Mil Jaate Hai Jo Bane, Ek Duje Ke Vaaste- Alternate ending - Completed - Page 7

Originally posted by: Sunain

Wel m waiting for the upii...n han do count mein da list of pm lover..lolo..do pm me i'll be waiting.. 😉
so so much excited.. 😃

Originally posted by: an_chau

RES... Will come back with a more detailed response later (once I've read the update 😉), but for now - Thank You Zoya for making the effort... ❤️

UNRES

"Bhookhe sher!" Zoya, ab kaise kaise images dikha rahi hai!!! Sharm kar...

Pehle toh, sharm thodi kam hi hai😆 Doosra aap ki soch ke aap khud zimmedaar🤣

But on a serious note, can I hug you for writing this alternate ending?

Yes you can 🤗

Sumo's lambasting of Shravan was so ridiculously worded in the show that I just huffed and puffed my way through the episode... This guy was way more than his father's son in every single way, and if anyone should've known that, it certainly was Sumo... I understood and even supported her outrage against him, but absolutely loathed the way she presented it. Ok, rant over...

Makes two! I was yelling away at the screen!!!! Ke yeh ho kya raha hai😡

Thank you Zoya for making your Shravan stand up for himself and reminding Sumo how his worth is really not tied to his dad's bank balance.

Exactly what I would have liked to see on the show, alas

That towel scene was fab! Trust these two to fight even through that moment 😉

Romance toh sab karte hai, humare wale romantic situation mai bhi ladte hai, hatke bro!

Keep writing Zoya... Fanfics keep our SS alive and well!

Will do hon!!

Originally posted by: avni01

I was looking forward for someone write an alternate ending. 😛

Originally posted by: ishraland

If you love deeply, you're going to get hurt badly. But it's still worth it." ...#ShraMan

Oho!

Maar hi daala

Alternative is delightful! !😊

I'm glad you find it so!

ShraMan have their warrior gloves on,, while letting the Shields down...😳

They are talking much,,I am liking much...😛 pyaar se pehley dosti ka fayada hai Sach...

I know right!!!!

Choti ungli makes a comeback... #FunnyMuch 😆

That was my favourite phase, happenings of then will always keep coming back😳

Aur ab aaise baithi ho jaise pani ke badle fevicol pee liya ho 😆 #SuperOneliner

Shukriya! 😃

Heart Attack! ! Really Sumo! !😆

Crazy much😉

Missed thappad ki goonj though. ..😉 Sab Mila Dilnasheen Ek Thappad ki kami...😉

Well mujhe laga zaroorat nahi thi...

But you may never know, you might just get your wish😆

Naive Sumo Affected Shravan ☺️ #ForeverBechara 🤣

Hahaha! #Phooti Kismat

Waiting for the next !

Updating soon!

Originally posted by: bindu356

I have veryyy high hopes on this ending from Zoya ...unlike our tooti Hui kismat...thank u for rewinding it.

Originally posted by: abcd00

Awesome update

Continue soon

Originally posted by: hermoinelily

Unres

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Zoya!!!!!! am spell bound mahnn!!😳

Aww man!

This s amazing!!!😃

Thank you!

How do u manage to pull this off!!!? This s next level of awesomeness!!!👏

Honestly, I don't know myself...

The bathroom punch!!! Sumos concern nd thinking she gave heart attack!!!😆

That just happened, it wasn't planned when I started writing 😆

U r one amazing writer!!!

Shukriya!

A big tight hug for the masterpiece nd the many more which r yet to come!!!🤗

Hugs back 🤗

Love u loads!!❤️

Love back ❤️

Originally posted by: Adeeba.Ayub

ZOYA :D

ADEEBA :D
I loved your take on this.

Thank you!
Their friendship, how much ever they deny , is always there.

Absolutely!
Could see that in Shravan's instant reaction on hearing about Aditya or Suman's care even though she was angry at him.

The guy was always so in love!
Loved the last para , spend life fighting with each other rather than making love to someone else.
That is them.<3

Such is love, pure and true❤️

-God bless
Much needed!
P.S: I've sent you a buddy request. Can I get a PM too ? :) <3

Of course you can!!!!

Originally posted by: pearl.white

Woah dude!! This was simply fabulous

Thank you😳
The wonderful writers on this forum have beautifully filled the emptyness of Shraman's tale.
Aww yey!
I was spellbound with your work. Your words created a virtual world.

I am dancing here!!!!

The characters were beautifully captured. I loved Her Sumo-ness in action with Aditya. She simply wrote him off. And she was so defensive of Shravan. Hats off!!

Dude! Stop! Itni tareef😳
Whining and Caring Shravan was wonderful. And loved the comebacks from Sassy Malhotra.

The man is perfect!
I was like 'Lado aur lado, ek dusre ka sir phod do but phir pyaar se dressing karna'!

Pyaar se☺️
Poor babies are so heart broken.

Indeed...
Hilarity ensued with the morning.
😆 😆 😆
That bathroom scene... Speechless!

So am I 🤣

Sumo was so adorable. Heart attack de diya Shravan ko. 🤣 Sach mei Sumo wrestler samajhti hai khudko.

Sumo is Sumo bro!
And finally the dormant hormones of Shravan Malhotra rise.

Let's hope they stay risen!

Aww!! The care, the friendship still shines in the embers of their ego.

Lovely story. Do continue.