank for the pm..

Originally posted by: dhanyata

😳 piyaaa...excellent update yaar...shravan's proposal, his dialogues, sumo's reaction, her fumbling...his actions ...everything was bang on. I can't point anything particular.as my favourite.

Sumo couldn't speak, because of unexpected ramnath's entry...hahhaha...Suspense continues...

Shravan is having fun while sumo is struggling to explain ramnath...😛 Sumo's monologue 👏 "Bhagwan ji tume isse sharam naam ki koi cheez dii bhii hai ya nahi.." very funny

Shravan sumo are doing running race in the corridor or what ??? it was sooo cute.😆😆

Again shravan caught her to answer. Good thing is she shared her fear about his parents decision and shravan too, on the spot cleared that they wish to make her their Bahu (she also read Nirmal's msg ...double confirmation)...Applause to you yaar...I like it there is no messing up things.

Again, sumo escaped from replying because of Pushkar's call...Suspense continues again...

Ramnath is truely intelligent, straight he caught the point what is going on between the duo...wow...

Sumo confessed to herself at least...truly a development from her side.

Sumo is cute, she kept alarm for shravan and ran away...😉

Aditya's entry...shravan jealous...I thought we are gonna see jealous shravan throughout their journey, but no...twist...it turned to be jealous sumo...wah wah...👏

Vidhi started liking shravan...ohooo...but i see she also sensed that there is something between them...

so sumo revealed abt adi and his GF so no more jealous shravan huh ?! am happy and sad both😛 jealous shravan is treat to watch u know...but thats fine...we can manage😉

Again, sumo escaped from replying because of adi vidhi's return to car...Suspense continues again...again...

See how you brilliantly u managed without sumo's answer for the whole chapter...Good writing yaar...if she just admitted then there wont be anything interesting na...story will be over...No...we don't want this to end sooon...Please bring as many sweet twists as possible, so that we can continue enjoying the story.

As you said, waiting for beach romance eagerly very very eagerly

Originally posted by: sumi017

Nice build up Piya.. So we can get the jealous Suman now..How I wished for such a track in our series. But that never happened.

I am sure you are going to complete my wish.. So u were in to fashion industry. I have alwaya noted your dress choice s which is so apt for Nimik and was always helping me to visualize them as characters

Thank u once again for the wonderful story

Originally posted by: vimikrao

Shravan dialogues were super Matlab yeh 6ft 4inch ka admi ab gaya kaam se... Iska kuch nehin ho sakta... Ab tumhare hawale Shravan sathiyon... Mein karu iss karu iska... Yeh Shravan itna cute kyoun hai... & Sumo is fumbling... Woh ... Mein ... Woh... 🤣

When 2 birds are chirping... Wrong entry of Ramnath... & Sumo couldn't tell her feelings... Again Shravan tried her to confess love... Again kabab mein haddi Pushkar's call he wanted kill that person... Pushkar tuje aur koi time nehin mila call karne ke liye... Aur mumma ko bol jo unhone gift mangi this woh abhi abhi mila unke liye... Sumo ran away & he made her blushing... 😉

Sumo got double confirmation when she saw Nirmala msgs on Shravan's mob... & Ramnath also told her that Shravan ne jo bhi kaha usse ke bare mein sochna zaroor...

Aditya ... I thought u will bring love triangle but no be loves someone else... So relieved... 🤪

Sumo was so jealous"" jao ab mein khoun jao us adi ungrezi ladki ki pass usse kissiya lete raho... Uff jealousy @ peak... 🥳

Shravan also not behind from teasing jaldi bolo varna Vidhi ake phir se mujhe kiss karthi hai mein bala kab tak uski hotness se apne aapko bachao... 🤣

And he avoided sitting beside Vidhi... That he knows Sumo will feel bad & he gave excuse of Sumo that if sit beside window side Sumo will get direct sunlight & her its not good for her headache so cute he is... He is already protective... ❤️

Nice update yaar u can see from my comments how much I liked it...👏

Update soon

Originally posted by: LubSha

Hi Piya,

Firstly thanks for the PM. Next I would like to say that your username is crazypiya but I think Piya is making everyone go crazy. Thumps up. Love every update. Have read every update 2-3 times still get feels every time. I'm a silent reader till now, but I'll be more responsive now.

You give the characters such beautiful dialogues, simple yet relatable. I think that's your USP. Keep going, can't wait for 2 days for update, but I think you need that much to finally give us another awesome update. So no complains.

❤️

Lubna

Originally posted by: Vyshnav

These are all the moments we badly missed in EDKV! Kash yeh sab hamari show mein dikhne ko mila hotha😭

I became a big fan of yours! Every line was beautiful👏

Update it soon!

Originally posted by: trayee

piya...piya...piya...!!!!!!

each & every dialogue ...concept..emotion on the perfct place..indian tv needs a writter..no no...sprv tlntd writer lyk u...u r jst bliss...this story gives our shraman new lyf..take a bow..