Mil Jaate Hai Jo Bane, Ek Duje Ke Vaaste- Alternate ending - Completed

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Zenab

@Duskyylilac

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 8 years ago

#31

Superb Api
and their washroom fights are cute and funny and choli ungli
[ 🤣 you have explained both of them very well

Edited by Zenab78 - 8 years ago

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--Shraman--

@--Shraman--

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Posted: 8 years ago

#32

Fabulous 👏

Thank you

Our expectations from the show are being written

alternate ending amazing idea👏

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WhyAmIHereAgain

@WhyAmIHereAgain

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#33

Awesome zoya... Loved it. Aaah alternate ending... Sigh. So much ia still left to explore. M so happy u r doing so. Loved d first chapter. Best part was hormonal Shravan n hee suddenly realizing he is nude. Lolz

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Jaslin

@jassie_17

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#34

Lollxx Zoya,thanks thanks a lot for the PM firstly!!

Aur ab...yeah Aditya did have to make an entry after the phone call..Haha!!Sach mein I feel so bad for that dude..in the finite series he didn't get a proper closure!!!

Bhookhe sher???I had thought of a wounded tiger but not a bhookhe sher for sure haha..

And what a humour sense Shravan had while irking Sumo..And the punch on his bare chest...Lollxx. Sumo does get so carried away with her deep concern for Shravan whether he's shirtless or not..The narrative just makes me visualise of Chote Shravan who enjoys passing remarks on Sumo...

Yes they have lots of issues to sort out and thank God they're on talking terms...All-in-all a light-hearted beginning to the short shots of Shravan and Sumo post marriage...

Looking forward to more!!!

Cheers,

Jassie

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Sithara

@Sithara.Soman

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#35

You are an excellent writer Zoya.Keep Writing!!!!!! 👏👏

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arshuaar

@arshuaar

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#36

Awesome ..
beautifully penned...
Loved it. ...
thank you for the wonderful writing...
... thanx for PM ...😊

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Season

@Priyodorshee

Stunner

+ 9

Posted: 8 years ago

#37

Zoyaaa 🤗
I'm late

I've read while I was half sleepy - half awake...I mean after getting ur PM & then forgot to comment!

Now have read it again...it worth reading hundreds times...this is sooo good

And update jaldi jaldi...can't wait... 😳

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indranigupta

@indranigupta

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#38

Zoya😳😳

I loved it...what an awesome alternate ending...kaash aisa kuch hota...Dil ko sukoon milta...Par nahin...hamara show his ajeeb tha...aur hum usse zyaada ajeeb😃😆

Absolutely loved it...