Mil Jaate Hai Jo Bane, Ek Duje Ke Vaaste- Alternate ending - Completed

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Ameesha

@Ammiey

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Posted: 8 years ago

#51

Zoya!!!

Omg!!

What a storyline and u know what i had a lot a lottt fun reading this specially the morning scenes

Loved the way u brought out the truth about shravan

And night was a bit hectic but then everything was resolved in the morning with a fresh sunlight!!

That scene where shravan yells!!

The hell is wrong with you woman! Bacchi nahi ho, control karo!

🤣🤣

I just couldnt control my laughter the whole thing when she was rubbing his bare chest and his eyes went there... Ahem! 🤪

Awesome

And that part too where he asks ab nai jana ya tumne bed pr hi apna kaam kar diya!!!

Ohh god all in all im still smiling hard and laughing remembering these scenes 🤣

Awesome piece zoya!!!

Do pm me next time u update! 😳

Love

Ameesha⭐️

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Lara / Clara

@devilaonmoon

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Posted: 8 years ago

#52

Aditya's first sentence got me in the laughter maniac mode - "Bhuka sher." lol 🤣

And then he was throwing stones at their window. Man! 😆

Then ShraMan nokjhok just... 🤣 🤣 The entire conversation was hot and so funny at the same time. ☺️

Want next updt soon. Take care.

Edited by devilaonmoon - 8 years ago

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sapphire3

@sapphire3

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Posted: 8 years ago

#53

Zo I'm terribly late ...sowieee
Maafi milegi na?
Coming to the update.

Humara super sanskari shravu ...bhookha sher 🤣 🤣
Looks like aditya knows him better than sumo🤣
Shravu's mood switches from irritated to concerned within secs hearing aditya's name.
Sumo threatening him to pee on his bed was damn hilarious 🤣
Chhoti ungli se angootha dabao amd return of pushpa 😆 ...wo bhi kya din the ...sigh!!
Punch se heart attack 😲 ...sumo beta tu dhakkan hi rahegi 😆
Looks like shravu ke hormones functional ho gye 😆
N his dhakkan biwi is still clueless what this proximity is doing to him 😆
That vishesh tippani dialogue was epic !!!
Tum nange kyun ho 🤣
By god Zo tere dialogues ekdam seeti mar hote hai 🤪
Ab itna kuch likha hai to do i need to tell you that I loved the chappy ❤️
Ekdam jhakkas!!!!!!
Love you to the moon and back ❤️

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Silverrmoon

@Silverrmoon

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Posted: 8 years ago

#54

Zoya Superb 👏 I loved this kind of ending its so much better ... you are a gifted writer and I love reading your works yaar ⭐️ ...Keep writing more dear...will keep popping in between...Till then take care.

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sapphire3

@sapphire3

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Posted: 8 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: Perpetuity
Pri 🤗

Resh 🤗
Ye kam hum yaha kyun kar rhe hain ? 😆
AT me ati hu 😆

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Reshma Ahmed

@Perpetuity

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Posted: 8 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: sapphire3

Resh 🤗
Ye kam hum yaha kyun kar rhe hain ? 😆
AT me ati hu 😆

Ha aa ja. Maine avi tak yeh update padha hi nhi. Zoyi ko lga hoga maine comment kia hai update pe 😆

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sapphire3

@sapphire3

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Posted: 8 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: Perpetuity
Ha aa ja. Maine avi tak yeh update padha hi nhi. Zoyi ko lga hoga maine comment kia hai update pe 😆

Kar de comment maate 😆

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sahiba402

@sahiba402

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Posted: 8 years ago

#58

res
thanks for the PM zoya.

unres.
oh it was so good yar.
romcom😃
dialogues were superb zoya😳
pm me next part too🤗

Edited by sahiba402 - 8 years ago

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orion23

@orion23

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Posted: 8 years ago

#59

Originally posted by: nith125
Beautifully written Zoya ! Loved it ❤️
Looking forward to read the rest of it

Thank you so much Nith😳

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orion23

@orion23

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Posted: 8 years ago

#60

Originally posted by: castile
Res
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Zoya🤗
Had been waiting all this while for this post and here you are!
I can clearly imagine those two here 😳
Yeh Chomu ki toh me 😡
But our Sumo wrestler is more than enough for him 😆
I can so damn imagine our very own man-child grumbling and hissing-sissing at being woken up 😆 (made only possible cuz of Namik's flawless bedazzled looks and acting prowess
And then his reaction on Chomu...reflects us fandom peoples' emotions 😛
Yeh 'Sab Kuch' hum sab kaa piccha kab choode gaa
Bas bolne me hi reh gaya...hum kuch dekhe toh mila hi nahi iss pure sab kuch me 😕
And then of course...Mr. Hot Pants in a towel
And Sumo... 🤣 🤪
'Mere kapdon per vishesh tippani... 😆 '
Meri maa dimaag kahan hai?!
'Tum nange kyun ho?!'
Aankhe bhi bech aayi kya?!
But she is adorable!!
I swear I was trying to hold back my howls at this point so as not to wake up the entire neighborhood! He he he
And heart attack toh hume aaraha hai...!!

I just can't wait for the next chappy!! Pls update soonish!!