Mil Jaate Hai Jo Bane, Ek Duje Ke Vaaste- Alternate ending - Completed - Page 9

Originally posted by: seabeauty

It's good that you took it in your hands to give the story a nice end

Originally posted by: Roshni2015

Zoya,

Come here.. Wanna give you a big hug for writing this... Alternate ending n how!!!

🤗

Aa gale lag jaa🤗

Shravan speaks up against Sumo's illogical rant if him being only due to his dad's money... I so wanted that on the show.. That episode had smoke coming out of my ears!!!

And abuses hurling from the mouth!

The towel scene... Yayy!!

Yey indeed!

These stories on SS are life savers... They keep SS alive ...

Loved reading this...

Glad 😛

And Zoya, yaar if I say that I love you again... It will be scandalous... But still I do... Coz your stories make me feel happy...

Nah its okay! Love you too!!!

It was amazing reading this...

Cheers!!

Originally posted by: -Wandstruck.

Zo.

This is awesome Jaana.

Loved the first part.

You know na , not well. Toh bada sa comment due.

Love

Sanju

Thanks for the PM.

Originally posted by: Zenab78

Superb Api
and their washroom fights are cute and funny and choli ungli
[ 🤣 you have explained both of them very well

Originally posted by: --Shraman--

Fabulous 👏

Thank you

Our expectations from the show are being written

alternate ending amazing idea👏

Originally posted by: nuttynuts

Sweet!

Originally posted by: shalz_123

Awesome zoya... Loved it. Aaah alternate ending... Sigh. So much ia still left to explore. M so happy u r doing so. Loved d first chapter. Best part was hormonal Shravan n hee suddenly realizing he is nude. Lolz

Originally posted by: jassie_17

Lollxx Zoya,thanks thanks a lot for the PM firstly!!

Anytime😊

Aur ab...yeah Aditya did have to make an entry after the phone call..Haha!!Sach mein I feel so bad for that dude..in the finite series he didn't get a proper closure!!!

#Phooti Kismat

Bhookhe sher???I had thought of a wounded tiger but not a bhookhe sher for sure haha..

For us na, for Aditya he won't be a zakhmi sexy beast na😆

And what a humour sense Shravan had while irking Sumo..And the punch on his bare chest...Lollxx. Sumo does get so carried away with her deep concern for Shravan whether he's shirtless or not..The narrative just makes me visualise of Chote Shravan who enjoys passing remarks on Sumo...

They were the best...

Yes they have lots of issues to sort out and thank God they're on talking terms...All-in-all a light-hearted beginning to the short shots of Shravan and Sumo post marriage...

Light hearted so far.. Aage aage dekho hota hai kya...

Looking forward to more!!!

Cheers,

Jassie

Originally posted by: Sithara.Soman

You are an excellent writer Zoya.Keep Writing!!!!!! 👏👏