Mil Jaate Hai Jo Bane, Ek Duje Ke Vaaste- Alternate ending - Completed

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nancynair

@nancynair

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#41

Wonderfully written

If only this could have happened

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Sunain

@Sunain

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#42

Woaw...tht was sumthng i was waiting for...u just nailed it..completly
The way u potrayed their predicament was outstanding..n the bathroom part along with the towel one were fabalous..Zoya Zoya Zoya...love u yar..u hav done a stupendous job so a tight one for u.. 🤗
Plz continue soon cant wait...its lifeline

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ritu

@Rikta97

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#43

Shravan saying "todha piche ho jao aur ye todha sahi kar lo" cracked me up 🤣

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814741

Suspended

Posted: 8 years ago

#44

Woww that was an amazing one. A complete mixture of romance, comedy, friendship, fights, innocence, ego and what not. I was smiling the whole time and my mum was staring at me weirdly😆. Plsss continue soon ab EDKV k bina din nahi guzarta😔

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1095142

Hibernated

Posted: 8 years ago

#45

Hey zoya, thanks for the pm and trust me I was waiting for this since the day u posted that suggestions thread, I even mentioned it in my post. This piece was worth the wait👏, my bloody biased mind literally imagined Namik in the shirtless scenes😳. I am really waiting for the next update. Update soon and pls do pm me. 👏

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Safire

@Safire

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#46

The write-up was realy wonderful👏 i look forward to your update! For the past one week i am watching and researching the last episode! Ab all of yours os/ts yehi tho hain mere liye ek thalli!!!!!