Mil Jaate Hai Jo Bane, Ek Duje Ke Vaaste- Alternate ending - Completed - Page 8

Originally posted by: Joyness

Superlike...would have loved to see on screen but koi baat nahi...you wrote so beautifully...just loved it Shraman just rocked

Originally posted by: dhanyata

Finally !!! Saw our real Sumo who wouldn't believe Aditya just like that, and give him back with right amount for his misdoings.

That's what I would have loved!!!!

Starting with "Shravan trying to wake up sumo" scene is good, that is where we started losing the show in real.

I felt it started going downhill from the entire Preekar wedding track but then things could have looked up from that wake up scene but it just kept spiralling unfortunately...

Inspite of some major confrontation in the night, its cool to see Shramanalicious scene in the morning. They are true Shravan and Sumo!! The true always fighting best friends !!🤪

Love them!

So they are getting ready to sort out their issues, Now eager to see, how the truth is coming out. Nice update.

Oh brace yourself..

A lot is coming up...

Originally posted by: AMNP

Beautifully written Zoya 👏...could actually imagine these scenes virtually happening...even though they have constantly been fighting with each other, they have always cared for each other no matter what...pls update the next part soon 😊

Originally posted by: Malika

OMG Sumo punched Shravan a heart attack!! 🤣

"They would rather fight with each other than make love to someone else" woww man!!

That was amazing Zoya...do continue soon :)

Originally posted by: Faith28

Was so waiting for an alternate ending...this was so nicely written... Loved the bathroom sequence...bed par kar doongi was 🤣 Its a good start... Both have a long way to go...and they'll get there eventually😊 Pls update soon...and yes do pm me too😊

Originally posted by: pinky.padda

awesome update

absolutely loved it

continue soon

superb

Originally posted by: Wiccamaya

Jo, this is amazing ... alternate ending... and so sweet ... different. waiting for more ... ... bless you these are lifelines after show . keep writing.😊👏

Originally posted by: Flibbertigibbet

Okay so. I had to read this more than once to calm the f**k down. BECAUSE OH LORDY LORD!!

* running around screaming aaa with a stupid grin, giddy eyed, bumping into walls and jazz hands*

And I totally expected that from you 🤣

This was so good, i almost jumped with excitement but i already have my sister judging me hardcore for smiling too much into my screen at this time of the night XD

Hahaha! Usko bol Judge away!

THIS WAS SOME NEXT LEVEL AMAZEBALLSSS!!!!!

Shukriya!!!

I love it so much i dont have words sorry.

Flibb surrenders! *haath upar*

Man! That was some feat to achieve...😆

The emotions, the words, everything.

The flibbertigibbet has been renderred speechless!

The Zoya factor is very pleased 😎

Thanks for that. That amazing vision. And that towel wala shravan vision. *dreamy eyed* i'm having too much fun with this XD

You might not have so much fun with the next update though😉

Honestly, Stunning piece zoyu! Cant wait to read more!

Originally posted by: notready.

This was brilliant, Zoya!

The bathroom part 😆 so lighthearted and cute.

Can't wait for the next part :D

Originally posted by: lazyshambhavi

wow!wow!wow!

Spellbounded!!!!!👏

l am captivated by this

I like the way story is shaping.

The whole chappy left mel blushing😳

Thank you so much!!!!

Aditya is such a jerk😡

So toh hai!

"ab yahan dard nahin hota,Sumo"-so simple,yet so powerful line.My favourite

Hainaaa!!

shukriya for the gupt sandesh😆

You're the only one that caught that!!

Intelligent girl...

You'll see😳